A very big thanks to Sakina the Fallen Angel for the two reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying my poetry. I'll definitely take a look at your Final Symphony poem.
This little poem I'm really proud of. It might not look it but it's very different then the last 3 I've posted. I won't say why though. (Grins evilly) I might post a hint with my next poem.
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Phantom spirit of the heart.A tear pulled towards
Soul companion lost
Silent smiling she stands
Illusion of the mind
Once a being.
Now lost below the waves
'Secret wish, the breath of life
Never to live, lost to
Endless night.
Endure, falling tear forever
Dreaming of the lost one.
