Disclaimer: I own nothing of the fantastic four; however, I do own the story line and the character Rachel.
Reed first asked what Ben meant by what she did, Ben anwsered, "There was no pulse when we checked, but there is one thing." Sue and Reed took in they died quite well and so Ben continued and said, "She brought you back to life. And Victor lied and said he killed Rachel when he didn't." Then all of a sudden Rachel felt something she never felt before, it was a vision but it was intense it was of Johnny, he was flamed on and Victor was talking to him and saying things that made him angry and when I saw Johnny's face he had cuts and was chained to a wall. Sue looked over at me invisible and asked, "What is it?" I looked up from putting my head in my hands and said, "It is Johnny, Victor has him and he ishurting him."
Sue became really worried but when she looked at Rachel she saw anger and Sue knew that she didn't want anything to happen to him. Rachel blamed herself and never would forgive herself if her friends died without her. But her friends in fact died so it was different. Black tears stung her toned skin she could not cry so she wiped her burning tears away and announced, "We should leave now." Every one left the building and followed Rachel since she sensed where Johnny was held captive.
Sue's hands were shaking from fear that Victor or Doom hurt her brother. Reed was thinking about what Victor confessed about the fact he killed me. Ben was angry and was sure ready to ring Victor's neck. Every one else looked at Rachel she wasn't worried nor fearful. She just walked in the building steadily. Reed grabbed Rachel's hand before she made it fully indoors he said, "If he lied to Ben and said he killed you then why would…" Then I felt an aching pain in my left arm. Sue gently retrieved it and saw burn marks and then it healed. We rushed up the building stairs when I entered there was fire surrounding every part of the room. I narrowed my vision and saw Victor standing next to Johnny. Reed and the other split away from me andRachel walked up the stairs and walked in the room and ran over to Johnny and burned the metal chains with my acid power. He felt to ground and he grabbed my hand and pulled me down to dodge a bolt of electricity. And I healed him and he got up in surprise. Victor grinned under his mask.
He was destined to rid of me. Johnny shot a fire ball at his face and it stalled him and I teleported us over a dark hallway. I ordered Johnny not to make a flame since it would make an every thing bright.Rachel thenguided Johnny over to where the others were and when he was running with me he said, "How did you heal me?" Rachel turned over to him and said, "I don't know but you'd be surprised." He smirked and ran into Sue but she was invisibleRachel said, "Hey, Sue where are the others?" Sue turned visible and said, "How can you see me?" Johnny was going to ask that but waited, she answered, "I told you I have enhanced vision."
We continued running she saw Ben putting up a fight with Victor and Reed was knocked unconscious."Rachel turned around and faced Sue and Johnny and said, "You guys stay together." Johnny at that point didn't understand. Sue put up a force field to protect her and her brother from the guards shooting at them. Rachel Ran up to Reed and healed him and when Johnny and Sue appeared Victor said, "Aww, seems like the all powerful Rachel has a thing for the Human torch!" before he shot a bolt at Johnny.It missed. I walked in front of Johnny and Sue and was immediately interrupted by several guards trying to hold me down as he grabbed the nearest member which was of course Johnny. Her eyes were burning in anger. She was pushed and kicked in the face and all over her body. Sue was crying, Reed closed his eyes. Ben was confused.
Victor then declared, "Rachel, my darling, you could have killed me when you had the chance.you could allbut you didn't and now I will kill your friend here." A daring Rachel just smirked and said, "Try me!" After Victor VonDoom heard, he was surprised under his mask. Sue just looked at me with confused eyes. The guards continued punching her and holding her down until... She broke loose and teleported over to Johnny. She then grabbed Victor by his throat and pulled him close and said, "Why come back when you always know you'll loose." She then let go to hear himand he said, "You always amazed me, with your swagger but you must know; the dreams they are true and you know it." He looked at everyone's confused faces and then looked atRachel who was trying to make sense of it all, then continued "Those visions that you have, who knew." She turned and asked, "How do you know of those visions?" Rachel was kind of shocked but then again Victor always figured things were different about her, like her powers for example.
He walked up to her and said, "You know what you have to do." Johnny was still being held now by one of the guards by gun point and all she had to do was to wait but then Victor said, "You see fire, don't you?" Rachel had been seeing these visions for two months but there was nothing that she could make clear sense of it by. She was completely thrilled he then said as he was walking over to his assistant and then said, "You see Rachel I know you what you see." She then asked, "How?"
Victor came over face to face and said, "You sent them to me when you wounded and when I thought I rid of you but you never seem you go away you are like a parasite, a virus." She flicked her wrist and the guy the was holding Johnny was now lying on the floor knocked out. Victor turned and said, "There nothing you can do to save it." He pulled a button piece and laid his finger on it and said, "This is the end." He then forcefully press down and then a big explosion blinded and blown everything to bits.
