5/21/2022

Ahhhhhhhhh shite. Sorry, it's been so long guys. I have no excuses. I was stuck at around 6,500 words, but I made a promise to myself that I would post it for no less than 8,000 words. I will slowly ramp it up with great quality and increasing quantity. Now. I have been doing well, dealing with irl issues real well, and basically telling myself to make the new habit of working on the stories to break up the useless old habits that screwed up my life. Will also remember to start posting what I have now on pat/reon to start allowing you guys to keep up on what I'm writing.

I'm also coming up with a bunch of ideas and writing them down for enjoyment and future writing, but that's after I finish the current one I'm working on, or at least after 47 chapters. I am a finisher and will continue to do so. Though I have a pat/reon up, do NOT pay me yet until AFTER I got 7 chapters done. Then you will know for sure I am able to continue with what I have started. As for the other ideas, once I'm sure I am consistent, I will put a poll up in pat/reon to decide what kind of stories I will write next, as I literally have too many, and they all sound like good ideas, so why not let my fans decide?

On to the reviews. Since I literally have only two and they are not spam reviews trying to make money off of my expense of what is practically an online virus trap for the stupid and gullible that pisses me off to this day. I have messaged FF but they don't do squat and its still stuck there as of this post. Now the reviews from now on will have specific, will not be if its asked multiple time, brings up good point, or just for fun. I will sometimes respond to the ones that catch my attention and even post it here, but I apologize in advance if I don't answer every single one.

Here it is:

(First place) gangbang-midnight (Jesus Christ could you have picked a worser nametag? And wtf is with the Hersey-ridden profile pic?)

"This is a good fanfiction, I like it yes... It was promising, was - for me at least. The introduction of Howard was a half-welcomed one, considering that he somehow is, the special character inbetween... Himself and Venom. But other than that, I like! Please keep up the good work and writing. In the mean time I suggest that you flesh out your characters more and retain Venom's character... But please, do keep in mind that sometimes typical RWBY crossover tropes and cliches can ruin this great story if used incorrectly or how its used most of the time. (for example: dust till dawn shop scene, meeting Ozpin through that scene and getting accepted into Beacon, typical first classes and RWBY scenes, but with your characters in them oh wow! Uh oh, time to address and stop those evil bullies huehue.). Do continue the original approach, I love it, keep up the good work ya guys!

-Gangbang Midnight signing off! God, it's 2 am."

Response:

"thanks for the review, thanks for reading it at 2a.m. Im doing a slow process of introducing info and not throwing all out the back. Making it realistic and fleshed out"

gangbang-midnight:

Sorry for the late response.

No problem man, take your time - in the end, it'll be worth the read!

Response:

Thanks man. Though your name and profile is of questionable… integrity. You see like a decent dude (no idea what gender they are. So for future reference I'm going to assume if you have a problem with that clarify, otherwise stfu and keep reading and enjoy your day instead of ruining it yourself)

(second place) frolovkirill7 (no idea how you came up with this name)

" "Just look up please." The kid sounded genuine. Ahab decided to humor the kid, lifting his head slightly to peer out of the hole in the building. At the sight of the broken moon, he took a step back as his body tensed from shock. "What-?!" The moon looked like someone nuked it tenfold.

Venom has already seen shattered moon in Chapter 1"

Response:

Yes, I thought I had that same problem as well until I triple checked it and made sure that when Ahab woke up, it was the last day of the new moon, though it seems in RWBY its phases go two times faster (I checked, don't know why or an explanation but I theorize it's a different world from the earth and its shattered. That's the best answer you're going to get) than our moon. So there was no way he would've seen it but only the stars in the sky. And I think it was also the time of the day he also wouldn't be able to tell. But I made sure it wasn't. But if It's still incorrect, let me know through a PM and I will fix it immediately. Thank you for bringing it up.

May their names be remembered into the litanies of Remembrance for being the first to review.

That being said, don't forget to point out inconsistencies, plot holes, and mistakes of any and all kinds to improve how the story is and how it looks. Thank you for your assistance and help. Not sure if I want to withhold chapters in the future for some profit but let me know if I deserve to or not. Kinda what to make money off of it as I'm just near broke, but I do have standards. They will all be free in the end, but I will also slowly but surely ramp up production. But not to a snail's pace of course