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Silas stopped with the knife about to hit Brettany, in mid air. Annabel gasped. Brettany screamed for her life. Silas lowered the knife.
"He was your…your grandfather" Silas stuttered in shock!
"Ye…yes" Brettany replied walking away from the two strangers.
Annabel was watching this and thought it was like a soap opera. Never knowing what is going to happen next.
"But…how could you be father Aringarosa's granddaughter" Silas questioned? "I'm the only one he has, and he's the only one I have".
"He is my grandfather, and I didn't kill him" Brettany murmured still walking away from Silas and Annabel. Brettany slowly walked backwards to the phone. Making sure no one knew what she was doing. She grabbed the phone from behind and kept it out of sight.
"May I offer you a drink" Brettany asked, so she could walk out of the room and call the police.
"NO, you're not leaving my sight" Yelled the now furious Silas. Silas walked over to Brettany and grabbed her wrist. Dropping the phone on the hard wood floor, Brettany started to smack Silas on the forearm.
"Go, Annabel, get clothes for the girl and met me out be the car" Silas directed.
Silas walked out of the house, leaving Annabel to fetch the clothing like a dog fetching his masters' slippers. Annabel walked around the house, looking for Brettany's room. She finally found a room to the far east of the house. It was painted pink, with purple carpeting. Brettany had a queen sized bed with a canopy. A small vanity table with a lighted mirror. And a seat right by the window that had a view of the lagoon. Annabel rushed to the closet and found a couple jeans and a couple shirts. She grabbed a small suit case and threw all the clothes into the bag, not even knowing if the girl would see her room again. Running down the stairs Annabel was thinking what the girls parents would think. Annabel found some paper and forged a note saying…
Mom and dad
I went out for some fresh air. Don't wait up for me, who knows I may not be back for a long why'll. Don't worry about me.
-your daughter Brettany LUV yeah XOXOXOXO
Annabel only hoped she sounded like Brettany and had her hand writing. Annabel picked up the suitcase and ran to the car. Walking out the gate this time. She knew know one would see her because, they had the only person in the house as a hostage.
Brettany was seated in the back seat and was crying. Annabel handed Brettany a napkin for a substitute of the worn out handkerchief. Brettany took it and smelled it lightly, just to make sure this lady didn't throw some chemicals on it that would make her pass out or something. The napkin smelled like an under read book, definitely no chemicals. Brettany blew here noise and cried some more. Why is this happening to me, Brettany thought? What did I ever do to deserve this? I bet it was the big test I cheated on in the first grade, Brettany hated herself.
"What's are next move" Annabel asked Silas, as she pulled away from the now deserted house?
Silas didn't want to admit that he didn't know what there next move was so he just said…
"We shall go where the lord takes us".
Huh he doesn't know, Brettany thought.
Mmm he don't know, Annabel also thought.
"So where the hell are you taking me" Brettany demanded?
"I said not to speak those words, and you'll not live long enough for it to be your concern as to where we are going" Silas admitted.
The seat belt choke Brettany's neck as she cradled into a ball and sobbed some more. Brettany was shaking and her lower stomach hurt.
"Ohhhhhhhhh" Brettany howled.
"What's your problem" Silas question Brettany?
"Uh nothing, but what's your name" Brettany asked the lady driving?
"Annabel" she replied looking in the review mirror.
"Oh Annabel that's a very pretty name, could you stop at the store" Brettany asked in a pleading voice?
Brettany knew this was peculiar to ask her kidnapper, but it was something she had to do.
"Why" Silas chimed in.
"Silas its okay, I know why, and sure we can Brettany" Annabel said.
Annabel quickly pulled into a small building and guided Brettany into the store, making sure Brettany didn't try anything funny. Brettany walked over to the woman's supplies and then to the register. Annabel watched as Brettany entered the bathroom.
Brettany quickly threw the pads away and ran to the window. She knew that this bathroom had a window that lead out to a back alley, because she came to this little store every day after school to see her boyfriend. Brettany moved the freshly empty garbage can and turned it upside down. She stepped on the top of the can and opened up the window. Brettany hoisted herself outside the widow, and jumped to the ground. Leaves crunched under her feet, and the breeze blew the window shut.
Where to go, Brettany thought, anywhere that's away way from here.
Brettany ran down the alley and froze. Silas was out of the car and pacing back and forth.
Crap now what to do?
Brettany had an idea.
Maybe if I could get that guy away from the car I could hijack it, because I'm pretty sure Annabel left the keys in the ignition, Brettany considered.
Brettany was about to put this plan into action, and if it didn't work then she might as well die trying.
"Go to HELL" Brettany yelled at Silas and then stuck up her middle finger!
Silas's wine-red eyes filled with anger.
How did Annabel loose sight of her, Silas questioned?
Silas didn't have time to go asked Annabel how Brettany got away, so he started to run after Brettany, just like she planned. Brettany darted down the dark alley. It was a dead end and Brettany knew that. She jump for the brick wall that blocked her from freedom. But the thing Brettany didn't know is she couldn't reach the wall. "Crap, this sets things back a little" Brettany said in a shrilling voice. Silas was picking up speed and was all most to the Brettany. Annabel was just knocking on the ladies room door. Annabel gasped as she force the door open to see a window with the empty can under it. Annabel knew she had made a terrible mistake. She jogged to the closed widow and opened it. She saw Silas running up to a shadow outline that Annabel figured was Brettany. Annabel had to help, so she hoisted herself out the window. She wasn't as graceful as Brettany so she landed on one foot and stumble into a pile of garbage cans. The cans rolled out into the alley way and tripped Silas. He went tumbling to the ground like a sack of potatoes. Brettany knew god was giving her another chance. She sprinted back down the lane, and hurtled over the cans. Silas made a sad attempt to grab Brettany but she was to fast. Brettany was down and out of the alley way before Silas got back up to his feet.
Silas got up and ran after Brettany, leaving Annabel to see her mistake. Brettany made it to the car and hopped into the front seat, the key was inside the ignition. Brettany quickly remember what happened the first time she tried to get her drivers license.
"Brettany your next" the drivers instructor, Mr. Hamilton announced.
Brettany walked cautiously to the car. She was about to get in when she threw up all over Mr. Hamilton. Everyone laughed and cheered. Brettanys' face got red and she ran off. Never having the chance to have her drivers test. But on the written test she scored a 100 so they let her pass, and get her license.
Brettany shook the thought out of her mind and put the car into drive. Brettany was pulling away from the parking lot, as fast as she could, when Silas's hand came jetting into the slightly open window and grabbed Brettany's neck. Brettany swerved the steering wheel. The car went left, Brettany and Silas went left. Silas was falling off the roof so he tightened his grip on Brettany's little neck. Brettany couldn't breath; Silas was praying she would pull over. Brettany stopped instantly and Silas went flying to the window shield. Blood dripped slowly from Silas' mouth and nose. Silas's body rolled off the car, in a sticky motion. Brettany got out of the car. Silas's body wasn't moving, and he wasn't breathing.
"I…I think I killed him" Brettany shrilled in horror.
