this is not really irritating anymore because i realized something... a person who's been reviewing (not saying name because there are several of them...) has pointed out a few things that irritate me but are correct. i would just like to ask you, don't keep reviewing, please? i'm trying to finish this fan fic, but it doesn't help my situation any when you automatically put down my idea. i did say she was going to die, and she is going to, ok? but i'd like to know if you write any fan fiction so you can experience how hard it is to not write a Mary Sue into a story... i'm not mad at you, i'm acctually glad your critisizing me, your slap across the face repeatedly is annoying, but it also made me realize things... if you can, PM me or e-mail me ok? arigato gozimasu!

---flashback---

"Haruka! Stop being such a pig and get off that swing!" It was the orphan that had come from a rich family and was now dead poor because of the funeral. She hated Haruka because Haruka was an orphan from a really poor family.

"But there are other swings..." Haruka said, pointing to the five other swings. "I just want to be left alone."

"HARUKA TENOH'S BEING MEAN TO ME!"

Haruka flinched at the sound of her name. She hated it. Why'd they have to give her such a crappy name? Her cousins would walk by occasionally, but she wouldn't ever talk to them. Her cousins were brothers and she missed having a family that cared, but she loved to see them as brothers, talking happily to each other, acting like brothers should. She wanted to have a sibling she could be proud of, but there was no sibling she could be proud of because they were all killed in a shooting at her house that killed the three cats, the parrot, the four dogs, her older brother, who would have been finishing collage, her little big brother, who would be starting his junior year in high school, her older sister, who was starting middle school, and her mother and father.

She saw them coming and her eyes widened. They looked so sad. Her eyes followed little Mokuba and she saw he was on the verge of crying. They were taking a walk, but it looked like they were in a horrible place. Haruka simply watched them walk past with their guardian. She just stood there at the fence watching Seto and Mokuba pass. It was then that she saw a man watching the two brothers, his black hair was shading his face as he cleaned off his glasses. Beside him was an average sized cat with black stripes on it's brown fur.

He waved at her and she waved back, reluctatly. She was reaching out to pet his aproaching cat while he sat there at the bus stop, watching her.

---end flashback---

'Your a by-product.'

'No, I'm human!'

'Your memories are all fake. Gozuburo Kaiba made you from DNA taken from both of the boys he adopted. Your not real, you have no place in this world. You don't deserve Lyman's heart. He'll die soon. You saw it that day at the bus stop, didn't you?'

'No! Go away! I love him! I'm real! I'm their cousin... I know I am!'

Haruka suddenly turned as she heard a knock on her dorm door. She stared at it and heard another knock. "Yes?" She opened the door and was shocked. Chazz stood there, his arms crossed. "Chazz, is something wrong?"

'Your a by-product, you're not supposed to care.'

"I was just curious, how'd you get into Deulist Academy with such low skills as yourself?" Chazz stared at her. "Or is it because your name's Kaiba?"

'Your a by-product, you don't even remember your real name.'

"That's probably why. They think I may be related to the Kaiba brothers." She gave a weak smile while she screamed 'I'M REAL! I know I am...'

'Ah, but chan you prove that?'

"I don't suppose your leaving, are you?" He looked around her at her bags, neatly packed, and the bare walls of her room. "I'm sure that you can stay, you just may have to work your way back up there."

She suddenly went really close to his face. "Your not Chazz. Who are you? What did you do with Princeton? Where did you come from? How did you get cloned? When did you replace Princeton? Why are you bothering me?"

"I AM CHAZZ, YOU BUTT-HEAD!" Chazz hit her across the face. "I'm real enough to know where I stand with all these other people! I hate people like you. They think they rule the world! But they don't because their to stupid to rule the world. Ya hear?"

'Even he agrees, your not real. Your a by-product, meant to take someone's place.'

Haruka just sat there and took Chazz's blow like it was nothing. She stood up and slammed the door shut. She was leaving, yes, but not in a car, or just walking away, orbiking, or hitching a ride. She was waiting for someone. She was awaiting her death. If she really was a by-product, no one would miss her right?

---flashback---

"Haruka Tenoh Kaiba, you are now the sole thing that stands between pure evil and the gates to this world, since monsters from the Shadow Realm and humans of this world seem to be fighting over everything, you must keep track of the Keys that were distributedtwo years before we adopted you. If you die, so does the hope of those who hold the Keys. Most of them won't have the Keys when they meet you, but you can't fall in love either, understand?"

Haruka smiled happily at someone. The face was dark, so she couldn't make out who it was, but it was defiantely a woman. She nodded and smiled brightly and she ran into the woman's arms and hugged her tight. Haruka felt a cold chill run down her spine. She turned and saw that same man with the black hair, glasses, and his cat. The cat jumped on Haruka and started to play with the girl. The man smiled and walked up to the woman.

Haruka memorized the man's face. He was so beautiful, smooth skin, silky hair, a beautiful voice... she wanted a husband like that, one that would always have that beauty that this man had. But Haruka had seen him nearl four years ago, so why did he look exactly the same?

---end flashback---

Haruka didn't understand anything anymore as she dragged her stuff out of the dorm and left the key by her head of the Ra dorms' room and walked down the pathways, exploring the parts she'd never been. She walked past Banner and Pharaoh. Banner was reading a book and Pharaoh jumped up and followed her.

She stopped and crouched down and petted him, her eyes seeming to finally have life in them. "Hi there. I think I've seen you before, Pharaoh... did I? I can't remember any more. I'm just a dumb person without a dream." 'Well, a dream that won't come true, no matter how hard I wish for it.' She continued to scratch Pharaoh's ear with her free hand and saw Lyman coming over and she quickly stood up and straightened out her shirt and picked up her bag. She gave Banner a soft smile that lit up her face and she turned around and left him standing beside his cat.

"Pharaoh, why are you following her? You know we can't accosiate ourselves with her anymore. We can't follow someone so pure of heart like her with our sinned hearts, so, she's way out of our leauges."

All of a sudden, there was a loud CRACK! that split the air like lightning and shocked everyone outside and some people in nearby dorms threw their doors open and everyone saw her blood splatter everywhere as she fell to the ground, a bullet hole piercing right through her "pure" heart.

Banner dropped his book and ran to help her, as did several other students. Banner ordered one of them to call the nurse or the doctor at the school. He looked down at her. She just kept her eyes closed, unable to look him in the eye. He gently made her sit up and stared around for the person who had shot her.

He saw them. They had the KC printed on their hat. He glared at the assasin and saw the assasin stand up and was nearly shocked half to death. The assasin was Seto. He gave a quircked smile and disappeared. Lyman didn't understand, but he ignored it for now as he picked her up to take her to the Hospital Ward they had at the academy.

'Your a by-product.'


and so ends the first part of the death sene!... hopefully, this will make up for the Mary Sue i did, by mistake... if not, i'll just have someone stab her repeatedly in the Hospital Ward... evil smile i'm sure i'll think of something to make up for Mary Sue... in the end... thank you for reading this... somewhat demented fourth chapter... evil smile