Hi guys
Thank you all so much for your kind and supportive words.I'm very surprised how cultured and nice reviews I got from you and I wasn't destroyed by my hellish shitty grammar or fucking Rem hate again internet and other toxic shit.
So I decided to continue,but I don't promise anything I will try :)
Unfortunately I couldn't find a beta reader but I check it several times to make sure there are not to much basic errors,very cringe feeling and a lot of repetition.I use the DeepL translator but still sometimes brutal how mix that it is better than the others.
About the story, well for now I'll stay in Emillia's camp and try to finish it, and then it's a next Crush camp or Knights how they handle consequences.
SouthernGentleman21 thanks again, you made me very happy your review.
Let's go!
Chapter 2
A red-haired Oni, still lazing between pillows and blankets, could not rest her mind.
Natsuki Subaru, what to think of him and his life and disgustig curse?No matter how much she thought, she was unable to find the right answer in her heart and forgiveness for all the cruelty and wrong she had done towards him, be kinder to him and love him as so many girls who had been seduced by Barasu stupid but sweet charm already.
Too much she was already owed to boy...really too much.
He rescued her sister from the curse and forgave them,saved them from cult attack which Roswall the lord of the province was supposed to do but her Master-love abadoned her,Subaru killed himself to try to get her sister back only to then break the fool boy's heart that it was too late.
Then the hell and nightmare of sanctuary and not even wanting to think about the 4 as it was called during the viewing, her own uselessness and stupidity, obsession with Roswall, abandon the most precious thing of all her own sister to die.
Broken by the shame the girl,the pain of Barusu,failed save sister.
One thing she is determined what she can do, even if the world collapses and no will never doubt Barusu and will stand by him no matter what he says or if she could not do much for Ram as much as he did for her and for precious sissy, she will work and not be ashamed of her guilt and was make better herself.
But bad habits and nature are not so easy to change…
Ram:ahhhh….. Damn I've been promising big words and much but simple morning beats me how you do it sissy...sigh
Ram finally crawled out of bed and exited hallway to find a muscular fit boy.
Ram:Garf… what are you looking for?
Garfiel:Ohh Ram morning, just sister searc for what's for breakfast.
Ram:...? are so hungry already you silly kitty.
Ram playfully teasing little Garf but she understood why the tiger boy was thinking about breakfast so has to be up much earlier and when it is breakfast time he has been training and exercising, he has had little breaks,Ram and Frederica were getting worried he was overdoing it but no serious trouble eventually he just knocks himself out.
When things finally settled down Garfiel could only think of one thing to do to protect his captain and the sanctuary his sins were too easily forgiven by Subaru and he hated captain just hated himself too much and thought worthless so he thought everything was his why?
He's not even part of the screwed up world damit!
They took his captain away from a wonderful loving family without any knowledge or was so angry about everything that happened to Subaru, he cried a lot and was sad but that was slowly replaced by anger.
The witch, too, Garf doesn't care about crazy bitch about how much she loves her captain, a selfish woman who brought him here.
He kept thinking of Subaru's parents who were so cool and nice, no wonder his captain was so amazing, the best.
Garfiel:Yeah I've worked pretty good myself but it's still nothing and little, as soon as I eat I'm going back on the field at least until the likes of the vampire bitch won't even be a match for me.
Ram and Garfiel think again of the last fight between mansion and... was close...
Garfiel:The woman Ram,she would have won if she wasn't worried about her ha sister and I took everything in fighting her but my amazing self yet I only beat her by luck...it's so Sanctuary shield... what a joke.
Garfiel then turned away not wanting to look the red Oni in the eye, but Ram noticed his teary eyes about slowly to break.
Ram: You fool cat, are you really going to cry in front of me? It's pathetic.
Garfiel:… Shut up.
Ram who has had too much of for everything has now stepped up behind Garf to gently rub tiger boy's back.
Garfiel:What?Why?Ohh you finally noticed amazing myself?
Ram hear Garfiel has a hiccup and tries to hold it back,so hard but his emotions win.
Ram:Silence!...Garf, please listen to me very carefully now.
Ram: You were up against an opponent who had been killing, fighting, with a nearly indestructible body for you were lucky or not to defeat not only this monster but several Mabest at the same are you talking about then silly cat?
Garfiel is happy for Ram's support and has been told repeatedly by the wonderful captain that without him they are all lots even at his very young age he can still defeat a famous and ruthless assassin like Elsa the gut is always talking to him about how strong he can become in the future and then be by his side always.
While they were stuck in this moment, Garfiel and Ram were trying to gather their thoughts and feelings, another thing started to bother the two proudest members or rather former members of the they finally headed for the kitchen Ram finally got to work, Garf want to sneak around with pots and and his sister
Garfiel: Thank you Ram.
Ram: You're welcome but don't think it's going to happen often, my time is precious
Garfiel:Yeah,yeah and Ram what do you know when you get back captain?It's a strange feeling that gets on my nerves to.
