know I said I wouldn't keep you on the edge of your chairs for long but all work and play makes Marlene a dull girl :P
Like I write on the reviews, I am looking for a person to read my chapters or a beta reader I think it's called.. it's better with four eyes than two ;) so if ya wanna be a beta reader on this story let me know. And thanks for all the reviews I really enjoyed them, the good ones as well as the feedback ones. So here we are third Chapter enjoy :D
Chapter 3:
Chiro waked up to see a green blurry blop hovering over him.
" Are you okay Chiro " the green blop asked and he quickly recognized him as Otto.
" Yeah just a slight headache " he answered and rubbed the back of his head.
" So where are we? " he asked Otto.
" I donno, but I fixed the light, the power was all drained when I woke up " Otto answered.
Chiro remembered what had happen and he raised to his knees : " Is everyone okay? "
" Yeah " Nova and Sparx said nearly in union .
Antauri removed a brick which had fall uponhim : " I am okay " he answered.
Gibson got up, he had a large bump on his head : " I seen better days, but I survive " he said and rubbed the hurt area.
" So any idea where we are Gibson? " Chiro asked again.
Gibson got up to main computer and opened the screen. A lot of star appeared.
" Good news is we are not in the black hole tunnel anymore.. bad news is we not anywhere in the known universe either " Gibson informed.
" So what do we do? " Nova asked.
Gibson thought for a moment, than entered something on the screen and a large star map appeared. " It seems like we near a solar system with 6 planets and one star.. or sun.. a dark dwarf hmm.. strange even due to lack of life supporting energy from the star, there is still registered life on the third planet away from the star " Gibson wondered.
" Well what are we waiting for, full speed ahead " Sparx said and jumped on the chair, only to push Gibson off it, in the action.
" We just got one problem " Otto said and quickly got the attention from the remaining members.
" Which is? " Sparx asked.
" We kind of low on power, our trip trough that hole drained all the engines power, I was only able to fix the light and computer energy " Otto answered.
" Ya really know how to raise the moral " Sparx said sarcastic and lowered his head.
" So we stranded here? " Chiro asked horrified.
" At least I am stranded with female monkey " Sparx said and made a playful remark with his eyebrows toward Nova.
" Clean up that droollover boy before you leave a mark on the floor " Nova answered coolly.
" Maybe we not stranded " Antauri said and the attention switched toward him.
" Ya hiding something aren't ya " Sparx asked suspicious.
" I don't hide things, but I have stocked something, if that's what you mean " Antauri answered and walked to a small draw, he opened it, and revealed a bluely crystal.
(The crystals from The Sun Riders Return just can't remember the crystals name or the planet's either if you know, fell free to email me and I correct it ;)
" I kept one of the power crystal we got back at the planet for a situation like this " he said.
" Hehe always one step ahead " Chiro smiled. Antauri smiled back at him, and even though he couldn't see it, he knew he could fell it.
Antauri gave Otto the crystal, which quickly ran with the crystal toward the power generator area, to restore the power level.
After 5 minutes Otto returned.
" The power is up, but I don't think we have enough power for a sightseeing through this solar system trough " he said.
" Hmm let me see " Gibson said and pushed Sparx off the chair with a more professional hand move. He sat on the chair and tapped as if his life depended on it, which it did, but not only his, his whole team's life depended on it.
2 tapping minutes later. " Perfect " Gibson said.
" Would ya care sharing with the rest of us mister everything-is-perfect-even-though-we-stranded-in-the-middel-of-no-where " Sparx asked and raise a brow which Gibson clearly ignored.
" I have calculate thatwe have just enough power to get to that third planet, if there is life on the planet, than there's got to be some kind of power source too " Gibson answered.
" Goodie let's get rolling " Sparx cheered and once again pushed Gibson off the chair (The battle of the chair dududu )
" Right.. I better fix this dented " Gibson said referring to the bump on his head.
" I will go do some training, who knows what we might meet on that planet " Nova said and leaved the main roomfollowed byGibson.
