Ok, the one that flamed me was right. Chappy 6 and 7 were just fillers. At first on chappy 6, for those who read it, it was pretty much random crap from fma pplz. I changed that from my crappy "day 6" which was just everyone being prepared, but then I thought of something and this is the result. Hope you like it even though this is probably the only best-mysterious that I can make -sweatdrop-
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"Alright then, everything is going as planned" A cloaked figure said "I just hope I'm ready for this..." It looked at her watch. It's 1:36 PM "I'm so glad it's Saturday. No school for me"
It jumped off of a store roof, into a tree and down onto the ground on it's bum "Ittai..." It mumbled "I should practise on landing on my feet nextime..." The hood fell off when it fell to the ground. It was a girl around Winry's age. She had long dirty-blonde hair(up to lower-back) with purple on the ends on her hair(its dyed), tied in pigtails and jade-green eyes. The strange girl stood up and walked off taking off her cloak... or at least trying to since it's somehow stuck...
The girl stopped to see the Elric and Tringham brothers walking together(she got the cloak off). Each siblings talking about 2 diffy topics. The girl pretends to not know them and starts walking on the bros. opposite direction like an ordinary girl walking home
Edward stopped talking for a while and turned around to look at the girl who's still walking. Strange, he thought I thought I just saw--
"Hey, little pea, can you finish what you're talking about?" Russell asked the older Elric
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING AN ANT THAT CANT EVEN BE SQUISHED BY YOUR UGLY SHOES!" Ed yelled
"I dunno... some kid right beside me probably?" Russell gave out a little chuckle and get Ed to talk about before.
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The girl managed to get to the other side. That was close, she thought taking a few breath from nervousness. Did Edward know about me? He probably thought I look suspicious. As she calmed down, she continued.
A few minutes later, the girl found herself to see Lust and Sloth. It's the homunculi
"Hey, why dont we check this place out. Looks like they have real nice clothes" Sloth asked the other homunculus
"You're not a young human girl, Sloth. You're an unage-able homunculus" Lust said
"Yeah, but look at those clothes! They look so cute!"
"For teenagers..."
"Can we go in and look at some stuff? Please?"
Lust stayed silent for a while and sighed "Fine, but we have to hurry or Wrath and Envy finds out we ditched them" Sloth squealed and runs in dragging Lust. When it comes to shopping, it's as if the stores put some kind of weird spell on them to make them act all... girly... I mean, everbody knows that Sloth is somewhere between 30-47.
Question marks were shown everywhere on suspicious-girl's face What on earth was that all about? She walks pass the store that Schoolgirl Sloth and Boring Lust are in.
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Now that she's done bumping into all those people, which was annoying, she can finally go back to a roof and act all mysterious again. YAY!
Edward and Alphonse were going back to get Winry until Al saw someone sitting on the roof. He started to get suspicious about that figure as if it was watching them. Tomorrow's going to be a long day...
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Alright, this the best I can do. Please review about this remake of the 6th day. Tell me how it is. Be honest. No flames cuz when I read the flame, I went down completely and decided to never come to ever(ok, I still go to read other's fanfics but never log in and make any more stories that i can think of even though this the the first. sigh)
Wrath: Yep. She's been out of it for a long while and even cried when she was going to sleep after she read the flame -nod nod-
Faith: Yea, I really did cry. This is what happens when your dad yells and hits you around 4 to 6 years of age... now I'm scared of people that yell at me, hit me, and even tease me... Damn, I gotta get revenge on her and her 2 hoes...
Wrath: Ahem...
Faith: Can care less... Now I feel at least a little better... sigh... these were real nice memories... real nice... Thanks to the flamer, I'm reminded from all those stupid ass memories! -fustrated-
Wrath: AHEM!
Faith: ... Fine... I'll go give us both a popsicle and end this...
