Title: One Teen Changed It All
Disclaimer: do not own doctor who, own the teen
Chapter 2
"So Rose, what do you want to do now?" The Doctor asked. They had just got done sightseeing and were now sitting down on a bench. Rose was leaning against his shoulder watching the people of the century go by.
"I could go for ice cream," Rose said.
"Ok, let's get going!" the Doctor said, but before they could get up, a loud scream echoed through the streets.
"Aww man, I just wanted one free-of-danger vacation and look what I get!" Rose complained. The people around them were in a fury of panic. In the distance, loud bangs were heard, and they were getting closer. "Doctor, what is that noise?"
"I have no clue. Ready for an adventure?" he turned to her and gave his famous grin. Rose nodded and they were off.
As they got closer to the bangs, a huge metal bug got bigger and bigger. When they reached the bug, they both got a surprise. There, standing in front of them, was a gigantic spider. It had three very long legs and it had a head like a flying saucer, but oddly enough, it was not moving. Below it, a large army stood, with its guns pointed in one direction. Rose turned her head to see what they were pointing at and gasped. "Doctor, is that, a girl?" She asked and pointed at the lonely figure. The Doctor eyes followed her finger and nodded slowly. In front of the large army was a teen, that looked about sixteen or seventeen. Her hair went down to about mid back and her clothes were worn and torn.
"What is that human doing! She's not going…" Rose's hand flew over his mouth.
"Shh, she's talking." Rose was right.
"Snake, show yourself, or I'll kill your entire army!" the teen yelled. A young man stepped out from the huge army and stepped forward.
"You foolish girl, you had to be stupid an follow me. Men, leave, I will take care of this foolish girl."
"Yes sir!" they all coursed and disappeared in a flash of light. Snake took out a sword type weapon and started advancing towards the teen. The teen moved into a fighting stance and pulled out the same weapon as Snake. Their weapons clashed and the whole city seemed to stop, only the battle raged on. A scream of pain thunders through the open plain of buildings, soon to be followed the clanking of metal on metal. The girl panted as she rushed forth once again to the un-marked evil, a sly smirk graced Snake's lips and seemingly effortlessly, he leaped above the girl, leaving her to skid to a stop turning to face the great evil once more.
She was exhausted, she panted heavily, as blood leaked from her arms, sides, stomach, back, and chest. Her flawlessly brown hair was stained with her own blood, as her peachy-looking skin was tainted as well with the crimson color. She gripped her sword once more, and proceeded to rush.
Snake though, held a great sense of pride, seemingly being able to tire the young girl so easily, he leaped back with little effort before drawing out the sword quickly and deflected the girls attempt to hit him, he then charge forward, and said "Well then, since you won't surrender, I'll just take your life!" lashing out at her chest, a pleased smirk graced his slender lips.
She screamed once more... the burning sensation in her chest was almost un-bearable, she withdrew his body and leaped up just in time, another second delay and Snake would have killed her. She leaned against the sword in an attempt to catch her breath
"Doctor, should we help her?"
"Rose…" It was too late, Rose had already gotten up and was running full speed towards the battle. Snake was the first to notice her and ran towards Rose. On seeing this, Rose stopped and stared there stunned. Snakes huge sword came coming down on top of her head, but instead of hitting human flesh, it hit solid concrete. Looking up, the second girl was not there. Franticly looking around, he spotted the second girl, Rose, with is worst enemy.
"Snake, how dare you try and hurt a innocent girl!" the girl yelled. She was standing full height and had Rose protectively behind her.
"Damn you girl!" He yelled and disappeared in a flash of light. The girl sighed and turned to Rose. Rose just nodded.
"Rose! Rose!" the girl turned and noticed a tall figure running towards them. Rose stepped out from behind the girl and ran to him. "Oh Rose, I shouldn't have let you do that, I'm so sorry." the Doctor pulled her into a tight embrace.
"Rose, Doctor!" Jack yelled and ran towards them. "What happened?" The Doctor was about to speak, but Rose got there first.
"We ended up finding a whole army, and this girl was facing all of them. And the leader came out and she fought him, hey were is the girl anyways?" The all turned their heads and looked around them. Just a few feet from them, the girl was staggering away. They ran after her. When they reached her, she staggered and fell to her knees. Jack quickly went to her.
"Kid, are you alright?" He asked and tried to help her up. She just pushed him away.
"Go away, I don't need you help."
"No your hurt,we can help you." Jack tried again, but with no success.
"Go away!" She yelled and started caughing up blood. Jack went infront of her and looked at her.
"Please, your going to have to trust me. Ok?" The girl nodded and Jack picked her up slowly. She let her head rest against his chest and she succumbed to the darkness.
So what do you think? Am I rushing it too much? Please tell me! Oh and if you don't review I wont update!
