A/N : do you know that I love you everybody????? Well, not everybody, but
at least my dear dear dear reviewers!!!!!! He he he, I'm soooo happy people
read my story!!!!!
Zuzu-Petals: it doesn't "look like", it's quite sure, actually! But I won't give away my story! He he he.
Miriam G: he he he, do you want me to send you a flame???? Your story is sheer crap, I don't understand how you're not ashamed to post that! Really forget about writing! He he he, does that sound convincing????? Hey, of course, I'm joking! So you don't have any excuse not to review this chappie!!!!!!
CarminaBurana: yep, it's true! And I generally like what people are doing with him. Hum, depends in fact! Anyway, I think JKR should write more about him. But after all, you can't write about everybody!
Sunkitten: whoa... A degree in math? I'm impressed! Math is one of my weakest subject, but I don't care, coz I don't have it anymore!!!!! True true true!!!! Your sentence is exactly what is to be said about him! Everybody goes in the review section and reads Sunkitten's sentence!!!!!! Hey, you're Russian? I learn Russian, but I'm slow and it drives my teacher crazy lol!
Mozartrox05: he he he, yep, I know, the Molly part is very short, but I can't write every thing now!!!! He he he, I still hope this matches your expectations!!!!
Fire'N'Ice: hum...I don't know if I write a nice comment or no. ok ok, no need to shout in my ears like that!!!! Thanks millions of times for the nice job you're doing on that story (ideas and beta) He he he, I can't wait for your very very very long review!!!!!!!! Of course, you're not like Lucius! I keep that sort of insults for my flamers!!!! Yeah, torture him, I allow you to do whatever you want!!!!! Yep, he isn't his father, well he is, but he's not his dad! Does that sound clear???? Hum, not sure! So, how was it to know you were reading that chappie before everybody else???? Happy?????? Sorry if my Lucius is so much like yours, but as there is only one way to describe him, I couldn't do better than you. Maniac, psycho, coward, bastard, and all the things we enumerated in mails!!! Hope to "hear" about you soon!!!!! He he he, I so couldn't wait to receive this back that I woke up at five in the morning (a Sunday!!!!!) coz you said you would send it at 8, which means 4 in Switzerland...I'm insane.
MysticalWoodElf: of course you don't want to delete it off your favs' list! You're too hooked to this wonderful story! *innocent smile* he he he, ok ok, I know I'm a bit bigheaded, but it's your fault to you all! You shouldn't write sooooo cute reviews! Nah!
Disclaimer: well, I'm not JKR; but I'm a witch, so I DO have rights on HP. yep, I forgot to say that I'm totally insane and untrustworthy *sheepish smile*
A/N: again, sorry! Thanks thanks thanks to Fire'N'Ice!!!! It's while reading your Lucius chappie that I thought I had to do a bad Lucius chappie too.
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Chapter 6:
*Lucius POV*
There's a big storm outside, and I feel relaxed. The storm is dark and frightening. It helps for reflection.
It has now been a few days since my bastard of a son left for Hogwarts. I still can't believe he rebelled against me. Went against my authority. I'm his father, for Merlin's sake! I have all rights on him!
Still, he paid a hard price, I took care of that. But I think it's not enough. He destroyed my life, shattered all my expectations. Voldemort now thinks I'm weak, because a teenager was able to get rid of my influence, and thus, I also paid a hard price.
I hate my son. I just wanted an heir to carry our name; somebody I would be able to manipulate till my death. A copy of me.
What has gone wrong this summer? It was not supposed to happen. He has gotten himself a mind of his own, and I hate that.
Well, if he has a mind, then he has a conscience, right? So I'll destroy his soul. I can't reach him physically till Christmas, but I'll get him down to hell psychologically. He will come back to me or he will die.
I can't help smiling now. I exactly know where I am going to start. I have to sacrifice everything to destroy him and regain Voldemort's trust. Narcissa will be my first step on the way to revenge.
She's there, reading in the living room. Her wavy blond hair is neatly done. She keeps a neutral face, but I know that she hates me. Oh, she is also on Voldemort's side, but she can't stand me anyway. Or, should I say, anymore. I never asked her why. In fact, I really don't care at all. She was a tool, too. Just like everybody else in my circle of family and friends.
I don't know why I chose her. Maybe because it was easy to manipulate her. And this Molly Weasley who still thinks she could save her from my claws. Ha ha ha! I'm a predator. My prey never has a single possibility to escape. That's why I know Draco will eventually come back to me. Or I'll have to kill him. My honour is at stake
Narcissa doesn't hear me coming behind her. She never tried to protect Draco against me, but I know that she nevertheless hates what I do to him. I don't know if Draco loves her, but I know that she is still somebody that never hurt him.
I clench my wand in my fist. Anger emanates from me. The Cruciatus will be strong and violent. It will even maybe kill her. Power. Basis of life. The weak never survives. And Narcissa is weak.
She finally turns her head and sees my wand and my expression.
"Lucius, what are you doing?"
Her voice is full of fear. I'm overwhelmed with the power it gives me.
"Crucio."
