AUTHORS NOTES: yeah sorry about the last 2 chapters but i was never good at writing storys. and i'm not looking up the japaness words for the jutsus so ill just call them what i want to so :p

Naruto:Ren-sama doesn't own me or the anime.

Ren:if i owned naruto their would be a whole lot more NaruXHina

-a night in konoha forest-

In Hinata's mind

"Ano, Sanshu-san" said hinata in face of a small 20 year old girl with dark blue hair,blue slited eyes,a small blue tank top,the same type of pants hinata wears and 7 blue tails swishing behind her.

"Now now Hinata-chan don't add a san just call me Sanshu-chan" said sanshu to hinata.(an:hinata's mind doesn't look like naruto's mind her mind looks like a small forest with rivers and stuff)

"Hai Sanshu-chan" said hinata looking at the ground.

"so what do you want Hinata-chan" asked sanshu.

"well i was wondering if you could tell me about you or kyuubi" asked hinata not looking away from the groud.

"hmm well i guess i could tell you about me and him" hinata looked up 'well where should i start said sanshu.

------flash back------

Sanshu(looking the same way in hinata's mind)sat up from a old tree and looked around for kyuubi.

----flash back in a flash back?-----

"Kyu-kun where are we going' asked sashu getting dragged by a young man around 21 with short spikey red hair in a black t-shirt and black pants.(like naruto with out the jacket and with black pants)he had red slited eyes and whisker marks on his cheeks(again think naruto).

"We're going some where i've never shown anyone but i want ot show you Sa-chan"said kyuubi sanshu blushed

they arrived at a large cliff with a forest around it and streams of water were around the cliff as well

"It's beatiful Kyu-kun"she said smiling

"not as beutiful as you"kyuubi thought "would you like to enjoy the sun set wi-wi-with m-m-e"he asked blushing

"kyu-kun just stuttered and blushed?thought sanshu "Hai i would like that Kyu-kun"she said smiling and sat beside him in a tree soon after the sun set sleep claimed the two kitsunes.

----end flash back----

"and when i woke up he was gone i went back to his den and saw somthing h-h-h-h-o---o-o-r-r-ri-ble"she started crying and hinata trys to comfert her"i found our parents...dead...sniff sniff...and i couldnt find Kyu-kun anywhere. But then i found out he went to the human world to find the one that did to our parents. But...he never did he got sealed in Naruto-kun but i understand that it wasn't Naruto-kuns fault...But when i went to look for Kyu-kun and Naruto-kun i was asked to be sealed into...you because your mother was dieing and you where also about to die so i agreed...then i found out that Naruto-kun was also in the village so i stayed and watched over you so you wouldn't get into harms way but"begens to laugh a little"i feel asleep sorry Hinata-chan" hinata shook her head trying not to cry with the story she just heard

"i-i-t-t-s not your f-f-ault" said hinata holding back tears.

"hmm thanks Hinata-chan but you should really wake up now your friends are getting worried"said sanshu walking into the forest that is hinata's mind.

'hai"said hinata as she went back to the real world

-------------real world---------------------

"shika-kun we've been out here for days when are we going to find naruto"asked the female loudmouth

shikamaru gets mad"QUIET YOU TROUBLESOME WOMAN YOU'VE BEEN SAYING THE SAME THING FOR 5 HOURS" screamed shikamaru as he calmed down

ino just backed away "Hey guys Hinata is awake now"yelled kiba

"wha-where am i"asked a dazed hinata

"well lets see we're in the forest and your on my back"said neji

Hinata made a small meep sound and jumped off her cousin's back they continued to walk until they arrived at the finale place they have yet to look

"so-this-is-the-last-place-that-orochimaru-was-seen-at" said chouji as he ate 3 bags of chips at the same time(cool i wonder how he does that)

they stepped inside carfully watching for any traps or ambushes but they found nothing and continued their way down but stopped in fear when they felt a huge chakara energy and a even bigger killing intent.they walked down very slowly till they came in a room full of nothing but darkness.

"ahhh it's been a while since orochimaru-sama let me eat a uchiha oh and what's this a Nara Haruno two Hyuuga's hmm very interesting i might have a good meal HAHAHAHAHAHHA" said a voice coming from the shadows

"wh-whos there"yelled sasuke

then a figure stepped out from the shadows and everyone gasped there stood naruto he had red eyes with blue slits his hair was still spikey but had red spots in it his wisker marks were more jagged he wore a dark green t-shirt with the sound simble on it but you couldn't really see because Naruto's shirt was corvered in blood and he wore black cargo pants and his nails were longer sharper but had blood dripping from them he also had two fox ears on his head and he had nine red swishing tails behind him.

"N-N-ARUTO"everyone yelled in usion

"yo"

----------------------------CLIFT HANGER BWA HA HA HA HA---------

okay not really

i need a vote if you think i should make naruto stay with orochiamru and get a good twist to it then tell me

but if you want naruto to go back to konoha then say that and i won't add the good twist you decide

till then ja'ne