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A/n: Thank you for your kind reviews. Also sorry for not updateing for ages even though this has been sitting on my pc for ages...i forgot about it sorry. Also i want to know if anyone would be interested in being a Betta for my story? Review and tell me.

A Broken Rose

Chapter 7: Intruder in the brig

Mackenzie sat on the floor of her cell, her brother had still not awoken and she was beginning to get worried, he shouldn't have been unconscious for this long surely. The sound of someone coming down the steps caused her to look away from her brother and to the person coming down the stairs. As he came into view she seen it was the same man that had knocked her brother out. She felt anger boiling inside of her at the sight of him.

"What's wrong, darling? Not happy to see me?" The man questioned with a laugh as he walked closer to her cell. Mackenzie glared daggers at the man, looking him up and down. Taking in his grungy appearance, he looked and smelled like he had never had a bath before; it wouldn't surprise her if that was truly the case.

"Delighted." She told him her voice dripping with sarcasm, giving him another disgusted look as he raked his eyes up and down her body.

"Captain, sent me down here to have a little fun..." He told her giving her an evil smirk as he twirled the keys in his large hands. Mackenzie's blood ran cold at the sight of that smirk; it looked so much like her husbands it scared her.

"Is that so? Then why is he standing behind you looking none to pleased?" She questioned, as the idiot turned to look behind him, she grabbed the keys from his hands before pushing herself as far back in the cell as she could.

"You bitch!" He roared as he seen her with the keys, he pushed his grubby arm through the bars but she was just out of reach.

More feet coming down the stairs were heard and the man gave a frightened look over his shoulder as he seen, the Captain, Gibbs and two others descend the stairs. The Captain looked none to pleased and the large man gulped visibly.

"Reid!" Jack shouted as he had no doubt what the man was going to try and do. "What the hell are you doing down here?"

"Thought you said the Captain sent you?" Mackenzie asked sweetly, smiling slightly, while inside she was still slightly panicked at what might have happened.

"Captain, sir, she...she asked me down here...yeah I was just coming to check on them and then she was saying all these things to me...asking me to let her out and such." Reid said the words stumbling out of his mouth, Mackenzie's face took on a look of pure hatred the thought of her saying anything of the such to the man making her want to hurl.

"Do you think I'm completely stupid?" the Captained asked shouting once again, as the larger man coward back against the wall.

"No sir..." He replied in a small voice.

"You know going against explicit orders such as the ones I gave on deck while ago could be considered mutiny. And everyone knows the penalty for mutiny on my ship." Jack said in his deadly cold voice that always made Mackenzie shiver; she guessed it probably always would.

"Sir, please, there was no mutinous thoughts here sir." Reid started to beg but the Captain just threw him a disgusted look.

"Gibbs, Johnson, accompany this man to the top deck, I will deal with him in a moment." Jack said his voice not quite as cold as it had been, Gibbs and a tall muscle man named Johnson, walked over to Reid and took and arm each before haling him up the stairs.

"Lock...follow them up...make sure there's no trouble." He said turning to the other man, he then nodded and Lock left following the others up the stairs.

"How long was he down here?" Jack questioned his voice returning to normal.

"Not more than five minutes." Mackenzie replied keeping the keys behind her back. Jack turned to leave and she thought she hadn't been spotted.

"Oh and I'll be having those keys back, Kat." He told her turning towards her, smile at the new nickname he gave her, she cursed silently before handing the keys over.

"Thank ye." He said, pressing his hands together, before turning and leaving. This left Mackenzie alone again with her thoughts.

"Captain!" She shouted just before his feet disappeared.

"Aye?" She heard him call back.

"Could my brother please see, your ships doctor now?" She questioned but it sounded more like a plea. she heard sounds of feet coming back down the steps and the Captain came back into view.

"Well luv," He purred his voice smooth as silk, as he moved across to her cell, his arms resting on the bars. "How much do you want him to see the good doctor? What would you do?" There was no doubt of the intendou in his voice.

"Anything." Mackenzie sighed, fully aware that this would probably be the only way to get her brother seen to.

"Anything you say...well then I think we can come to some kind of agreement." He told her as he took the keys from his pockets and opened the door.

A/N: Hehe i'm mean aren't I, just leaving you guys here, well next chapter will be put up sooner with more reivews.