Heart Duel
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Chapter 13: The Miyanokian Ball
Louise had just finished helping me into my Miyanokian costume. It was in my favourite colour - blue. The navy blue under garment felt smooth against my skin, as was the sky blue robe that had been drawn tight under my bosom. The short turquoise blouse was my favourite part of the ensemble. My hair was tied into a knot, with Kaelen's hairpin stuck through it.
I was looking forward to the adoption ball, which was to occur in an hour or so, and just couldn't wait to see the look on everyone's faces. Aunt Mel, Mother, Liara and I had given everything we had before achieving the desired effect; nothing was overboard, but everything was meant to impress. The Si Shan Wu was to be the main event and finale, and had been the talk of the court since we had started searching for the performers.
The Clear quartz! How could we have forgotten about it?
I was starting to panic, desperately trying to remember where I had heard of it before. My first thought was to inform Aunt Mel of the problem at hand, and left hastily for the Royal Wing, cursing myself for my forgetfulness all the way. As I approached the finely carved doors, the servants opened them for me with a bow.
Aunt Mel turned from the window and Uncle Danric looked up from his work when I entered the study. "What is it, Lana?" asked Aunt Mel, before I could even greet them.
She was dressed in green: dark green undergarment, jade green robe and emerald green blouse. In fact, our costumes were almost identical. Smiling to Uncle Danric, I replied, "We forgot about the Clear quartz!"
She frowned in confusion, but that frown smoothened and was replaced with a smile when realisation dawned on her. She didn't seem worried! "You mean the Clear quartz for the Si Shan Wu?"
I nodded eagerly.
With a laugh and a flick of her fan, she dismissed my worries by stating that she had borrowed one from Lord Felix after I had mentioned his idea to her. "How did you know Lord Felix had one?" I asked, recalling that I had spotted him buying one at the fair.
"He was the one who suggested it, I thought it only natural that he should know where to get one."
"Don't you find it suspicious how he specifically mentioned a Clear quartz, my dear?" interrupted Uncle Danric, pausing in his writing to look at his wife inquiringly.
At this, we both turned to stare at him in confusion. He would've shrugged had he not been raised as a courtier, although the same could not be said for Derrick. But he only raised his eyebrows slightly and explained that he just had a nagging thought at the back of his head. Aunt Mel dismissed his fears as folly in his old age, but I had a feeling that she did it just to calm me down.
As I left the study at the request of my aunt, I turned to see her closing the doors and a last glimpse of Uncle Danric in his costume of white, grey and silver. Although a burden had been lifted from my shoulders, another had taken its place. I just couldn't put my finger on it!
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(A/N: Its basically description from here, with a few cute scenes here and there. Skip it if you must, but it means that I've been typing for nothing. In case you're wondering, I'm playing on guilt here. There will be much lesser/no description AFTER the next author's note!)
The planning was for this: the smiles on Derrick and Naria's faces, the compliments of the guests and the surge of pride I felt at that moment. I was one of the first to arrive at the ballroom, and was once again bowled over by the fact that we had managed to plan all this in such a short period of time.
Dressed in traditional Miyanokian costume, and surrounded by a Miyanokian- themed ballroom, I felt as if I had been transported back in time and was in the midst of a Miyanokian Royal Ball.
As the minutes passed, more and more of the guests arrived, and partook of the dainty finger foods while waiting for the honoured two to arrive. I went to stand with my family as a gong sounded, signalling the arrival of Derrick and Naria. They looked resplendent in their robes of red, yellow and gold. Gold headpieces adorned their heads, and they smiled at the gathered guests as they made their way down the length of the ballroom.
Uncle Danric and Aunt Mel beamed as their son led his wife-to-be to her seat, before kneeling at his own place and acknowledged their presence with a regal nod of his head and a smile. He looked so serious yet so happy at the same time!
Every thing was perfectly controlled. From the way the food was served to how people greeted each other. It was the Miyanokian way of life - order. And it was in this way, that the guests took turns to make their way to the Royal couple to express their congratulations. The men bowed with their hands clasped at the front, while the women placed their folded hands on their right hip and bobbed a curtsy.
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After every one had had their fill of the delicious array of food, the performances began. As the guests seated themselves on the small cushions placed along the perimeter of the dance floor, Aunt Mel began weaving her spells.
