Just so u know I added a paragraph into the last part of this chapter. It's not that important but…
I am so sorry about that cliffy but my betta reader told me to stop the chapter there and so I did and yeah it's all her fault. By the way that sort of cliffy was dedicated to tickled blue! Anyone who has read her story up to chapter 22 will know what I'm talking about. At least she updated! Yeah I am sorry it took me so long to update but I had camp and we both had an endless week of tests and my betta reader couldn't edit my story so yeah. Nways read on and hopefully enjoy the chapter.
Important: I am sorry but I think you guys will be in a bit of disappointment at the cliffy ends but originally the chapter ended later so that's why it isn't really… Moving on I'm really sorry if it is a disappointment but… oh and lastly this is a very short chapter so I'm also sorry for that. Now I will shut up and let you guys read on… actually I forgot but I didn't thank my reviewers last time so yeah I'll thank you guys at the end!
Chapter 4
I regained my senses and before he could continue I stepped on his foot really hard. That was my second mistake. Don't get me wrong though, it worked. He had stopped talking but when I stepped on his foot his other foot which was taking a step forward turned toward me instead. This ended up with him tripping and ripping my gown causing us both to fall. He ended up on top of me, which was a very awkward position to be in, especially in front of THE ENTIRE COURT. Great they'll be talking about this for ages now. I looked up and glared at him and he glared right back as if this was my fault. Well I'll give him something to blame me about. Why that little ass!
Well um Ella tried to say something but for once she was unsuccessful. No one else dared to utter a sound due to the immense shock they had just received.
Cowen got up and he offered his hand to me, like the perfect gentleman, but I refused to take it and got up myself. Stupid Cowen, always trying to make himself look better than me whatever the situation. Mother and father are probably going to blame this all on me. As if I wanted this to happen, I mean look at me. I looked down and saw my beautiful gown had a huge rip from my feet to the top of my knees. You could see my legs now. Tears started forming in my eyes when I looked up at my parent's disappointed and dismayed faces. This was all because of HIM. I would not cry in front of all these people especially not in front of HIM. I would not give the satisfaction of him getting to me. No. I would simply save the tiny amount of dignity I still have left and run out of the hall.
Making my decision I ran through the castle with the tears threatening to spill. Running to someplace where no one would find me. My feet led me to the royal menagerie and there I found a small clearing that would keep me hidden from strangers and there I fell and started to cry. I don't know how long I cried but it seemed like ages.
That is what happened and now I think is the time to fulfill my promise. Cowen will pay. I laid there thinking of something to do to him. After awhile I fell asleep with a plan fully formed in my head.
This is the part I added
I woke up with the sun shining down onto my face. I blinked and then all last night's events came back. I was so angry with everybody but in particular…at HIM. Especially At HIM. It was all his fault. What was up with him anyway? Why did he do that? I got up and looked down at my dress again and saw it was covered with dirt and leaves. I dusted them off hurriedly. I better get back to the castle. Mother and father are surely worried. I didn't want to go back yet though. I wondered around for a bit looking around me and I found that I didn't know my way back to the castle. Great. Just great. I bent down and rested my head on the ground again trying to find any of my footprints leading to the castle. I found one, two… I continued following them until the edge of the forest. It seemed a long way. I'm pretty sure it wasn't that long. At the edge of the clearing I looked out and there to my relief and fright I saw …
AN- I know. Sorry short chapter but don't worry next chapter will come very soon. This was the only way I could update quickly and I promise as soon as my betta reader edits chapter 5 I'll post it. By the way if you're confused about Sabrina saying 'and that is what happened' in the last paragraph, remember she is recounting what happened to her from before. If you don't understand read the beginning of chapter 1. Please Review if you're still confused, review and I'll try my best to explain. Please Review :P
Now a thanx 2 my wonderful, lovely reviewers, who are wonderful
Oh and just so u know um… I have more spelling and grammatical errors esp. in chapter 1 because I posted up the wrong file after changing Ally's name and I didn't realise till later what I had done and since I'm such a lazy person I didn't bother to post up the real one so now that that's cleared up well….
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