Ram: We've only got weeks to wait Barasu, the absence of that fool is becoming Ram also has more and Rem are starting to take advantage of each other for comfort , I see Barusu's stupid perverted face on is distant again and spends her time with books and and Frederica together are the best who can cope without Otto is buried in work more than usual and meanwhile he suspect is looking for something but overburdening himself.
We miss him... need him back fast..
Gafiel's eyes just widen she just said!Ram who always Subaru playful insults,back and forth biting each other is never honest and proud of admitted she misses his captain.
The tiger boy who a minute ago was an emotional mess and teary eyed now could hardly help laughing at Ram's change and Captain's coolness even for her is irresistible and would stole Garf's love, Subaru is the only opponent from whom he will accept defeat.
Ram now could only curse herself, Garf's smirking face and the opportunity he tell she had other made a mistake.
Garf:Hey Ram what did you just say?
Garf now playfully teasing Ram back earlier.
Ram: I don't know what you are talking about
The two most stubborn persons, who only a few minutes ago were about to drown in their sins and uselessness, now, supporting each other, relying on their friends,loved and remembering the kind words of their captain-friend, break out and look to the future
In another room there is a great spirit or rather drill loli as your lovely contrator would call returned to reality in Subaru's room, which was now depressingly large and empty without her big brother, platonic love. Beatrice stayed in this room despite the terrible atmosphere and the lack of the most important part because betty Subaru smell, and a lot of he loved things still surrounded her with little spirit. It's pretty reassured her las once it's over, she won't let go of her dear contrator ever alone, and they'll go,togather whatever it is.
Half-Elf and Oni offered Beako to sleep with her, and the two girls were already together for a few nights. But Beatrice still had a thorn in the two girls against them for being so cruel or useless to her lovely Subaru, of course Spirit knew how hypocritical she was but there was nothing she could do about it her heart.
Because of Subaru's request, the little loli has already given in to her anger, too kind,forgiving foolish contrator. It's one part she hates and loves about him same time.
Beako took a deep breath in search of Subaru's sweet scent which only made her feel perverted but so reason she didn't go with it was not wanting Subaru to be Oni and Half were constantly on top of her fool contractor's guilt and over didn't want Beatrice to fall into this or worse get bored and abandoned by this.
Slowly preparing for another dull day, the little spirit would not let Betty be useless without had let him down too many times while she was drowning in self-pity for so small a pathetic Subaru went through unimaginable pain and sadness, yet a little courage and faith would not let him defeat.
She wanted to cry...over and over again but it didn't solve anything and her tears so long ago running dry. The great rabbit scene took everything out of the poor unfortunately, Subaru's pain didn't even end there.
Beatrice felt as if the world itself hated her dear contrator, wanted to break and destroy him at any Betty Subaru's mental strength and greatness could overcome the disgusting now.
So the one thing Beatrice wanted to do or could do, learn.
Her contrator may not have been the smartest of men world, but in an emergency, his unique thinking, excellent memory,courage, ability to learn,kind heart, led him to victory. But the price was always Subaru's life.
While Beako could not protect Subaru from this cursed ability and lock him up because if he had any love to die no question he would kill himself for anyone from his camp or other camps such as Crush to save them.
But with her contractor no longer alone how many unnecessary deaths,bad endings can protect Betty Subaru?It made Beatrice brighten bit and all she wanted to know was the authorities,Subaru's abilities,her enemies strength and weakness.
Together they will be unstoppable, whether their enemies are witches, archbishops, tyrants, madmen or the gods will then crush them without giving them a chance hurt Subaru.
Knock-knock... A knock-knock disturbed the loli spirit's warrior mindset and sweet melancholy.
Petra:Good morning to bother you but breakfast is almost ready.
Beatrice:I know, suppose.
Petra: I was just worried Beatrice...
Beako:...sing..you don't have to worry about me infact.I am much older than you and I am not a fragile soul like half-elf child and Oni, Betty Subaru has already given me love what I deserve.
Petra:Sorry…
In her childish mind Petra was so worried about Beatrice who had become her best friend after the events at the Santcury, because after the watch was over and they returned to the spirit she had shut herself away and had much less to do with her and the absence of Subaru was a catastrophe Petra but to have Beako leave her was a only had Frederica left but she was busy with her friend was not even with Subaru!Petra could only sulk, so much had changed mansion and she hated it.
Subaru managed to save his adopted little sister from misery and guilt with lots of head pat,hugs,sweet words and something special that only stays between Betty and why did Beako get colder and not want to play with her?
This has made Petra terribly curious, so much so that she forgets the hell she saw, which would be impossible if Beako's reaction and behavior weren't so strange, extreme...and else did Subaru give Beatrice that is special and stays between them and can't be told to anyone?
Petra now narrowed her eyes suspiciously and watched Beako's face, curious to see her reaction.