The majestic illusions caused all of us to gasp in delight and laugh with pleasure. But it was the illusion of a golden dragon and phoenix encircling each other as they flew above our heads that made everyone fall silent in undisguised awe. Aunt Mel had certainly outdone herself.
As the applause died down, ten singers, a harpist and a flutist took centre stage. As the first strains of an ancient love song echoed through the ballroom, I caught fleeting glances between various lovers and couples alike.
"I have a gift of love"
That was not surprising, as although few could understand the beautiful lyrics, most could guess their meaning. What surprised me though, was the fact that I had not one, but two pairs of eyes focused on me.
"That I wish to present to thee"
I received two different reactions when I risked a glance at each, maintaining eye contact for as long as I dared.
"It represents my undying love"
The first pair of eyes I met made butterflies flutter in my stomach, but quickly averted their gaze when they locked on to mine, causing me to smile a secret smile and blush. The second pair was much more intimidating, as they seemed to sear through my very soul, and expressed a variety of emotions, many of which I could not define. I lowered my eyelids to break eye contact first.
"Thou must cherish it dearly"
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Last but not least, was the Si Shan Wu. The female dancers ran on to the dance floor in single rows, from the various servants' doors as the fast tempo music began, their skirts and sleeves billowing out behind them. The four lines of dancers coiled around each other with ever increasing speed, in pace with the music - which suddenly ceased, giving way to silence - to form a circle.
All was still as we waited to see what would happen next. Then came the slow melody. As the dancers' bodies swayed to the music, those on the perimeter of the circle slowly lowered themselves to form an inverted cone- like formation. The chime of a sole finger cymbal made them flick open their pink and white fans with a flourish.
As they slowly wiggled their shoulders in time to the music, lowering their torsos backwards while waving their fans. The whole display made it seem like a blooming lotus. When the "blooming" was complete, a solo female dancer rose out of the middle of the formation, her head turning rhythmically from side to side. And there was the Clear quartz hanging from her swan-like neck!
All those present were mesmerised by the sight of that glittering gem as it caught the light, seemingly like a star twinkling in the night. It was then that a sudden gust of wind blew through one of the balcony doors, sweeping through the entire ballroom, causing me to feel as if a charge of energy had just been released. Thus, the Clear quartz - or the Stone of Power - had done what it was believed to do: bringing the energy of the stars into the soul.
The male acrobats followed soon after, twirling their blue and green sashes as they turned somersaults and executed high kicks and jumps. Then they each paired off with a female dancer, breaking the cone formation.
The performance become more vigorous from that point on, as the dance steps - which required the male acrobats to enthral the female dancers with their swirling sashes, and the female dancers to act coy, while flirting and smiling behind their fans - seemed to portray the Miyanokian courtship rituals. Another chime of the finger cymbals slowed their pace, and finally came to a rest.
Some of the audience began to clap, thinking that that was the end of the performance, but were surprised when the performers began offering sashes to the men and fans to the ladies. Those who received the proffered items, such as myself, were then invited to dance, after pairing off. While all this was going on, the lead female dancer and male acrobat presented Naria with the Clear Quartz, which was dangling on a fine thread of silver. Derrick helped her to wear it, and they both joined in the dancing.
(A/N: Too much description, I know, but its too late, the damage has been done, and I find it a waste to delete over a thousand words. To those people who hate descriptions, I apologise, so don't mention the abundance of it in your review. *Sighs dramatically* I personally find descriptions boring too, but I like "watching" scenes played out in my head, thus, I go to great lengths to aid my reader in seeing what I see.)
I had paired off with Lord Felix, and was not surprised to see Kaelen in the company of Lady Tamora.
"Congratulations on a job well done," said Lord Felix with a smile.
"The same to you for a splendid idea. Although I cannot claim all the credit for the result," I replied as we circled each other, I with the fan half open and covering the lower part of my face, and him twirling the sash.
The dance required the couples to remain eye contact at all times, as was not true love enkindled by gazing into the windows of one's soul? But as I stared into Lord Felix's ice blue orbs, I felt neither pleasure nor warmth, much less the buds of true love.
"Thank you for allowing us to borrow your Clear Quartz," I said with a smile, trying to keep that suspicious tone out of my voice.
"It was no trouble at all, and it certainly proved to be useful, didn't it?"
Useful for what?
