I finished chapter 3! All I have to say about this is that there is a major
twist in the plot. So enjoy and remember to R and R.
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Later that night.
I left the palace and started toward the shipping docks with Kryz, my robot twin. I had used her previously on Earth but she was still pretty handy. We walked past the restaurant that Dib and Fiz went to. Fiz was giggling and Dib looked like he was very nervous.
Kryz and I finally made it to the shipping docks in a few minutes. I saw Zim waiting by his voot cruiser with his insane little robot that scared me so much. We went over to them.
"Hi Zim." I said.
"Hey Viz! Did you decide to go out with me?" he asked as if he was about to find out the meaning of life.
"Well," I said. "I don't want to disappoint you but I can't. I'm sorry."
I started to walk away.
"But why not?" he asked. "I really like you a lot."
"I was thinking earlier and I realized that you are not really my kind of person."
Zim stopped to think for a second.
"I've liked you for a very long time. I've been waiting forever to see you again." He said.
"Okay," I started, "I'll just tell you that hundreds of guys mail me letters and presents every day hoping that maybe I'd send them something back. But none of them would ever understand that I couldn't get to know each and every one of them personally. The only reason I know you personally is because you've done so much damage to Irk during Impending Doom I and I just happened to get assigned to the same planet for Impending Doom II. It may seem that I have liked you before but that's before I actually thought about everything."
I turned away and ran with Kryz. Everything I had said to him was what I really thought and there was nothing else to discuss about it.
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So did you all like it? I bet you probably thought that Viz and Zim would have gotten together. Well there's more to come. Please review and tell me what you think.
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Later that night.
I left the palace and started toward the shipping docks with Kryz, my robot twin. I had used her previously on Earth but she was still pretty handy. We walked past the restaurant that Dib and Fiz went to. Fiz was giggling and Dib looked like he was very nervous.
Kryz and I finally made it to the shipping docks in a few minutes. I saw Zim waiting by his voot cruiser with his insane little robot that scared me so much. We went over to them.
"Hi Zim." I said.
"Hey Viz! Did you decide to go out with me?" he asked as if he was about to find out the meaning of life.
"Well," I said. "I don't want to disappoint you but I can't. I'm sorry."
I started to walk away.
"But why not?" he asked. "I really like you a lot."
"I was thinking earlier and I realized that you are not really my kind of person."
Zim stopped to think for a second.
"I've liked you for a very long time. I've been waiting forever to see you again." He said.
"Okay," I started, "I'll just tell you that hundreds of guys mail me letters and presents every day hoping that maybe I'd send them something back. But none of them would ever understand that I couldn't get to know each and every one of them personally. The only reason I know you personally is because you've done so much damage to Irk during Impending Doom I and I just happened to get assigned to the same planet for Impending Doom II. It may seem that I have liked you before but that's before I actually thought about everything."
I turned away and ran with Kryz. Everything I had said to him was what I really thought and there was nothing else to discuss about it.
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So did you all like it? I bet you probably thought that Viz and Zim would have gotten together. Well there's more to come. Please review and tell me what you think.