Yay! I got my first reviews! Thank you to stormyskys and –0dark-magician0-.

I have to apologise if my writing is a bit hard to follow. I have a short attention span

and if I get bored I'll leave a chapter unwritten so when I go to finish it doesn't add

up. This story is kinda a load of babble but, hay! (I feel really weird. You know, like

the new girl at school.) Anyway on with the show!

Maybe I was wrong? What if you are as cruel as you seem? You went too far this

time. Or is it my fault? All I wanted to do was help.

When you came home that day, you seemed so upset. I tried to talk to you. I tried to

help work things out. But you were so harsh. You told me to stop prying. To stay out

of it, that I was making it worse. I apologised and explained that I was only trying to

help. But you glared at me with hatred in your eyes. You've never looked at me like

that before. You screamed at me to stay out of it, then you hit me. I couldn't stop the

tears from falling.

Broken pieces of a memory

Shattered remnants of this fantasy

Too good to be true

Too true to be false

So much confusion

I'm confused

So much fear

They fear

Never could be

Never had been

There was no chance

I'm very proud of this poem. It was going to be for the first chapter but I changed my

mind. I wrote all of the poems first then built my stories around them. Before I say

goodbye I would like to say that I hate that song my humps by the black eyed peas

and I love these skwigly lines ( )