The obvious answer to that question was that the Clear quartz had made the Si Shan Wu more authentic, but what about the obscure one?
I didn't answer his question, focusing all my attention on executing the Si Shan Wu, and instead of gazing into his eyes I was staring at his ear instead. He shifted his head slightly to recapture my gaze, startling me.
"Is something wrong, Lady Tylana?"
Flustered, I replied, "Uh - I was just thinking, about how happy Derrick and Naria are."
He glanced at the said pair as they smiled at each other almost, dreamily. Now that was a smile shared only by lovers! "I'm sure their happiness will last."
Was it just me, or was that sarcasm?
As the dance ended, Lord Felix kissed my hand the same way he did when we were in the library. Although he did not linger longer than was necessary, I had a feeling that everyone knew what we were up to. Not that I was up to anything!
I had to admit that Uncle Danric's suspicions had made me wary of Lord Felix. Whether that was a good or bad thing, was unclear to me, for I had just begun to consider him as a possible life partner. This analysis only takes into consideration his status, wealth and connections. Of course, being the son of the woman who had attempted to kill the present king does not work in his favour, but that did not make him any less popular with the women in court. In fact, we were even more intrigued by him!
Was my interest in him then, just an interest and nothing more?
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Lord Felix left me very much alone after the adoption ball, but I was grateful for his absence as his presence made me uncomfortable, since his actions and words often had double meanings.
Some weeks after the adoption ball, he had asked me to show him the throne room. Thinking that it would do no harm for him to visit his uncle, I led him to the said area. He admired the high windows and newly tiled floor, which was decorated with vines, blossoms and birds. He reserved most of his attention for the great goldenwood tree, of course. Reaching up three stories, the goldy-silver leaves brushed the dome of glass that Uncle Danric and Aunt Mel had made when that tree so suddenly took root.
He seemed eager for a closer look, but restrained himself just long enough to ask for my permission. I waved my fan in the Approval mode, and he took a hesitant step up the dais, slowly placing his hands on its trunk. As he bowed his head in what seemed like meditation, I spied a jewel tumble out from under his shirt. It glittered in the sunlight, awakening my memories of the Si Shan Wu. It was the Clear Quartz.
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The ball had ended a month ago, but I believe the sense of satisfaction will never leave me. In fact, I'm still glowing from the after effects!
Although I was "glowing" and in the pink of health, Naria was not faring as well. She had taken ill about a week after the ball, and what started as a headache and a fever, had now developed into bouts of nausea and spells of dizziness.
Rumour had it that she was pregnant, and since she was not married as yet, it caused much talk amongst the servants as well as the courtiers. However, none were brave enough to enquire the truth from those involved.
In truth, no one knew exactly what was wrong with her, and what had caused her symptoms. She knew for a fact that she was not pregnant, as she and Derrick had not slept together, and she still had her monthlies. This only made us more worried, but did not mean that the wedding could be postponed.
The wedding went as planned, and was much simpler as compared to the lavishness of the adoption ball. It was a public ceremony, allowing commoner and courtier alike to watch the proceedings. But as soon as that was done, the Royal family and their immediate family retreated to the Royal Wing.
Then came the debate of whether or not the newlyweds should travel to Erev- li-Erval, thereby risking Naria's safety and her life, in her weakened state. It was then decided upon by the majority of us - including Naria and Derrick - that all would be played by ear, but that I would accompany them no matter what.
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Naria did get better, and we set off for Erev-li-Erval in autumn. I looked forward to the change of surroundings and meeting the Royal Family, and Naria told me all about them as we travelled in the carriage.
Sometimes, Kaelen or Derrick, or both, would join us in the carriage, or ask after us as they rode by, and it was during these times in which we thoroughly enjoyed each other's company and fully appreciated the support we gave one another during that long and arduous journey.
Besides making progress on the road, I also began learning to ride in earnest. I had read the book on horse riding Derrick and Naria had given me, and could practically recite it from cover to cover. But I was in need of hands on work, and who better to teach me then Kaelen?
He proved to be a wonderful teacher, patient and kind, yet constantly pushing me to the limit. Whenever I made an improvement, little though it may be, he would always heap praises on me; till I had to tell him to tone it down a notch, or else I'd lose my focus because of all that praise.
He found that funny, and began telling me of how proud he was when he first learned how to ride, and attempted to jump over a fence just a week after mastering the skill of horse riding.
