DDF- This really pissed me off! If your not bettychan then don't read but if you really want to read it and see what I'm yelling to her about go right ahead. If not skip it and go down and read the chapter.

bettychan- you know what! Fuck off! If you don't like it DON'T read it! Don't even review it! I hate people like you always pointing out little mistakes and grammar areas and telling the author the story was horrible becuz of those tiny little mistakes. WHO CARES! Everybody makes mistakes and doesn't notice them even if they proofread it! So WHAT! It's not a big deal if it just little mistakes here and there. I typed it in one day only proof read it once around 12:00 in the morning and had to hurry up and post it and get off the computer before I got caught again for being up late and not sleeping and I didn't want to get grounded.

I DO know these things and yeah I make a lot of mistakes and don't notice them so what! I would understand if I made mistakes in everything and it absolutely made no since then yeah I would understand. But what you pointed out uggggh COME ON! Those little mistakes yeah people will notice them but they won't care unless they're someone like you!

I've gone back through all my stories and re-read them and saw mistakes but nobody said anything about them they knew what I meant and didn't make a big deal about it cuz they knew what I implying. I appreciate it when I spell someone's name wrong or their weapon wrong and they tell me the right way to spell it. Take Sango's weapon for example I didn't know how to spell it so I spelled it the best I could. A LOT of people spell it wrong just like they spell Inuyahsa and Sesshoumaru's swords wrong but I don't care I know what they mean.

And I know the first word of a sentence is always capitalized! Like I said before I didn't notice sooooorrrrry if it offended you or something!...NOT! Just do me a favor and don't even review the story if you don't like it. That's what I do, I don't review their story and say "Oh I hate your its horrible blah blah blah"

Don't even bother replying to this I won't even read it I'll just delete it and not care! Later! Much!

Ps: And I'm pretty sure there are errors in this reply to and I don't give a damn!


DDF- Ok I'm done now! I just had to say it I don't take crap like that from ppl. Well anyways on with the chapter!

Disclaimer- I don't on IY or One Piece I wish I did though, if I did that would be GREAT!

"sss" talking

'sss' thinking/telepathically talking


LAST TIME

For the past 2 hours they all just sat in silence until they reached the land. When the got of the boat luffy broke the peaceful silence. "Hey kagome" "yes luffy?" "How about you join my crew I need some one with fighting skills and you also said you had no where to go soo…" "I'd love to" "Great! Now lets go find Zolo"

NOW

"Where exactly is Zolo?" asked Kagome "He's this way, are you sure you really want him on your crew Luffy?" "Of course I'm sure lets go!" sigh "alright come on follow me its this way" (Kagome is in her human form…Just thought I let you know)

Once Coby started walking Luffy and Kagome followed him while looking at the town. When the finally got there, there was a huge brick wall in front of them that Coby started climbing. Kagome just jumped up and landed on the wall and sat down waiting for the others. "Wow you can jump that high? cool" was Luffys 'intelligent' reply Coby just started at her with his mouth hanging right open.

Coby started climbing again when he heard "Gum gum ROCKET!" Coby just kept climbing while Kagome looked down at Luffy and say him stretch his arms like rubber grab the walls ledge and his feet left the ground and was flung on to the ledge.

Kagome was shocked but didn't let it show on her face and Kirara stared at him with shock and curiosity. "How'd you do that?" Kagome asked. "Oh I ate the gum gum fruit and it turned me into a rubber man see" He said stretch his arm. "What's a gum gum fruit?"

"It's a cursed fruit if you eat one you'll get some type of power" "If it gives you a power then why is it called the cursed fruit?" "Because if you eat it then you can't swim" "Oh now I see"

Coby had finally made it to the top after Kagome and Luffy finished conversation and said, "There he is that's Zolo" "why's he tied up?" "Haven't you heard of Zolo? Asked Coby "No" "He's a piratehunter and a legeandary swordsmen, they say he fights with 3 swords one in each hand and another one in his mouth." "hmm" was all she said.

When they were talking they didn't notice a little girl around the age of 8 climb up the wall and jump down and run over to Zolo with something in her hands. "Huh what's she doing?" wondered/asked Coby.

