Ok here is chapter 2
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Chapter 2
After school everyone walked home together, except for Hana and Uo, who had decided to go to the mall. When they got to the house they saw Hatori's car parked out front. Yuki quickly marched ahead and went inside.
"Get out!" he yelled as everyone walked in. Daniel looked in the room. He saw two men talking to each other on one side of the room, and another being yelled at by Yuki. "Get out!" he yelled again. "Now, now Yuki," said what looked like an older version of Yuki, "You shouldn't yell at your brother."
'Well that would explain the resemblance,' thought Daniel.
"So you must be the new Sohma we've heard about," said one of the other men, "Yu must be…..Daniel, right? I'm Hatori. And this is Shigure. And that, over there, is Ayame." "Who is leaving!" yelled Yuki.
"Now, Yuki," said Ayame, "Don't be rude to your guests. I am Ayame, Yuki's older brother, and…..." he walked over to Daniel, "your new master. Bow down to my holiness."
"Ummmm….." said Daniel.
"Leave him alone, Aaya." said Hatori.
"Get your holy butt out of here!" yelled Yuki as he shoved Ayame into the hall and around the corner. Momiji followed them.
Daniel just stood there in shock.
As the evening progressed and they all had dinner, Daniel started to realize something; Yuki and Kyo liked Tohru, yet they hated each other. Throughout all of dinner, they watched her. But something else was suspicious about this side of the Sohma family, something strange. But Daniel loved Tohru, so he needed to find a way to get rid of their love for her. As he was thinking, Hatori was staring at him, there was something oddly familiar agout this boy.
Daniel turned to look at Shigure. He looked like a perfect person for his plan, he would use him somehow.
Kyo got up and left to go to his room to practice martial arts, and Tohru left to do dishes. Haru and Daniel started talking again.
"Ok," said Hatori, "Ayame and I are leaving. Anybody who wants a ride to the main house can come along." Momiji and Haru both got up and went to the car.
"Bye!" they chorused.
"Um… Hatori?" asked Daniel, "Can I have a ride to the main house?"
"You live in the main house?" asked Shigure.
"Yes. With my dad and little sister."
"Sure. You can have a ride. Just get in the car."
"Ok, thanks. Bye, Tohru. See you tomorrow."
"Bye, Daniel," said Tohru as she came out of the kitchen.
When they were back at the main house everyone went off to their houses. Daniel watched as Momiji and Haru went to the 'inside' of the main house. 'They must be pretty important if they live on the inside,' thought Daniel. He then watched Hatori and Ayame walk into the main building, where the head of the family was supposed to be living. Nobody was allowed to see him unless they were summoned or his physician. 'Hatori must be his physician,' thought Daniel. Daniel walked off to his house thinking 'What was so important about them?'. As he went into his house a young man watched him from a window. "So, I have finally found you," said Akito, "this time you won't escape." He watched Daniel go into his house and then turned away from the window as Hatori and Ayame walked in.
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