"The blasted horse threw me off! I broke my arm, and suffered multiple bruises, though none as big as the one on my ego," he added ruefully. "There I was, lying in the mud, with all my friends laughing at me!"
As I didn't have a horse of my own, he allowed me to borrow his chestnut mare, whose name as it turned out, was Aysharra. Curious as to why a man like him would give his horse such an uninspiring name, I asked him for the reason behind it.
"She is just a horse, as I am just a man. We need no titles or poetic names to be truly loved and cherished," he replied, patting her on the muzzle as he led her by the reins.
"I see," I answered, nodding my agreement. "Does that mean that the two of you are totally devoted to one another?"
The laughter was evident in his eyes as he inclined his head to regard me, and he mock solemnly replied, "We were, for the most part of our lives, but she began flirting with stallions a while back, at the stables in Remalna."
"I presume you were heartbroken?" I asked, holding back my laughter.
"At first." He nodded, "But I found my attentions drawn - elsewhere."
'To a particular lady?' I thought. Was he referring to Lady Tamora? My stomach clenched involuntarily at the thought.
Striving to keep the conversation light, I continued, "Was she as heartbroken as you were, then?"
"Perhaps," he replied, glancing at his horse, "But she seems to have gotten over it."
My riding lessons continued throughout the entire journey, and I was steadily improving. When I was finally able to ride unaided, we celebrated by racing with the other riders. Naturally, I lost, but I still had to thank Kaelen for his time and effort taken to teach me. So I presented him with a Moonstone clasp. Known as the Traveller's Stone, it was a talisman for good fortune, and provided protection against the perils of travel.
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*A/N: This chapter is short as compared to the rest. Its slightly more than 3000 words - including the whole chunk of description. My own comments on this chapter: Rather boring, though somewhat ominous. I'm quite sure foreshadowing is there, and I hope that you've gained yet another insight into Kaelen's personality.
Most of you would've guessed that Lord Felix is up to no good, but you don't know what he's up to exactly, right? But you can't be too sure that he is mean through and through, can you? And Naria's mystery illness, what did it mean? Something for you guys to think about, and tell me what you thought of as you read this chapter. QUESTION: Would anyone like Naria to be pregnant? I know I said she wasn't, but people, as in the healer, make mistakes!
I didn't mention whom Lana was glancing at, but I'm sure you guys are smart enough to guess who was who. But we all love a little mystery, and it was a cute scene.
Also, I just learned that Flower Days are supposed to be held when people are in their twenties, or something. So don't mind that I made it a sweet sixteen kind of thing, okay?
Lastly, this chapter has moved the story WAY ahead, so it seems that Heart Duel will be COMPLETED in a while. I don't know whether to laugh or cry at this, but rest assured that there will at least be 5 more chapters, and for all you know, it might not be that short after all!
People who Deserve Special Mention: Meghan for beta-reading this chapter, and giving me her comments! This is the IMPROVED and LENGTHENED version. The reviewers who LOVE my descriptions. Maybe that is too strong a word? But the exaggeration is to make the others feel guilty. =) My sister, also known as Valsong, who just gave me a FANTASTIC idea. I know what is going to happen in the next chapter! YAY!
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Disclaimer: See previous chapters
Chapter 13: The Miyanokian Ball
Louise had just finished helping me into my Miyanokian costume. It was in my favourite colour - blue. The navy blue under garment felt smooth against my skin, as was the sky blue robe that had been drawn tight under my bosom. The short turquoise blouse was my favourite part of the ensemble. My hair was tied into a knot, with Kaelen's hairpin stuck through it.
I was looking forward to the adoption ball, which was to occur in an hour or so, and just couldn't wait to see the look on everyone's faces. Aunt Mel, Mother, Liara and I had given everything we had before achieving the desired effect; nothing was overboard, but everything was meant to impress. The Si Shan Wu was to be the main event and finale, and had been the talk of the court since we had started searching for the performers.
The Clear quartz! How could we have forgotten about it?
I was starting to panic, desperately trying to remember where I had heard of it before. My first thought was to inform Aunt Mel of the problem at hand, and left hastily for the Royal Wing, cursing myself for my forgetfulness all the way. As I approached the finely carved doors, the servants opened them for me with a bow.