Petra:Beatrice-sama.
Beatrice:What, infact?
The look on Petra's face told her exactly what this brat was thinking, it made Beako feel as if blood would have spurted into her tiny face if she had shame and embarrassment of what he had done to her, shewould never be had almost erased all the bad memories she had seen on that damn screen.
Petra:What was the special Subaru gave you?
She couldn't take it anymore Petra wanted to know what was so powerful that made Beako so strong and not think so much about her horrible mother and her lies, Subaru's death , Beako's stubbornness that led to her death again, and everything that happened.
Beatrice, as Petra indirectly asked the question, felt a little dizzy, her ears were red, her face and some parts of her dress were beginning to take same color.
Petra: What the...?
Frederica:Ohh Petra you're here.
The blonde maid emerged from the river already looking for the two of them where breakfast was getting cold, and they were waiting for her Subaru-sama had a lovely habit that Frederica had grown very fond of that they all ate together and sit down and talked about their day as family and friends not as work colleagues.
The blonde maid appeared in the already looking for the two of them, for it was getting cold breakfast and they were waiting for -sama had a lovely habit, which Frederica had grown very fond of, eating together and sitting down and talking about their day as family and friends, not as colleagues.
Petra:Oh sorry Frederica-sama I just wanted to invite Beatrice to have breakfast with us.
Frederica:I thought so Petra but you've been away for a while what took you so long?
Petra:Beako is very slow in Subaru's room all day long or researching in the library, she is hardly with me now
Frederica:And where is he now?
Petra's confusion is only growing, first Beako's suspicious maiden behaviour, now her dear sister teasing her.
Petra:What, we just talk her..
There was only empty space left for loli where they were talking before, Beatrice not missing an opportunity to escape the little peasant girl's scandalous questions, Subaru's gift just for her, she doesn't need to know Half-elf and Oni girl especially.
Elsewhere, a dead tired merchant lay on his desk, defeated by all the work and his own mission, which he decided to after watching if it killed him.
Even when Roswall had been here before the amount of work had been now that creepy clown was locked up and only at Subaru's request not killed, it only got own little job he decided to do was gathering sift through every scrap of information even if it was the most unremarkable of things but if it meant protecting his friend or helping him even a little, he would listen to him as Santcury in his death trap would do anything.
The mercant mind is still clear remembering his best friend's words and tone.
When they finally woke up Subaru and were able to talk finally after the girls rush , Subaru mainly started talking about how camps and everyone was okay after the horror they had seen and what their own camps would be like after Roswall out.
This only made Otto smile again at his dear friend's nature of worrying about others at first and not himself, but he quickly remembered when he was talking to Oni's lover on the hill how much he hated , this had been shaken up enough by many of the girls who wanted to get into his friend's pants and by others and himself that Subaru shouldn't think about such things but there would be time for his friend to recover.
As he thought about it and picked himself up a job as and was already looking over little reports or rumors, witch cult, anything that might be dangerous Subaru, his eyes caught on a particular thing that made him think he was going to fall off his chair.
He reached for it in fear, the seal on the letter didn't bode well, but when he opened it he thought it was a joke...unfortunately it wasn't
You can't...
Otto:...
Otto:Why?And how?Why would Natsuki-san want to do that?
The merchant clenched his teeth, hands into fists in rage he never wanted to see again but Subaru agreed at the special request of the knights and other cadets.
Roswall Mathers special circumstances, and Natsuki Subaru at the hero's request to rejoin Emillia's camp.
Otto:….
Otto..No….No
Otto:Fuck...Fuck,FUCCKKK
He understands exactly why Subaru wants the clown his unforgivable sins, his disgusting deeds, Roswall is the most powerful magician who ever 400 years of kidnapping his own body, he has accumulated vast knowledge, contacts everywhere that could be he has the wealth to support and sustain his camp.
The problem is that he himself somehow tolerates Roswall again for the sake of his best friend, the others are another matter...
Otto:Damn it, Natsuki-san how could you think that.
And with that the merchant was drowned into another problem.
Knock...Knock...
Otto: ….Yes?
Author's thoughts
Sorry guys for fewer and shorter chapters this time, seemed like a good place to stop here and slowly I ran out of ideas, the amount of repetition is terrible to.I actually have a framework story in my head for what I want next but it's still very vague not clear.
I apologize for the speech pattern to and style of characters like Garfiel, Beako, and Ram that I didn't do,really struggling with correct translation, it would have been too much for me or I would never have progressed then story.That's why I'm left with little dialogue which makes me feel like I'm cheating XD.
But that's how it goes for me now.
What a special thing Subaru gave his Beako, I leave to your imagination :3
Next chapter is the last Emillia camp I think.
If you have any ideas guys write me what's realistic on my level and maybe I'll try but we'll stay within the After the Viewing story frame, so everyone knows RBD and after watching.
