My last chapter was not my best it had a lot of dialogue in it and was kinda long I actually had to shorten it so thanks for the people who read this jumbled mess.

I rode across the lake to a house on the other side of the lake. After barring the door and windows I fell asleep. That night I woke up and left. I walked up to a door and cautiously walked through it. A villager walked up to me and some ugly ass thing popped out of a villager's head and still walked after me I pulled out my shotgun and destroyed that thing.

"What the fuck was that thing." I wondered to my self.

Up ahead I heard a waterfall and saw a rope over by the side of the cliff. I repelled down the side of the cliff to find a couple of boxes hanging by a nearly invisible chain I shot the chains and hopped across the boxes when the waterfall split apart villagers poured out of a cave behind the fall I made short work of them but nothing else was to be expected.

I walked through the cave and found an insignia that might help with something. I took it and the wall it was on rose up revealing a longer cave. I walked down the cave until I found a boat and rode it until I saw that damn merchant again. I turned a corner and another one of those giant monster came out I rolled out of the way of I kick and shot him and shot him until that weird ass thing came out of his back I pulled out my sword and with one clean slice took it off.

I walked up a wooden path to a church I used that insignia to open the door I went up a ladder to my left I jumped across a chandelier and found some guns on the other side I made a symbol I have seen and bars on the walkway went up I walked through the door in between where the bars went down to find Carlos, Leon, and a girl.

My ideas for this story was spurred from a sugar rush and my next chapter is my favorite because of the first few lines anyway read and review please