Aunt Mel turned from the window and Uncle Danric looked up from his work when I entered the study. "What is it, Lana?" asked Aunt Mel, before I could even greet them.
She was dressed in green: dark green undergarment, jade green robe and emerald green blouse. In fact, our costumes were almost identical. Smiling to Uncle Danric, I replied, "We forgot about the Clear quartz!"
She frowned in confusion, but that frown smoothened and was replaced with a smile when realisation dawned on her. She didn't seem worried! "You mean the Clear quartz for the Si Shan Wu?"
I nodded eagerly.
With a laugh and a flick of her fan, she dismissed my worries by stating that she had borrowed one from Lord Felix after I had mentioned his idea to her. "How did you know Lord Felix had one?" I asked, recalling that I had spotted him buying one at the fair.
"He was the one who suggested it, I thought it only natural that he should know where to get one."
"Don't you find it suspicious how he specifically mentioned a Clear quartz, my dear?" interrupted Uncle Danric, pausing in his writing to look at his wife inquiringly.
At this, we both turned to stare at him in confusion. He would've shrugged had he not been raised as a courtier, although the same could not be said for Derrick. But he only raised his eyebrows slightly and explained that he just had a nagging thought at the back of his head. Aunt Mel dismissed his fears as folly in his old age, but I had a feeling that she did it just to calm me down.
As I left the study at the request of my aunt, I turned to see her closing the doors and a last glimpse of Uncle Danric in his costume of white, grey and silver. Although a burden had been lifted from my shoulders, another had taken its place. I just couldn't put my finger on it!
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(A/N: Its basically description from here, with a few cute scenes here and there. Skip it if you must, but it means that I've been typing for nothing. In case you're wondering, I'm playing on guilt here. There will be much lesser/no description AFTER the next author's note!)
The planning was for this: the smiles on Derrick and Naria's faces, the compliments of the guests and the surge of pride I felt at that moment. I was one of the first to arrive at the ballroom, and was once again bowled over by the fact that we had managed to plan all this in such a short period of time.
Dressed in traditional Miyanokian costume, and surrounded by a Miyanokian- themed ballroom, I felt as if I had been transported back in time and was in the midst of a Miyanokian Royal Ball.
As the minutes passed, more and more of the guests arrived, and partook of the dainty finger foods while waiting for the honoured two to arrive. I went to stand with my family as a gong sounded, signalling the arrival of Derrick and Naria. They looked resplendent in their robes of red, yellow and gold. Gold headpieces adorned their heads, and they smiled at the gathered guests as they made their way down the length of the ballroom.
Uncle Danric and Aunt Mel beamed as their son led his wife-to-be to her seat, before kneeling at his own place and acknowledged their presence with a regal nod of his head and a smile. He looked so serious yet so happy at the same time!
Every thing was perfectly controlled. From the way the food was served to how people greeted each other. It was the Miyanokian way of life - order. And it was in this way, that the guests took turns to make their way to the Royal couple to express their congratulations. The men bowed with their hands clasped at the front, while the women placed their folded hands on their right hip and bobbed a curtsy.
~*~
After every one had had their fill of the delicious array of food, the performances began. As the guests seated themselves on the small cushions placed along the perimeter of the dance floor, Aunt Mel began weaving her spells.
The majestic illusions caused all of us to gasp in delight and laugh with pleasure. But it was the illusion of a golden dragon and phoenix encircling each other as they flew above our heads that made everyone fall silent in undisguised awe. Aunt Mel had certainly outdone herself.
As the applause died down, ten singers, a harpist and a flutist took centre stage. As the first strains of an ancient love song echoed through the ballroom, I caught fleeting glances between various lovers and couples alike.
"I have a gift of love"
That was not surprising, as although few could understand the beautiful lyrics, most could guess their meaning. What surprised me though, was the fact that I had not one, but two pairs of eyes focused on me.
"That I wish to present to thee"
I received two different reactions when I risked a glance at each, maintaining eye contact for as long as I dared.
"It represents my undying love"
The first pair of eyes I met made butterflies flutter in my stomach, but quickly averted their gaze when they locked on to mine, causing me to smile a secret smile and blush. The second pair was much more intimidating, as they seemed to sear through my very soul, and expressed a variety of emotions, many of which I could not define. I lowered my eyelids to break eye contact first.
