I want to thank all the people who have reviewed this story and who keep reading it. The people who have flamed deserve a thanks too. I need some critisism or else my ego will get too big. I also want to say that there may seem to be things unexplained,don't worry when this story is finished, everything will make sense. I've finished writing it and it's 23 chapters long! That's the longest I've ever written and I'm sorta proud of myself. So anyway I'll try updating more quickly. Here's chapter Eight. Enjoy!
Song to listen to while reading - "Every Breath You Take" By The Police (Old school I know)
Chapter Eight
When Yuki wakes up, his head is pounding and his whole body is stiff.
After explaining he was staying home, he snuggles down in bed, to mope.
The rat remembers Kyo's story and retrieves it from his desk.
Picking up from where he left off.
Yuki reads where Aki and Matsuri are talking in the hallway.
"Misaki cooked breakfast and she wants us to walk to school with her, so don't be slow." Aki says.
Matsuri nods and goes to get dressed.
When he walks downstairs a while later, the lack of sleep started to hit him.
Foolishly he had stayed up all night drawing another picture of Aki.
Now he would suffer the day in a haze.
He quickly eats then gathers his books for school.
Misaki and Aki start out walking to school and Matsuri hangs back.
He didn't really feel like joining in the converstaion.
"What's wrong with you, idiot?"
Aki questions.
Matsuri is suddenly brought back to reality by his crushes' harshness.
"Nothing."
He mumbles and continues to shuffle along to school.
The whole day went by slowly and Matsuri watched the clock as it ticked by the seconds.
When the end of the day bell rings, he bolts out of the classroom and straight home.
He doesn't even wait for Misaki or Aki.
Once in the shelter of his room, the boy begins to work on his drawing some more.
An hour later he has perfected it, and lay it out on his desk.
A knock on the door makes him jump.
"Yeah?" He questions spinning to see his guest.
He was shocked to find Aki standing in the doorway, giving him a strange look.
"Why didn't you wait for us today?" He asks.
Matsuri doesn't answer.
He was too busy trying to hide his artwork.
Aki being himself, glides over and plucks the paper from Matsuri's hands.
"What's this?"
He looks at it intently, all the while Matsuri sat silent.
It was all over.
His crush knew now, and would probably ignore him for ever.
"W-what's this?"
Aki asks agian.
"It's a drawing of you. I drew it." Matsuri says.
He was trying to gauge Aki's reations.
Was it good or bad?
"I know what it is! What I meant was why did you do this?"
Okay, it was bad.
Matsuri figured he might as well come out and tell him.
"Well Aki, I have...um...I have feelings for you...strong ones."
All was silent, then Aki says, "What?"
He sounded shocked.
Matsuri hadn't anticipated shock.
Anger, yes. Outrage and maybe embarassment.
But not shock.
"I love you."
Before Aki could protest, Matsuri quickly kisses his crush. T
hen feeling nearly sent him over the moon.
It was wonderful.
Aki's lips were soft and warm.
Taking more of a chance, Matsuri licks the lips beneath his own and Aki parts them slightly.
He's accepting it!
Matsuri was overjoyed.
His tongue darts in gently to explore the unknown cavern.
Aki moans as Matsuri deepens the kiss.
He ever so slightly pushes Aki back onto the bed and begins kissing down the boy's neck.
Yuki stops there.
He had started to become aroused somewhat because he could picture him and Kyo doing that.
He quickly glances through what is a severly hot description of intercourse.
He decides not to read it.
Nontheless, the point is made.
No wonder Kyo was embarassed when he found out Yuki had read some of this story.
How on earth did he write this?
The rat was dissapointed to see that Kyo hadn't written anymore.
Yuki wanted to find out what happens the next morning.
Does Aki regret what he's done?
Does he realize he too loves Matsuri.
The rat would most likely never find out.
Not unless he could convince Kyo of his feelings.
Not the best chapter, I know. Is it just me or did this seem crappy? It most likely wasn't just me. Well I tried. Oo and no one has pointed this out yet but, Kyo's story seems bad, casuse it's supposed too. He's new to writing so I made him worse than me. God bless him.lol. So review please.
