Princess Whizbee: The first chapter was just a recap of what was happening. This chapter should have conversation.
Firstmorningdew: Really it is I who should welcome you into this story.
Birthday Party
Lucy
I woke up this morning and lept out of bed, knowing that today I would be 16, and I would have the best birthday party ever! Everyone I love will be there, and I get a birthday surprise! I wonder what it will be. As soon as I stepped out of my room, Susan ushered me into hers. She had a gorgeous dress waiting in there for me. I put it on, and she did my hair. We walked outside, and everyone, I mean literally everyone screamed
"Happy Birthday, Queen Lucy!"
I just beamed in happiness. I was carried to my throne (I could get used to this) and family by family people started bringing up presents. The pile was growing bigger and bigger. I can't believe so many people brought presents! After the pile had stopped growing larger, I stood up (I'm surprised they could see me over the pile) and said
"Thank you everyone, for the most wonderful birthday a girl could have."
"Luc, you haven't gotten all of your surprises yet." Said Peter.
"Really? I thought everyone coming was the sur- ASLAN!"
I ran, no bolted down the steps and lept on Aslan. He was here! For my birthday!
"Aslan, Aslan, Aslan! I missed you so much!"
"And I missed you dear one. Happy birthday."
He then whispered in my ear
"I'm not the only birthday surprise you're going to get."
Tumnus
She looks perfect, absolutely perfect. I want to leap up right now and kiss her to no end, but I
realize something. I'm not good enough for her. Someone as beautiful and happy as Lucy does not deserve a half-goat half-human like me. She deserves a prince. I can still tell her I love her, and give her a wonderful day tomorrow, but that will be it. I will not go any further. I love her, and it breaks my heart to say this. I just want what Lucy will want. She won't want someone like me.
Well, I gave her a Narnian flute for her birthday, something both of us will understand from the first time we met. I will teach her how to play it whenever she asks. Tomorrow I will show her the most beautiful spots on Narnia, and maybe even teach her to play. I hope she will enjoy it.