"Thou must cherish it dearly"
~*~
Last but not least, was the Si Shan Wu. The female dancers ran on to the dance floor in single rows, from the various servants' doors as the fast tempo music began, their skirts and sleeves billowing out behind them. The four lines of dancers coiled around each other with ever increasing speed, in pace with the music - which suddenly ceased, giving way to silence - to form a circle.
All was still as we waited to see what would happen next. Then came the slow melody. As the dancers' bodies swayed to the music, those on the perimeter of the circle slowly lowered themselves to form an inverted cone- like formation. The chime of a sole finger cymbal made them flick open their pink and white fans with a flourish.
As they slowly wiggled their shoulders in time to the music, lowering their torsos backwards while waving their fans. The whole display made it seem like a blooming lotus. When the "blooming" was complete, a solo female dancer rose out of the middle of the formation, her head turning rhythmically from side to side. And there was the Clear quartz hanging from her swan-like neck!
All those present were mesmerised by the sight of that glittering gem as it caught the light, seemingly like a star twinkling in the night. It was then that a sudden gust of wind blew through one of the balcony doors, sweeping through the entire ballroom, causing me to feel as if a charge of energy had just been released. Thus, the Clear quartz - or the Stone of Power - had done what it was believed to do: bringing the energy of the stars into the soul.
The male acrobats followed soon after, twirling their blue and green sashes as they turned somersaults and executed high kicks and jumps. Then they each paired off with a female dancer, breaking the cone formation.
The performance become more vigorous from that point on, as the dance steps - which required the male acrobats to enthral the female dancers with their swirling sashes, and the female dancers to act coy, while flirting and smiling behind their fans - seemed to portray the Miyanokian courtship rituals. Another chime of the finger cymbals slowed their pace, and finally came to a rest.
Some of the audience began to clap, thinking that that was the end of the performance, but were surprised when the performers began offering sashes to the men and fans to the ladies. Those who received the proffered items, such as myself, were then invited to dance, after pairing off. While all this was going on, the lead female dancer and male acrobat presented Naria with the Clear Quartz, which was dangling on a fine thread of silver. Derrick helped her to wear it, and they both joined in the dancing.
(A/N: Too much description, I know, but its too late, the damage has been done, and I find it a waste to delete over a thousand words. To those people who hate descriptions, I apologise, so don't mention the abundance of it in your review. *Sighs dramatically* I personally find descriptions boring too, but I like "watching" scenes played out in my head, thus, I go to great lengths to aid my reader in seeing what I see.)
I had paired off with Lord Felix, and was not surprised to see Kaelen in the company of Lady Tamora.
"Congratulations on a job well done," said Lord Felix with a smile.
"The same to you for a splendid idea. Although I cannot claim all the credit for the result," I replied as we circled each other, I with the fan half open and covering the lower part of my face, and him twirling the sash.
The dance required the couples to remain eye contact at all times, as was not true love enkindled by gazing into the windows of one's soul? But as I stared into Lord Felix's ice blue orbs, I felt neither pleasure nor warmth, much less the buds of true love.
"Thank you for allowing us to borrow your Clear Quartz," I said with a smile, trying to keep that suspicious tone out of my voice.
"It was no trouble at all, and it certainly proved to be useful, didn't it?"
Useful for what?
The obvious answer to that question was that the Clear quartz had made the Si Shan Wu more authentic, but what about the obscure one?
I didn't answer his question, focusing all my attention on executing the Si Shan Wu, and instead of gazing into his eyes I was staring at his ear instead. He shifted his head slightly to recapture my gaze, startling me.
"Is something wrong, Lady Tylana?"
Flustered, I replied, "Uh - I was just thinking, about how happy Derrick and Naria are."
He glanced at the said pair as they smiled at each other almost, dreamily. Now that was a smile shared only by lovers! "I'm sure their happiness will last."
Was it just me, or was that sarcasm?
As the dance ended, Lord Felix kissed my hand the same way he did when we were in the library. Although he did not linger longer than was necessary, I had a feeling that everyone knew what we were up to. Not that I was up to anything!
I had to admit that Uncle Danric's suspicions had made me wary of Lord Felix. Whether that was a good or bad thing, was unclear to me, for I had just begun to consider him as a possible life partner. This analysis only takes into consideration his status, wealth and connections. Of course, being the son of the woman who had attempted to kill the present king does not work in his favour, but that did not make him any less popular with the women in court. In fact, we were even more intrigued by him!