" I will go mediate and see if I can come in connection with any higher intelligent living beings " Antauri said and left as well.
Otto stood for a moment; he looked like he was thinking about something, before he left toward the engine room.
" Oh seems like it's just ya and me kid.. What ya say about a game of mutated fighters 3 " Sparx asked. Chiro lowered his head, but without responding.
" Um.. kid?... oh yeah.. right the eye sight, sorry kid I totally forgot " Sparx quickly said a little embarrassed.
" It's okay " Chiro sighed. " At least it's not temporary " he added.
" That's the spirit " Sparx said and messed up Chiro's hair, which made him smile a little.
" So what do you think we will find on that planet? " Chiro asked Sparx.
" I have no idea, as long as it's not Gibson evil twin I am gamed " Sparx answered.
Chiro laughed: "True "
Sparx smiled to himself, happy that he had been able to cheer up the kid a little.
A red alert rolled over the screen and Sparx quickly turned his attention to it:
" What the..? "
A belt of ice was straight ahead. " Arh crap " he sworeand quickly switch the auto pilot off.
" Brace yourself kid we going in for a ride "
" Everyone who don't wanna break anything, seek toward the nearest seatbelt chair.. we going for a bumpy ride " hespoke over the speakers and returned to the piloting.
Chiro fumbled with his hand to find a chair near him, when he succeeded, he quickly plucked on the seatbelt.
The super robot sharked slightly, while Sparx did his best to avoid the flying pieces of ice.
After 10 intense minutes of sharked and jolted, the super robot finally seemed to have passed the belt of ice, with help from Sparx piloting.
" See, never doubt a red monkeys driving " Sparx boasted.
The super robot suddenly disappeared in a hazy blue gas.
" Arh great a lot of blue smoke, just what we needed " Sparx joked.
" What is all this jolt about " Gibson angrily said, when he walked into the main room with an even larger bump, followed by an oily Otto and a really mad Nova.
" I told you to brace yourself didn't I " Sparx said.
" Brace this " Nova said angrily and smacked Sparx in the head with her fist.
" What is going on " Antauri spoke while heentered the room.
Sparx got up and rubbed his nowsore head: " Seems like this solar system is protected by some ice cubs and blue smoke ".
" Hmm.. " Was all Gibson said, while he tapped on the computer.
" What? " Sparx asked in an annoyed tone.
" Seems like this so called ice cubs and blue smoke has once been two planets a ice planet and a gas planet, but there has been some kind of disturbance in their obits thousands of years ago, and they have somehow collide leaving this track of ice and gas, fascinating " Gibson said.
" Well this fascinating stuff had nearly killed us " Sparx said and Gibson just rolled his eyes.
The super robot began to sharked again and Sparx quickly turned on the screen.
A lot of large icy rocks were souring around the super robot and some of them were bumping into it. " What? I trough ya said this was an all gas planet " Sparx said.
" The planet yes, but it's moons wasn't " Gibson added.
" Damn " Sparx sweated: " Everyone who don't wanna end up in a monkey pile find a chair and lock yaself down "
All the standing members shared a wide eyed look, remembering the last monkey pile.
They all quickly found a chair each and plunked their seatbelt on, leaving their life's in the hands of the red monkeys piloting skills, which worried them a little.
" Here goes all or nothing " Sparx said and active the super speed.
The super robot moved forward, faster and faster, while Sparx tried to avoid the thousands of flooding icy rocks, there flew dangerous close to the robot.
And if the rocks wasn't hard enough to avoid, than the bluely gas didn't made it any easier. With the disadvantage of not being able to see far ahead, Sparx could only lay his trust in his piloting skills.
After some minutes of blue haze and icy rocks, they finally seemed to be out of the belt of blue gas.
Sparx and the rest blew a sighed of relief, but that may seem to be too soon, when a giant rock with the size of Shuggazoom came right for them with a incredible high speed…
Two cliffys in a row I know I am evil :D
oh yea btw a black dwarf is a cooled down star which dosn't have any heat or energy, one dead star :P
