Yay! I got my first reviews! Thank you to stormyskys and –0dark-magician0-.
I have to apologise if my writing is a bit hard to follow. I have a short attention span
and if I get bored I'll leave a chapter unwritten so when I go to finish it doesn't add
up. This story is kinda a load of babble but, hay! (I feel really weird. You know, like
the new girl at school.) Anyway on with the show!
Maybe I was wrong? What if you are as cruel as you seem? You went too far this
time. Or is it my fault? All I wanted to do was help.
When you came home that day, you seemed so upset. I tried to talk to you. I tried to
help work things out. But you were so harsh. You told me to stop prying. To stay out
of it, that I was making it worse. I apologised and explained that I was only trying to
help. But you glared at me with hatred in your eyes. You've never looked at me like
that before. You screamed at me to stay out of it, then you hit me. I couldn't stop the
tears from falling.
Broken pieces of a memory
Shattered remnants of this fantasy
Too good to be true
Too true to be false
So much confusion
I'm confused
So much fear
They fear
Never could be
Never had been
There was no chance
I'm very proud of this poem. It was going to be for the first chapter but I changed my
mind. I wrote all of the poems first then built my stories around them. Before I say
goodbye I would like to say that I hate that song my humps by the black eyed peas
and I love these skwigly lines ( )
