Okay i admit chapter 2 was rushed so i decided to make it better by making a few thing not happend and finding a place to rest, the original chapter was made at like 2:48 in the moring right after chapter 1 so i hope you like this re-written/edited version.

Kyoukai kitsunekaki: Organization Foxfire

Naruto's journey was not long; the Valley of the End was close to Konoha. Only a few more minutes and Sasuke Uchiha would be back in his village, and Naruto would be look at as a hero… or so he thought. Naruto was jumping from tree branch to tree branch then he stopped, he could see Konoha's gate. He leaped out of the tree onto the ground, heading toward the gate. As he entered the village he was surrounded by villagers and some ninjas, they all circled him. "What have you done to our Sasuke, he's bleeding don't you have a brain boy!" One villager cried out while another said, "What the hell is wrong with you, attacking your own!" "Naruto look what you've done to Sasuke he's hurt really bad, you nitwits don't you understand 'bring him back without a scratch' you so damn stupid!" Sakura said screaming and slapping him.

'I knew this might happen kit, as soon as the fight started.'Kyuubi said sadly. 'Well baka you could've warned me.' Naruto said mentally cursing him. 'Kit I think you should drop the Uchiha and make a run for it.' 'No I won't, that won't do any good anyway.' he said bravely. 'Your funeral baka'

"…And I hate you Naruto we all do, why don't you get your demon ass out of here." Sakura was still screaming at him. "Why let the han'yō out here, we would be blamed for all the destruction he will cause won't we?" Asked a villager who cared for Naruto, all I can say is that she was infuriated. "Hell no, I say we kill him before he can cause real damage!" Suggested Ino. " For once I agree with Ino pig, lets kill him." Yelled Sakura. Naruto was just standing there, then he saw a kunai coming his way. Naruto dodged it by going airborne, wrong move, Ino and Sakura jumped into the air and kicked him the force causing him to go back all the way to the gate. A ANBU squad was near by watching all of this happing, they didn't care they was like pay per view to them, they loved seeing the blonde getting his ass kicked.

Naruto had had gotten up, only to be put down by 4 shurikens and 2 kunias. She had have enough of this, the villagers were now throwing stones at Naruto, Hinata leaped in front of Naruto kunai ready to protect him from incoming projectiles. She successfully blocked almost all of their attacks but a Kunai, that's when the village stoped attacking, hit her. "Don't you see, your killing an innocent man…your killing him…." Hinata said panting, her left shoulder was bleeding. Naruto was sick to his stomach, but he got up holding his arm.

"You all make me sick, you love a traitor instead of the one helping you that actually cares about!" Hinata said screaming at them, her killer intent rising every second. But someone put a hand on her, from behind. "Hinata thank you, thank you." Was all he said.

"N-naruto y-your welcome." She said blushing; her killer intent disappeared completely. 'Wow one second she's all angry, now she's blushing and stuttering.'

'Kit I just want to say… you're a dumbass.' Kyuubi said chuckling 'Hey baka, why the hell are you calling me a dumbass?" Naruto asked bewildered. 'Well two reasons, first one is you're a dumbass, second don't you see it in her face every time she looks at you…its like she has all these emotions at once.' 'Your not making sense.' Naruto said still confused. 'Kit you'll find out sooner our later hopefully sooner' Kyuubi said smirking in his cage.

"I'm sick of this village treating Naruto this way, treat him like a missing-nin or some piece of trash." Said Hinata still yelling at the villagers. "I have decided that I will leave this village, I feel like shit most of the time here anyway." Naruto said taking off his forehead protector then took out a kunai and slashed it, he walked right through the gate leaving his village behind tears started to flow but he didn't care he just walked on. Hinata did the same and joined him, thinking that if she didn't that would be it the last time she saw Naruto Uzumaki. "You shouldn't have done that, the ANBU will come after you." Naruto said concerned, he didn't want her to get hurt but he didn't know why, well it was probably because she helped him and he wanted to do was return the favor. "Hinata your life was better than mine, so why did you come?" He asked her while stopping on the trail, Hinata was looking down then she bumped into him. "S-sorry N-naruto, it's just that my life was the same…the way m-my father treats me n-no one ever r-really ac-acknowledged me." She said blushing into deep color of red. "I acknowledged you, I thought you were elegant when you fought Neji." He complimented her.

'Hey Kyuubi did I use the word elegant right?" He asked the demon king. 'Sure, kit, sure.' Kyuubi said thinking Naruto just advanced a whole new level of idiot. 'Yay, I'm speaking fancy." Naruto said rather perky.

Hinata was looking redder than a tomato from Naruto's compliment. "Hinata are you okay, you look like you burning up?" Naruto asked in another concerned tone. "Y-yes N-naruto, I-m okay." Hinata said thinking 'Naruto's concerned about me, you baka why don't you tell him you love him, but what if he doesn't love me back I'll just tell him later.'

"Hinata are you listening to me?" Naruto asked even more concerned. If blushing could kill you then Hinata would die of it, "Y-yes N-naruto." They started to walk off the trail into the forest; hours would past until they came to a river. "Lets camp here Hinata." Naruto said. "Okay N-naruto." She agreed. "Okay I'll go get wood for a campfire." He said leaping off. Hinata decided to go and bathe, she took off her clothes and entered the river. At first her hair went straight up because the water was cold, then she adjusted to it.

Naruto found this big log and decided that would be enough for a fire, he started leap away back to the campsite when his stomach started to growl. "I'm hungry." He whined. 'Maybe I should kill something, or I could get a fish from the river.

'I better hurry before Naruto gets back, I would die of embarrassment is he saw me like this. (I actually think Hinata has a great body but a little too skinny, see boys and girls this is what low self-esteem could do to you and other stuff like anti-social skills and attempt-suicide which should not be tried cause it's well dangerous. Duh Alex thanks for being obvious .)

Naruto hit the landed on the ground with a soft thud but loud enough to be heard by Hinata. "Hinata, where are you?" Naruto called out. Hinata turned red she didn't know what to do, so she dived into the water. "Well maybe she had to 'use' a bush or something." He said while taking off his shirt and started to jump into the river. Hinata couldn't hold her breath so she had to surface. "OH MY GOD HINATA YOUR NAKED!" She heard Naruto screaming like a girl.

Well i won't turn this into a M fic so no lemons, and no description of how she looks and that are really descriptive. So you know what to do guys your reviews help me to make my story become better that why i rewritten this chapter. so review your ideas inspire me.