Okie dokie here's chapter 2
Hinote: yo I'm back! This is next exciting installment of immortal love!
Warnings: ok peoples I put a friend lock on this for a reason it's not something for the kiddies. There is a bit of a lime in this ok? If this is not your thing please go somewhere else I will not be held responsible for scaring your minds. Since Alex will be righting that part I will put her name before it. Also this has vampirism in it as well as yaoi.
Disclaimer: this is called a fan fiction. If I owned anything other than this plot line it would be called an owner fiction wouldn't it?
Alex:(dramatic voice) previously on Immortal Love.
I gasp at the beautiful creature in front of me. He has auburn hair that spikes a little. His eyes are the same red-brown color as his hair. His skin is pale but not frighteningly so. I called him a creature earlier because he is smiling at me and in that smile I can see too long pointed fangs.
Chapter 2
I keep staring at his fangs slowly realizing I have no idea who and what he is or where I am.
"Wha-what are you?" the question just jumped completely unbidden out of my mouth and before I can stop myself several others follow. "Who are you? Where am I? How did I get here?" I blush as I realize the third rate interrogation I've just given him. I blush even more as he laughs. It's such a beautiful sound so full of happiness.
"Ok let's start with where you are. You are at my house. You are here because your hurt and I wasn't about to leave you in that ally. I carried you here. My name is Kanbara Takuya(1). And as for what I am...well I don't think you'd believe me." he said that with a chuckle and I feel my cheeks heat up again.
"Try me." I manage to say that without stuttering which surprises me. He's just so enchanting.
"All right. I'm a vampire." he says it so casually that I almost i don't /i believe him, but that would explain the hold he seems to have on me. Vampires are supposed to be very alluring to humans.
Alex: oky doky my turn cracks knuckles
With a burst of courage I pull down the collar of my shirt exposing my neck.
"Prove it. If you are one then bite me." He swallows thickly, and approaches me slowly. He gets so close to me I can feel his breath on my lips and for a moment I think he's going to kiss me, but he redirects leaning down towards my neck instead of my lips
"What's your name?" he whispers in my ear so close I can feel his breathe on my skin again and his lips brush against me with every word.
"ko-kouichi." I knew I'd stutter there. I feel like I'm drowning and floating at the same time(2). I wanna grab him and pull him as close to me as possible. Everything about him is driving me insane!
"Kouichi..." he whispers and I realize his breath is no longer on my ear but on my neck. I gasp as he starts to kiss me there. I feel him smirk against my skin. i he knows how transfixed he has me! And he's enjoying it/i all my thought stop and I grab onto him as I feel his fangs pierce my skin. It's the most wonderful thing I've ever felt. Sparks of what can only be described as pleasure race through me. I squeeze my eyes shut and grasp him tighter as the feeling overwhelms me. A moan escapes my lips as I feel him pull his fangs out of me. Instead his lips attach onto me and he starts sucking. I moan again, louder this time. I can feel my blood caressing my veins as he pulls it from me. I struggle to gain more coherency through the waves of pleasure coursing through me. As I come slightly back to reality I realize that I'm moaning constantly no, my breathing has increased, and my knees have given out causing him to have to wrap his arms around me to hold me up. He pulls away slowly as if reluctant to do so.
Alex: all done. The kiddies can open their eyes again.
I stare in shock as he licks the blood, i my /i blood, of his lips. He lets go of me and my knees collapse from under me. He frowns and kneels next to me on the floor.
"I'm sorry. I guess I took too much. It's just been so long since I've fed. I got a little carried away." he says softly.
"Why has it been a long time since you fed?" I'm not sure why but it worries me that he hasn't been eating.
"Hunters. They're everywhere around here lately. They must've found my...um...meals." he says. I shudder but it's still nice to know he was trying to say that in a way wouldn't disturb me too much. Suddenly I remember I'm supposed to be home right now.
"I have to go home!" I say.
"You can't. I mean you can barely stand." he responds and I get an idea.
"Well you could help me right?"
"I suppose." he answers.
"And if you know where I live you could just erm…drink, I suppose, from me every night and then the hunters wouldn't be able to catch you." that is definitely the most I've ever said in one breath.
"I don't know." he says hesitantly. "If the hunters find a way to link you to me..."
"We wont let that happen!" I insist. I just can't leave him here to starve. He sighs submissively and motions for me to grab onto him. I smirk knowing I've won.
(1)- i stick to the original way of writing a japanese name. last name then first name
(2)-not only is that the cheesyest line i have ever written but it's the best thing i could come up with to describe what i wanted Kouichi to be feeling. if you can't picture how that would feel then use your imaginations.
Hinote: reads what Alex wrote Good Lord. I am so going to Hell. Oh well in the words of the great Porky Pig: Bdee Bdee Bdee that's all folks!
