Illusion

I'm glad some people like this story! I've actually had this idea in my head for quite some time, but wasn't sure if I'd go anywhere with it. Oh,and thank you for telling me the abbr for Leautenant, mewmew! Also, I'm fixing the paragraph thing, since I got complaints about it'' Anyway,Enjoy!

Chapter 1

"Hurry up Al, we're gonna be late!" Ed shouted at his younger brother. Ed stopped for a minute to catch his breath. The two had been running down the street for nearly ten minutes already.

"Brother, you shouldn't have had those extra pancakes!" said Al in an annoyed tone.

"I was hungry! Pancakes don't eat themselves y'know!"

"But now the Colonel's going to be mad at us, we were supposed to be there over an hour ago."

"Well then, let's go!" and with that, the brothers took off again.

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"Arghh, I'm gonna be late!" a young girl yelled, while running down the street. Man, the Colonel's gonna be pissed if I'm late! she thought to herself. Bam! Suddenly she found herself on the ground, clutching her head. Ow..damn, who did I crash into? Ed sat on the ground also, clutching his head in pain. Al helped the girl up, and she thanked him kindly. Then...she brushed shoulders with Ed. She stopped for second, as if in thought, then whacked Ed soundly on the head.

"Watch where you're going, you jerk! You ran right into me!" yelled the inraged girl.

"Maybe you should watch where your going!" Ed yelled back

"Brother, don't yell at her. Sorry, it's just we really need to get somewhere", said Al.

"It's okay", the girl said as she got up and brushed herself off. "My name's Rielle Rhodes", the girl said

grinning.

"My name's Edward Elric, the Fullmetal Alchemist! This guy in the suit of of armor is Alphonse, my younger brother."

"So...you in gradeschool , or what?" Rielle asked.

"What the hell? I'm not a little kid!" Ed yelled at the top of his lungs.

"Sheesh, ya didn't have to get so angry, Rielle said, giggling. Fullmetal Alchemist , huh? Would that mean you're a State Alchemist?"

"Yep, and one of the best there is", Ed said proudly.

"Brother, don't gloat", said Al, sweatdropping.

"What a weird coincidence! I'm one too!" said Rielle happily

"One what?" Ed asked

"A State Alchemist!" shouted Rielle.

"What! " Ed and Al just stood there, at a loss for words.

Well, what do you guys think? Was this a good chapter? I think it turned out okay. Anyway, please review and tell me what you thought! Also, feel free to criticize any part of the story you think needs improvement.

Eep, I forgot to post a disclaimer! I'll just do it now!

Disclaimer: I do not own FMA or any of the characters...Ed is MY bishie tho'. Heh, disclaimer shouldn't be after the chapter. Also, no flames please! Thank you!