Was my interest in him then, just an interest and nothing more?
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Lord Felix left me very much alone after the adoption ball, but I was grateful for his absence as his presence made me uncomfortable, since his actions and words often had double meanings.
Some weeks after the adoption ball, he had asked me to show him the throne room. Thinking that it would do no harm for him to visit his uncle, I led him to the said area. He admired the high windows and newly tiled floor, which was decorated with vines, blossoms and birds. He reserved most of his attention for the great goldenwood tree, of course. Reaching up three stories, the goldy-silver leaves brushed the dome of glass that Uncle Danric and Aunt Mel had made when that tree so suddenly took root.
He seemed eager for a closer look, but restrained himself just long enough to ask for my permission. I waved my fan in the Approval mode, and he took a hesitant step up the dais, slowly placing his hands on its trunk. As he bowed his head in what seemed like meditation, I spied a jewel tumble out from under his shirt. It glittered in the sunlight, awakening my memories of the Si Shan Wu. It was the Clear Quartz.
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The ball had ended a month ago, but I believe the sense of satisfaction will never leave me. In fact, I'm still glowing from the after effects!
Although I was "glowing" and in the pink of health, Naria was not faring as well. She had taken ill about a week after the ball, and what started as a headache and a fever, had now developed into bouts of nausea and spells of dizziness.
Rumour had it that she was pregnant, and since she was not married as yet, it caused much talk amongst the servants as well as the courtiers. However, none were brave enough to enquire the truth from those involved.
In truth, no one knew exactly what was wrong with her, and what had caused her symptoms. She knew for a fact that she was not pregnant, as she and Derrick had not slept together, and she still had her monthlies. This only made us more worried, but did not mean that the wedding could be postponed.
The wedding went as planned, and was much simpler as compared to the lavishness of the adoption ball. It was a public ceremony, allowing commoner and courtier alike to watch the proceedings. But as soon as that was done, the Royal family and their immediate family retreated to the Royal Wing.
Then came the debate of whether or not the newlyweds should travel to Erev- li-Erval, thereby risking Naria's safety and her life, in her weakened state. It was then decided upon by the majority of us - including Naria and Derrick - that all would be played by ear, but that I would accompany them no matter what.
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Naria did get better, and we set off for Erev-li-Erval in autumn. I looked forward to the change of surroundings and meeting the Royal Family, and Naria told me all about them as we travelled in the carriage.
Sometimes, Kaelen or Derrick, or both, would join us in the carriage, or ask after us as they rode by, and it was during these times in which we thoroughly enjoyed each other's company and fully appreciated the support we gave one another during that long and arduous journey.
Besides making progress on the road, I also began learning to ride in earnest. I had read the book on horse riding Derrick and Naria had given me, and could practically recite it from cover to cover. But I was in need of hands on work, and who better to teach me then Kaelen?
He proved to be a wonderful teacher, patient and kind, yet constantly pushing me to the limit. Whenever I made an improvement, little though it may be, he would always heap praises on me; till I had to tell him to tone it down a notch, or else I'd lose my focus because of all that praise.
He found that funny, and began telling me of how proud he was when he first learned how to ride, and attempted to jump over a fence just a week after mastering the skill of horse riding.
"The blasted horse threw me off! I broke my arm, and suffered multiple bruises, though none as big as the one on my ego," he added ruefully. "There I was, lying in the mud, with all my friends laughing at me!"
As I didn't have a horse of my own, he allowed me to borrow his chestnut mare, whose name as it turned out, was Aysharra. Curious as to why a man like him would give his horse such an uninspiring name, I asked him for the reason behind it.
"She is just a horse, as I am just a man. We need no titles or poetic names to be truly loved and cherished," he replied, patting her on the muzzle as he led her by the reins.
"I see," I answered, nodding my agreement. "Does that mean that the two of you are totally devoted to one another?"
The laughter was evident in his eyes as he inclined his head to regard me, and he mock solemnly replied, "We were, for the most part of our lives, but she began flirting with stallions a while back, at the stables in Remalna."
"I presume you were heartbroken?" I asked, holding back my laughter.
"At first." He nodded, "But I found my attentions drawn - elsewhere."
