This is my first fanfic, but I have read so many others. Please Review!
Chapter 1
Thunderclan POV
The clan was finally starting to get over the shock of the betrayal of the former thunder leader, Spottedstar. He had killed poor beloved Bluepaw and tortured Mudpaw to the point where he trusts barely anybody. When the clan found out about this, they chased him away. Hawknose the former Thunderclan deputy and Owltalon went with him.
Thunderclan was left leaderless. A couple days after the incident, Spottedheart got dreams from Thunderclan to go to the Moonpool. She was then given nine lives by Starclan, and is now Spottedstar, leader of Thunderclan. It is a coincidence that she was the second Spottedstar in a row. Bushwing is the new deputy.
Half a moon had gone by since that incident and finally Thunderclan was once again strong.
"Mudpaw, wake up, it is time for training," mewed Firemask. Mudpaw backed away trembling with wide eyes. "Mudpaw, I am not going to hurt you. The only cats who would do that left the clan." Still Mudpaw didn't budge.
Tigerpaw walked up to Mudpaw and rubbed her ginger fur against the brown tom. "It is okay Mudpaw, you know that Firemask would never hurt you, he is you mentor." Mudpaw nodded and padded up to Firemask.
"Thank you, Tigerpaw," he turned towards Mudpaw. " Now, I think we should hunt in the clearing. You can show me your hunting skills and then we can catch up on the things you missed while you were healing with Brackenplant."
The two of them padded off in the direction of the clearing. Mudpaw looked a little uneasy padding out into the forest.
Soon they arrived at the clearing. "What do you smell?" asked Firemask.
Mudpaw sniffed the air, " Shadowclan, but it is stale and…" Mudpaw didn't finish. He dropped into the stalking position and pounced. "a mouse."
"Good job, obviously you haven't forgotten how to hunt. You can give that to the elders." Firemask changed the subject, he was obviously moving on to the next lesson. " It is time to see how your fighting skills are, Attack me."
"I would be glad to!" Firemask turned around to see the amber glare of Spottedstar, former leader of Thunderclan.
I have a vote. Do you think this story should be:
All from Thunderclan's point of view.
The chapter's switch from one clan to the other
In a chapter it shows the view of all clans, switching so each clan has a view in a Chapter.
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