This is my first fan fiction. So, it is probably not that good...TT but Reviews would be nice to help me fix problems and/or helpful advice.

Can I Save Her?


-Scene-


It's raining.

A girl is running, slightly stumbling.

She runs up to the roof of the school.

-GASP- faints.


Ayumu Narumi, Tsukiomi High School, First Year, class 2B, walks up to the roof.

"God...Hiyono is too much energy to handle today... I need some fresh air, I don't care that is raining either..."

He noticed the clasped girl, he runs too her.

"Hey! Hey! Are you okay?"

No getting an answer from the long brown haired girl, he picks her up after calling Madoka and telling her to prepare some hot water.

He gets to the apartment.

"Madoka! Clean off my bed for me so I can set her there!"

"Sure, and the hot water is on the stove."

Ayumu places the unconscious girl on his bed and puts a hot rag on her forehead.

"What happened to her?" Madoka asked thinking he would know the answer.

"I don't know. I saw her on the roof when I went up there."


Three Hours Later


The unknown girl wakes up.

"Hey... Are you okay?"

"...Yes, thank you."

"I'm Ayumu Narumi, I found you on the roof."

"I'm...Raine Hamazuki..."

Madoka walks in with some tea.

"I'm Madoka Narumi, Ayumu's sister-in-law."

"Raine Hamazuki."

"Raine, do you live around here?"

"I live just south of the school."

"Why haven't I seen you around Tsukiomi High School then?"

"I just recently moved there a week ago and started school yesterday."

"Ah. If you don't mind me asking...why were you up of the roof?"

Awkward silence.

"...I was running...from someone...and something..."

Ayumu could tell that what he asked upset her a little bit. So he tried cheering her up by changing the topic.

"Well, hey, do you want to stay for dinner? What's you favourite food, I'll cook it for you."

"Oh why thank you, I'd love to stay. Well… I haven't had sushi and soy seasoning tofu with noodles in a while…"

"Sure, I'll make that for you, you rest while I get started."

Raine felt so much better knowing she had somewhere to stay, and not going back to her dreaded house.


The Walk Home


Raine walked home after eating with Ayumu and Madoka.

She really dreaded walking back...

So she tried to make it as long as possible.

She stopped in front of her house.

"Good... His car is not here..."

She opened up the door and went to her room.

There she locked up every lock and made sure that no one could get in.


School


"Hey Ayumu! Thanks again for your care yesterday."

"Hey Raine, sure no problem."

"You're in Class 2B right?"

"Yeah, are you in there too?"

"Yep! Do you mind showing me around?"

"Sure, why not." Ayumu laughed as he walked off leaving Raine behind and smiling.

"Well here is Class 2B, you can sit by me if you want."

"Hehe, thanks for showing me the way."

"What's up with you and always saying Thank You...you know with me you--"

"AYUMU! WHY ARE YOU FLIRTING WITH THAT GIRL!" screamed Hiyono.

"Hiyono... I'm not flirting... She's new and I'm just showing her around...Oh Raine, this is Hiyono. She's a little weird..."

"Hi Hiyono, I'm Raine Hamazuki."

"Oh Hi."

Then the intercom comes on.

"Raine Hamazuki, will you please come to the office."

When she heard to go to the office she knew what as coming. Her face showed so much fear.

Ayumu saw her facial expression. Something isn't right.

"Um... Bye Ayumu, it was nice to meet you Hiyono." her voice was shaking.

Running through Ayumu's mind, "Why is she so scared...? Why do I have the urge to follow after her…?"

TO BE CONTINUED…

Please R&R.