I got a guest review from someone called Encore and while I don't appreciate the foul language or the fact he called my story shit to read he did had a point. Naruto with UBW was done before at least 3 times to my knowledge ("Broken Swords" by General RTS, "The Magus Killer" and "Hero of Kiri" by PandaGX. Not sure about "Archer at the Magic High School" by PandaGX) but I did said in the AN that there are changes to this meaning it will have some differences. Besides it's not always to come with an original story and sometimes you can't help but want to put your own spin on things. That is why fanfics exist right? Now there will be some spoilers. Oh, the cards that Zelretch used are not Class Cards if in case anyone is wondering about them. That is just the form they are in for easy transport. Big thanks to Dannyrockon122 for helping me with not only this fanfic but my other fanfics and future ideas. Btw I am writing a Resident Evil/Harry Potter fanfic with a Claire Redfield and Harry Potter pairing. Claire is going to be a 1st gen witch, but I do need a suggestion for her wand (the wood, core, and length of it) and also a suggestion for her Animagus form. If anyone has an idea for either of them or both please leave a review or P.M me though I would like to hear the reason(s) for the animal and wand before I decide since a couple or more people might send me their suggestions.
1. I used a Fem Kurama. The 3 I mentioned didn't do that. They used canon male Kurama.
2. Naruto like in "Broken Swords" will not have Prana. He will use Chakra for Tracing and deploying UBW.
3. Naruto will not have access to UBW yet. It is still developing and probably won't be ready to use till the Chunin Exams.
4. Naruto's UBW doesn't have anything in it. He has to start from scratch.
5. Naruto will not be leaving the Hidden Leaf Village like he did in the mentioned fanfics. He will be a Hidden Leaf Shinobi.
6. Naruto will have trouble with the Projection part of Tracing starting out. He will have to train himself in using till he can actually use it in battle reliably.
7. Everyone will graduate from the Academy at 15-16 years instead of 12-13 so everyone besides Naruto will be wearing their Shippuden clothes.
Here are what the OCs I have some far and what Kurumi will look like in human form.
Hitomi Uzumaki-Namikaze
Affinities: Wind (main), Water (main), Lightning, Fire, and Earth.
Adamantine Sealing Chains
Apearance: Looks like a younger version of Kushina with Whiskers Birthmarks (like Naruto) and is wearing Naruto's jumpsuit from Shippuden.
Personality so far: Arrogant girl who has a hero complex.
Oda Kaguya.
Bloodline: Shikotsumyaku.
Affinities: Earth (main) and Lightning (main).
Apearance: Looks like pre time skip Ultear from Fairy Tail but as a teenager and is wearing Kasumi's clothes from Dead or Alive 3.
Personality so far: Upbeat girl who loves music and drawing. Has a lovely singing voice.
Kurumi will look like Yasaka from Highschool Dxd Yasaka from Highschool DxD with red-orange hair and red eyes. She is wearing what Yasaka wears.
Daido
Race: A.I (I have him for a reason).
Appearance: Robotallion (Aquos) from Bakugan.
Personality so far: Perverted but is respectful towards women. Kind but does like to tease and troll people. Loves harem animes and wants Naruto to be a harem king. Loves music and is helpful to the people he considers friends.
Here is Naruto's harem and pairings. Note I am doing canon pairings so I will not be including them in this page.
Naruto's Harem (22 girls so far): Kurumi, Hinata, Yakumo, Anko, Haku, Amaru, Akari, Haruna, Kagerō, Kin, Kurotsuchi, Nazuna, Sasame, Shion, Fūka, Hisame, Kotohime, Ni, Samui, Shizuka, Yugito and Oda. Might add Shizune, Mei, and Guren.
Iruka x Ayame
Neji x Tenten
Shino x Fū
Lee x Tayuya
Gaara x Karin
