The Deceiver

A/N: This is my first story, so please be gentle! :) I'd appreciate if you would please tell me if I have any spelling/grammar mistakes in a review. Thanks!

Disclaimer: Any LotR people, places or things do not belong to me. It's all Tolkien's.

This takes place pre-lotr, when Aragorn was still Estel and was still living in Rivendell. If I say something in Elvish and you would like to know what it means, you can ask me in a review. I'll try to remember to put up translations, but sometimes I forget!

Like I said, this is my first, so I'm trying to figure out how long the chapters should be, and how often to post. So far I have two or three chapters done, so I'll try to keep up! :)

If we have no more delays, then on with the fanfic!

Chapter 1

"Now Ada, be reasonable."

"Reasonable? You call almost getting yourself killed reasonable?" replied a rather impatient Elrond.

"Ah!"grinned Elrohir. "But the keyword there is 'almost'."

"It's just a little hunting trip Ada" reasoned Elladan. "Simply to get some fresh air."

"Besides, Legolas has been parted from us for some time now. We would use this time to...bond with each other." Elrohir added with a mischievous smile.

"Well, I suppose you can go if you-"

"I get to pack the food this time Elladan!" interrupted Elrohir.

"Fine then, I'll go pack our-"

"-if you promise you'll be careful." finished Elrond.

"Aye, Ada."

"No foolish horseplay."

"Aye"

"And no going beyond the Imladris border patrol."

"Ada, we'll be careful" sighed Elladan.

"Alright go and have your fun" agreed Elrond

The twins smiled and left the room to tell Legolas and Estel the good news. Behind them they heard Elrond mumble "When will I ever learn."


After telling Legolas and Estel, they started packing for their trip.

By noon all of the packing was done. The friends waved goodbye to Imladris. They were all exited for what the week would offer them.


That was kinda a short chapter wasn't it? Well don't worry, the next one will be longer! :) Please reveiw! I'll reveiw your stories if you reveiw mine. Reveiwing is very helpful to any author. Just tell me if you liked it or not, c'mon you know you wanna. :)