They watched the girl hold her hands out while talking to Zolo and noticed 2 guys walking towards her. "What are you doing brat?" before she could reply he saw the cookies in her hands and knocked them right out of her tiny hands. "Throw her over the wall" The guy with blonde hair said to the guard. "What? but sir" "DO IT!" "Leave her alone" Zolo said.

"I SAID THROW HER OVER THE WALL NOW!" completely ignoring Zolo"Yes sir... put your hands over your head alright" The girl started to back up when the man grabbed her and threw her over in the air. "AAAAHHHHHHHHH!" "Gum gum…" before Luffy could finish Kagome jumped of the ledge and in front of the girl and caught her and landed on the ground.

"shhh it's alright your safe now" Kagome said trying to calm her down. Luffy jumped down and landed right next to her and started yelling. "Hey! What'd you to that?" before anybody could reply Kagome put the girl down and started walking up to the 2 guys while yelling.

"She's just a little girl and you throw her over a WALL! I should kill you right now…" Luffy grabbed her arm and pulled her back before she could do anything. "Who are you people?" "None of your business" was Kagome's reply. "I'm Luffy and I'm going to become King of the Pirates!"

"Ha ha ha ha yeah right you king of the pirates ha ha ha ha" He said walking away along with the other guy. Luffy just stared at them with his head tilted to the side a bit and confusion writing on his face.

"Hey you" "uh" Luffy looked at Zolo and smiled a bit. "HI I'm Luffy and were here to set you free so you can join my pirate crew." "I don't want to join your stupid pirate crew and I don't need your help" "hm" was all luffy said when he started walking away.

"whaa..." "Luffy I thought" "Come on Kagome lets go" "But Luffy what about…" "I said lets go Kagome now come on," Luffy said in a serious and a stern voice that left no room for an argument. Kagome sighed and started walking picking up the little girl in the process and followed Luffy.

They were sitting in a restaurant that the little girls mother owned. "Thank you so much for bringing my daughter home and saving her." The girl's mom said while putting food in front of them. "Your welcome" said Luffy.

"Why were you trying to give him food anyway?" Kagome asked the little girl. "Well the man that told that navy guy to throw me over the wall, well a month ago he was in our restaurant destroying stuff (I can't really remember what happened but I remember Zolo helping her out so don't kill me if its wrong) so I went up to him and kicked him and started yelling that's when he picked me up and was about to hurt me and make me go a month with out eating while being in the sun the whole time when Zolo stopped him. Zolo said he would do it and well that's how he's been ever since that day."

'So that's why he's tied up. But what I don't get is why Luffy left when he wanted to free Zolo in the first place? Does he have a plan or something? Hmmmm' "HellllooKagome!" "uh? Oh yeah Luffy?" "I said come on lets go" "go? Go to where?" "To get Zolo come on" 'whaa…t?'

"Wait a minute first you want to free Zolo, then you walk away right when you had the chance, and now you want to go back and free him! What's going on?" Kagome yelled following Luffy and Coby out of the restaurant.

"Yeah I know but I just needed to get something to eat and now were off to set him free!" 'He left so he could get something to eat! Is he always like this?' Kagome followed them thinking the whole time about what was Luffy like.

Kagome came out of her thoughts when they were in front of the Navy's brick wall again. Kagome jumped on the ledge like last time while Coby climbed and Luffy used his rubber arms and grabbed the edge and landed on the top.

When Coby finally got to the top Kagome and Luffy jumped down and started heading towards Zolo.

Zolo looked up when he heard footsteps coming towards him and when he looked up he saw the same people from before. "I thought I told you to leave I don't need your help" "Nope where not leaving till you join my pirate crew."

Coby had finally caught up to them when he noticed that the legendary swordsmen didn't have his swords. "Hey where's he's swords?" he spoke more to himself then to the others.

"They took my swords and put them in Helmeppo's (is that is name, You know that one guy with blonde hair and a reddish brownish jacket with the orange collar and had Zolo tied up… that guy, I can't really remember well if it isn't it is now lol) room. After Zolo said thatKagome ran off in search of his room following to where his scent was the strongest.

"Where'd she go?" asked Coby. "To find Zolo's swords," "How'd she do that?" asked Zolo before either one of them could answer about 50 navy men where around them.

