Disclaimer: if I owned Star wars or Bioware I would have done a lot worse so thank god I don't own them.
Important note the story may not fallow the original dialog so if you don't like it SUE but not really.
Chapter 1 The Endar Spire
Hey I'm Alex Goudreau , I'm 14 and my story goes like this.
After Beating Knight of the old republic on for the third time I decided to try and beat it the final way DSF, so I designed my Character for I had like a lot of Intel points for my Soon to be Evil character of the story.
"Well here go again, back on to my Favourite Near destroyed ship, The Endar Spire." I said out loud.
As soon as the loading Screen had finished its blasted loading, A huge burst of white light that I must say hurt the eyes.
"Woah" I said to myself once more.
The light filled the room leaving no shadow untouched, I couldn't see anything of what remained of my messy, dirty, and gross room.
"Hey you wake up!" Called a sort of familiar voice
Then I felt a shock wave like an earthquake that knocked me off something.
Then I opened my eyes to see two men 1 in star wars Kotor Underwear he was tanned and had a goatee. The other was in a uniform with many light colours and a few others.
"Who are you?" I asked the man staring at me.
"I'm Trask Ulgo, Ensign in the Republic fleet, me him over there in the underwear are you bunk mates here on the Endar Spire, we all worked different Shifts so I guess that's how you don't know us." he answered
The man seemed somewhat familiar to me. Then it came to me he was the tutorial character in Kotor. As for the other guy I had no Idea. But then I though that Trask didn't seem to say what he says in the game, and then since the other guy is new ill just need to play along.
"Now hurry up, we have to find Bastila! We have to make sure she makes it off the ship Alive." He continued
"Okay, okay." I said rubbing my face." Let me get dressed and get my weapon." I told him.
I walked over the get my cloths while the other guy dressed. It appeared that I was a scout judging by my clothes. Then a minute later I was ready, the cloths fit me perfectly and felt good.
"Ok were ready" Trask began again "we should stick together, well have more success in a party then each of us on our own."
Because of the attack this three bunk room is in lockdown, but don't worry – I've got the
Override codes ill open the door."
Trask walked over to the door and opened it.
"Now that the doors open, Seth you better lead this party."
"Alright." He responded.
"By the way what's your name?" Trask asked me.
"I'm Alex, Alex Goudreau." I said nervously.
"Well glad to meet you Alex Goudreau now lets get a move on." Trask said to us.
"This is Carth Onasi, The Sith are threatening to over run our position we cant hold long against there firepower. All hands to the bridge!"
"That was Carth contacting us on our portable communicator, He's one of the Republics best pilots! He's seen more action than the rest of the Endar Spires put together." Trask said
"If he says things are bad you better believe it, we have to get to the Bridge and defend Bastila. There's a map of the Endar spire and a copy of Carth's message in your electronic journal, just in case we get separated." Trask finished
"Lets move out." Said Seth to us
Seth looked pretty cool him in his cloths with a ratio on his back and a knife on his left leg he also carried the blaster, so I had the short sword witch I was thankful for.
Alex Flash back
"So Alex are you going to join us in our lightsaber royal at my party?" said Chad
"Yeah Chad let's train your little vibrating sword obi wan versus my Anakin multicolour saber."
Later.
I jumped horizontally swinging my lightsaber at my black friend , he contoured just barely. I then let made a flurry from Kotor I saw during the time I played the second.
This time the blade just barely hit torso, witch was our kill point for practicing.
"Well Alex I hate to admit it but you're getting better but not better than me" he said showing off.
"That's funny Chad you haven't won once out of our dozen practises." I shot at him.
"What can I say I'm going easy on you." He said with a smile."
"Sure Chad sure…."
Endar Spire
"Hey are you okay?" said Trask.
"Yeah I'm fine" I reassured him.
"By the way don't you think you're a little young for the military?" Seth asked with a puzzle on his face.
"I'm doing this to give those Sith Bastards what they deserve, now lets go!"I responded fiercely.
"I must be a jerk" I though " no wonder why I don't have a girlfriend."
"What's his problem" Seth whispered to Trask.
"I don't know." He whispered back.
We all walked to the next door in the hallway then Trask said.
"This door is locked, and I don't have the codes to open it, well need to pick the lock to get through." Trask stated.
"I'm on it, just give me a minute."
"Well he's useful, for his age." He whispered to Trask again.
"He's a class 2 safe breaker out of 4." Trask told Seth.
"I hope he can hold his own up in close combat." Seth continued.
"Your right well just have to cover him then." Trask said back.
The door opened.
"Too easy" I said cracking my fingers and getting up.
The opened door revealed a Republic soldier fighter against two Sith troopers , the fight lasted for about a few seconds but a blaster bolt hit the republic soldier causing him to die.
"These Sith must be the advanced boarding party." Trask Said
"For the Republic!" Trask cried out.
As soon as the Battle started I Sprinted toward the Closest Sith and swung my sword horizontally while still moving , my Sword cut through him and cut him in half, still moving I brought my sword up and struck the other sending him flat to the ground .
"Wow" was all Seth said.
I've got a feeling that wont be our last battle against the Sith, good thing we have medpacs to heal our wounds. It would be a good idea to use one now before our next battle.
Seth was staring at me with wide eyes.
"And good job glad your one our side." Trask said a little reluctant.
End of chapter 1
Authors notes: please R&R I need a good reason to continue my story and it encourages me. If I'm in the mood ill have part 2 up by tonight if not later then.