'To a particular lady?' I thought. Was he referring to Lady Tamora? My stomach clenched involuntarily at the thought.
Striving to keep the conversation light, I continued, "Was she as heartbroken as you were, then?"
"Perhaps," he replied, glancing at his horse, "But she seems to have gotten over it."
My riding lessons continued throughout the entire journey, and I was steadily improving. When I was finally able to ride unaided, we celebrated by racing with the other riders. Naturally, I lost, but I still had to thank Kaelen for his time and effort taken to teach me. So I presented him with a Moonstone clasp. Known as the Traveller's Stone, it was a talisman for good fortune, and provided protection against the perils of travel.
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*A/N: This chapter is short as compared to the rest. Its slightly more than 3000 words - including the whole chunk of description. My own comments on this chapter: Rather boring, though somewhat ominous. I'm quite sure foreshadowing is there, and I hope that you've gained yet another insight into Kaelen's personality.
Most of you would've guessed that Lord Felix is up to no good, but you don't know what he's up to exactly, right? But you can't be too sure that he is mean through and through, can you? And Naria's mystery illness, what did it mean? Something for you guys to think about, and tell me what you thought of as you read this chapter. QUESTION: Would anyone like Naria to be pregnant? I know I said she wasn't, but people, as in the healer, make mistakes!
I didn't mention whom Lana was glancing at, but I'm sure you guys are smart enough to guess who was who. But we all love a little mystery, and it was a cute scene.
Also, I just learned that Flower Days are supposed to be held when people are in their twenties, or something. So don't mind that I made it a sweet sixteen kind of thing, okay?
Lastly, this chapter has moved the story WAY ahead, so it seems that Heart Duel will be COMPLETED in a while. I don't know whether to laugh or cry at this, but rest assured that there will at least be 5 more chapters, and for all you know, it might not be that short after all!
People who Deserve Special Mention: Meghan for beta-reading this chapter, and giving me her comments! This is the IMPROVED and LENGTHENED version. The reviewers who LOVE my descriptions. Maybe that is too strong a word? But the exaggeration is to make the others feel guilty. =) My sister, also known as Valsong, who just gave me a FANTASTIC idea. I know what is going to happen in the next chapter! YAY!
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Thanks to the Reviewers:
TallemeraRane: Thank you. I didn't know there was a new series coming out by Pierce! That is so cool. I'm going to get my hands on it somehow. Sadly, my holidays are coming to and end, so updates will naturally be fewer or nonexistent. Sorry! And have you read chapter 12? You reviewed at chapter 11, so I was just wondering.but there is MORE fluff in chapter 12!
ChocolateEclar: Yep, you didn't review the previous chapter, but that's okay. You haven't commented in this chapter either, through email, so I don't think I can do any changes now. Hope you enjoy the update!
Cheler: You're one of the few readers who enjoy the description, and for that I'm really grateful, coz that means that I'm not wasting all my energy typing. Lots of description in this chapter, I hope you like it! Thanks for the compliment!
Charmgirl: It's all right; I don't update that quickly, anyway. So long as you review, I'm happy. I know, in fact, I think I'm developing a crush for him. That is bad. *Slaps herself*, Stop it, Felicia! You can't have a crush on a figment of your imagination! Sorry about that.=)
Wong: Sorry. No action, but the dream I had last night - which had you in it - had a lot of action!
Shuyan: Not pissed off, but annoyed. I mean, wouldn't you? Ah, you're too nice for that, yeah? You're one of those who don't like description, so I don't mind. You win some you lose some.
Valsong: OK.
Idiotic gal: You don't get the foreshadowing? Read it again. Highly anticipated? Wow. Here it is anyhow.
Meghan: You're smart! With a good memory too boot! Thanks for commenting on this chapter before I posted. Maybe I should change the title of chapter 11 to "Stupid Boy", has a nice ring to it! I'm sure is grateful that you have forgiven him. You want her dress? I want it too! Ah, we have something in common then, writing our updates in 2 days. We rock!
Dracorum: I love you guys who love my descriptions! Hm.the knife is involved in something in the future, the climax, I think. Whether or not that is going to happen soon, waits to be seen. I don't need witty comments! Just comments or critique. Yep, I want that effect.
AniHope: That's nice to hear! This chapter moves the plot along even more, I think. More than I'd like, actually. But that can't be helped. Here's more!