"Get them," Helmeppo said and the navy charged at them while Luffy started smiling and said, "this should be fun"

(Lets go see how Kagome's doing arrite)

Kagome was running down the halls sniffing out the guys scent but it was taking longer than she expected. After about 10 minutes she finally found his room and opened the door. There inside on the floor next to a desk were 3 swords. 'Those must be his' she went up and grabbed them and was getting ready to leave the room when she heard something.

She looked at Kirara, who was on her shoulder, and Kirara looked at her, both with confusion writing on their faces. Kagome walked up to the window and saw Luffy fighting this really huge guy and about 50 navy guys on the ground.

She saw that the huge guy was getting ready to shot Zolo so she jumped out the open window and dropped her human disguise. She landed on the ground a little bit away from the fight right when the huge guys shot his last bullet at Zolo. With her demon speed she held on to Zolo's 3 swords with her left hand and drew her sword 'Shadow' with her right hand and cut the binds that were on him and dragged him to the ground with her.

"Good job Kagome" "Thanks Luffy" Kagome handed Zolo his swords and stood up and got into a fighting stance. "What'd I miss?" "Well I just took down all the navy guys and Zolo's decided to join my crew and this big guy is Helmeppo's dad" "Hn need any help?"

"No me and Zolo got this" "Ok" She said walking to were Coby was while putting her sword away and watching the fight. Zolo got up and took another look at Kagome. 'That's Kagome but when she went to get my swords she didn't have a tail, claws, or any of that stuff. What's going on?' Zolo turned back around and got into a fighting stance.

(Ok I'm to lazy to type the fight and plus I can't remember how it went ((haha)) so lets just say they beat him and Zolo past out becuz of no food for a month arrite!)

Kagome was sitting down petting Kirara while starring out the window think about the feudal era. (She's in her human form by the way and Zolo's wonder how the hell she did that hehe)

Zolo and Luffy and just finish eating when the navy came in and told Luffy, Zolo, and Kagome had to leave. "What they saved the town!" the little girl said (God what's her name? Aw well forget) the people started arguing saying they should be thanking them but stopped when they asked if Coby was with them.

Coby was about to answer when Luffy started punching him saying stuff like no, and does he look like he could be a pirate, he wants to be in the navy. He was about to hit him again when Zolo stopped him. "Alright we get it come let's go" So Kagome, Kirara, Luffy, and Zolo walked out and headed towards his boat.

'Why in the world was Luffy beating the kid up?' Kagome was so confused she voiced her question. "He wanted to be in the navy and if they found out the he was working for pirates as a slave they wouldn't have let him so I had to stop him from saying it and act like I didn't care so they would take him in" "Oh I see."

When they got to the boat Coby, the town, and the navy where there waving goodbye. "BYE COBY!" "BYE LUFFY!" luffy kept waving till they where no longer in sight.

"Kagome I've been meaning to ask you something" Zolo started out "What?" Kagome asked. She knew what he was going to ask she was just wondering why it took him so long. "How come when you ran off to get my sword you looked like this and when you came back you had a black fluffy tail, claws, pointed ears, and markings on your face and wrists?"

"That was my real form I'm a inu demon and this is just a disguise" "Oki gt itcan I ask you one more thing?" "Sure" "Why does that cat have 2 tails?" "Because Kirara here is a cat demon and can transform into a bigger size so you can even ride her. And to answer your question, (I am totally making this up so don't kill me!) for a cat demon you only get 2 tails you start out with 1 and when you get stronger you get another. You get it?" "Yes" "Wow that's the longest I've ever heard you talk" Luffy said.

"Shut up Luffy" Kagome said with a really smile on her face and punching Luffy lightly on the arm. 'This is going to be on heck of an journey' she thought smiling. And for onceshe didn't put heremotionless mask up she just sat around and started joking around with Luffy while heading out to gods now where.


DDF- I thought it was good to stop it here. I finally have more time to type my stories! Woooohoooo! Lately I've been so busy I hardly have time to type. When I did have time to type my stories I would get a little bit done but then I have to stop becuz I'd have to go somewhere or something. Well anyways enough about that I g2g Naruto's almost on Ja Ne!