I do not own The Inheritance Cycle.
What a nightmare this was to write- I'm never going to something like this again! My brother(I blaming him for this), beleive it or not, began this when I was writing chapter 10, and that's where it takes place: when Thorn and Rose and Ailis are in the woods and Ailis is showing Rose the traps and Thorn runs off. It also explains Thorn's slight dislike towards weasels. I imagine that as Thorn matures his vocab changes. Anyhow, my brother never finished- writting only the first senentce and so I took it over. I'll have a guide for what it what at the bottom.
Enjoy,


First Hunt

The crisp-bright-translucent-powder crushed under his bottom-pads creating sounds not unlike the softer cracklings of his egg. He watched the two-legged-with-long-curved-stick-on-back pointing at a prickly-bristly-tangle and the-he-chose-to-hatch-for bent low to the soft-white-mush-covered-ground as they chattered in a low-soft-sound. He lingered around them, clouting his length-stalk-attached-his-hind on the crisp-bright-translucent-powder. He liked the sound.

The-he-chose-to-hatch-for turned around and looked at him, he happily thumped in response, and suddenly the-he-chose-to-hatch-for turned away. He stopped his thumping. Looking around him at the long-thick-tingle-dry-spiked-rods sticking out of the crisp-bright-translucent-powder, he shifted and stood. He walked around in a loop, paying close attention to the indentations that were made in crisp-bright-translucent-powder from his bottom-pads. He saw a mass of the crisp-bright-translucent-powder that was heaped high above his snout and he leapt onto it, his limp-outgrowths-flaps fluttering as he dived into the pile. He flickered out his tasting-barb-switch from his snout and touched the crisp-bright-translucent-powder. It was wet-cold, he trembled with delight.

Unexpectedly a cheeping-grouse-chattering-noise sounded close to him and he thrust his top out of mound of crisp-bright-translucent-powder, and searched for the thing that made the cheeping-grouse-chattering-noise. A long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature cheeped and chattered at him. In return he grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest at it in warning, not wanting long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature to come any closer to him or his pile of crisp-bright-translucent-powder. Long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature made cheeping-grouse-chattering-noise at him again, its sight-ovals glittered in the circle-in-the-day-sky-light, and he grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest once more. Brandishing his length-stalk-attached-his-hind -attached-his-hind so that it scattered the crisp-bright-translucent-power into the emptiness of the air, he crouched down and sprung at the long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature in hopes to protect his mound of crisp-bright-translucent-power and the-he-chose-to-hatch-for. However long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature was much fast then he was and swiped at him with his pointed-foot- spines before scattering away behind a larger mound of crisp-bright-translucent-power. It was larger than swelling mount of bright-translucent-power, and he chased after it.

Long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature scurried around a thick-round-cut-wood, over a small-hard-mass and under many groupings of long-thick-tingle-dry-spiked-rods, but he did not allow long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature to scuttle away from him. He was going to catch long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature, he was sure of it. Chasing after long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature, he ducked through prickly-bristly-tangle and skidded around big-tall-branched-spikes and went and went until his legs ached, like a heat from fire.

At last long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature stopped, sliding slightly on a ring of shiny-frozen-slip, and he was able to get closer to it. A warming glow of brightness grew up from his middle. He speed up scattering a gathering damp-squelchy-colored-flat-foliage, and opened his maw as the long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature. As he got closer to long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature something went snap, and the sound rung through the air, and he was pulled back from long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature at an alarming rate. Within moments he was hanging wrong-way-up in an odd position. He was being held up only by one of his rear-standing-limbs, and below him long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature made its cheeping-grouse-chattering-noise at him then ran off and disappeared down a burrow-hole in the distance.

He flapped his limp-outgrowths-flaps, and struggled but the strong-twisting-strand-cord around his rear-standing-limbs would not give, and long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature was gone. For a time he grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest and spattered and fizzle-whispered in anger, trying as hard as he could to get out from the looped hold of the strong-twisting-strand-cord but nothing worked, and after a time he just hang there, swaying in current-of-air.

Until he heard a sound. He knew the sound and who it belonged to and then he knew he had to get back to the soft-white-mush-covered-ground and get long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature. Long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature would be a good repayment, but it was not only that, he now sought revenge on long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature

He lifted himself in a painful position and swung about, but when that did not work, he lifted his bulk again, and with help from his limp-outgrowths-flaps flapping, he gnawed at the strong-twisting-strand-cord. When strong-twisting-strand-cord broke it made snapping resort that echoed throughout the many big-tall-branched-spikes and he fell, landing painfully on his backside.

He rolled over and shot to the burrow-hole long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature disappeared into. With little effort he stuck his head into the burrow-hole and grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest and fizzle-whispered, and he heard scuffling noises and hisses of warning, and then he saw Long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature. He used his sharp-bottom-points to dig at the burrow-hole, but the burrow-hole would get any bigger, and he grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest again, blowing curling-colorless-vapor at long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature in anger.

He heard the noise again, that summoning sound, and he pulled his head out from the burrow-hole. For a moment he looked behind him as the-he-chose-to-hatch-for called to him . He felt disappointed. He didn't have long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature . When The-he-chose-to-hatch-for called him once more, he turned back at long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature in burrow-hole and blow out curling-colorless-vapor in warning and grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest. He hoped long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature understood his message, he would get long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature one day, and long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature wouldn't be able to trap him and wound his pleasure so easily. Once he was sure Long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature understood this, as it scuffled and chirped and hide deeper in burrow-hole, he turned away from it, hitting the top of burrow-hole with his length-stalk-attached-his-hind, and went straight for the-he-chose-to-hatch-for.


crisp-bright-translucent-powder -snow
bottom-pads -paws
prickly-bristly-tangle -sweetbriar/briars
length-stalk-attached-his-hind -tail
two-legged-with-long-curved-stick-on-back -Ailis
the-he-chose-to-hatch-for -Rose
low-soft-sound -soft voices
mush-covered-ground -damp or muddy ground
long-thick-tingle-dry-spiked-rods -large brushes or trees
limp-outgrowths-flaps -wings
tasting-barb-switch –tongue
wet-cold –wet and cold, mushy
cheeping-grouse-chattering-noise –a high pitch cheeping sound
long-small-colorless-wiry-fuzz-creature –weasel
grumbled-that-deep-rumble-in-his-chest –growl
sight-ovals –eyes
circle-in-the-day-sky-light –sun
damp-squelchy-colored-flat-foliage –leaves
wrong-way-up –upside down
burrow-hole – tunnel, hole, den, lair
strong-twisting-strand-cord –rope
fizzle-whispered –hissed
current-of-air –wind
curling-colorless-vapor –smoke