My voice is as sharp as a knife, but I am calm and say it nearly lazily. She starts to contort on the floor and her screams fill my ears. She is now cuddling in a corner of the room. Tears stream on her face.
I remember the scene when Draco was in her place. Everything was alike, expect for the tears. But I know he was holding them back. I am sure he cried after our little session. He thinks life is unfair, but it is his fault if he isn't able to take the challenge. Coward.
These thoughts strengthen my power even more. Narcissa is still twitching on the floor, but her screams are lower now. She is loosing her mind and rambles. Suddenly, everything stops. She is dead.
The adrenalin has left me all quivering. I haven't felt better since my session with Draco. Shame I killed her, it would have been elating to do this again tomorrow. I smile at the thought. I have other things to do. I have to find my next prey, and of course, let him know about his mother's death. After all, he is responsible of her departure.
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*Molly's POV*
Ginny is still standing in front of me, but I don't see her anymore. I'm sitting here in shock since she told me, but I can't remember for how long.
Things for this boy are worse than I could have imagined. He reminds me of Harry who has like the world on his shoulders. Children shouldn't have to live that kind of lives. They should have fun, have a bright childhood. But it's never like that. There is always some darkness in their lives. Some just have to suffer more than others, and Draco and Harry are in this category.
I don't know what to do. Draco will never let me even approach him. His leaden walls are just too well built. As much as I loathe his family, I can't help to feel sorry for him. He needs somebody that would listen to him, somebody who would help him sort out his feelings. I know he won't ask for some help, damn his Slytherin pride; and I know he won't speak to a teacher. But I have to get involved. I can't leave him alone.
Narcissa is dead. We heard of that this very morning. When Albus announced it to Draco, he didn't even react. I thought it was because he had no heart, but now, I think it is because he doesn't want to be hurt by being weak in front of people. Narcissa has been killed by a Cruciatus, which means it is probably a Death Eater work. But Lucius is one of them. Nobody would hurt his family, because he has too much power. Then, it's either himself, either Voldemort. However, I can't figure out the scheme. What was the point in killing her?
I feel so sorry for my dear friend. I have lost her times ago, but there was always the hope of her redemption. Now, there's nothing left, just mourning.
I hear the door close slowly: Ginny has left. I finally gather my thoughts. I have to find him, to speak to him, even if I know he will reject me.
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He's here, in the cherry tree near the lake. His eyes are closed and his cheeks are stained with tears. He's more human than I have ever seen him. I see him stiffen when he hears my steps and he jerks his head toward me. I see pain flashing through his eyes, but that last only a second before he comes back with his neutral expression.
"What do you want?" he asks harshly.
"Nothing, I was just walking and thinking and I saw you. In fact, I was thinking about your mother."
Great, Molly, just great! You're just plain stupid!
"And what were you thinking? How stupid she was to have married Lucius, or maybe that she is happier now that she is free of the burden her family was?"
I am startled by his bitterness. It is as if he loved her. Wait, who said he didn't? Oh my God, I shouldn't have come, this is turning really bad.
"No, I was just wondering who killed her and why."
He doesn't answer to this, but I see that his fist is clenched on a letter. He makes a ball with it and throws it in the lake. He then jumps down the tree and leaves, but I don't react at all. My eyes are locked on the white ball rolling on the waves.
I retrieve my wand from my pocket.
"Accio, letter."
The wet paper lands softly in my hand and I start to read it. It's a letter from his father.
~Draco, You certainly heard about your mother and I hope you feel forlorn. After, all this is your fault. If you had stuck with the family instead of destroying it, she would still be alive. Voldemort sends his greetings and like me, he hopes your new found conscience will torture you forever.
Most hypocritical greetings,
Lucius Malfoy~
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He he he, this is now my dear beta-reader's ramblings.....Ta da! This is Fire'N'Ice!
Okay, Cinnamon, this was WONDERFUL !!! Honestly, I adored it, and my review is going to SHINE !!!!!!!! I changed a couple things, but they were typos, like « ot » instead of « to » and such, they were really good. Anyway, these are the little thoughts that ran through my head as I read it, hehe, I thought you may find amusing... Ahh, storms calm me too! I'm not like Lucius, am I?!? NOO, the horror!!! note to self never beat son... ok, now I'm not like him, hah! Of course that would help him, stupid bastard, lol. Argh!! How dare he insult my baby Draco, ::imagines many torture sessions::... ::contented smile:: He is not his father!!! He's the guy who's sperm managed to make it! That doesn't make him a father!! yay, Lucius had to pay, haha bastard!!!!! lol Draco could never be a copy of you, jerk! Oh, how I love him, lol. Nooo, no Draco die, what would happen to my dreams??? Ohhh, I hate Lucius smiles, they never mean anything good. I mean, god, in my story he smiles when thinking about spilling his son's blood. Awww, poor Narcissa, that's going to kill Draco. oohhh I love that line "she can't stand me anyway. Or, should I say, anymore". ::shudder:: his laughter is scary "Power. Basis of life." I love that line too. "Her voice is full of fear. I'm overwhelmed with the power it gives me." ::shudder:: God, I hate Lucius. Lucius is the coward!!! You killed Narcissa!! You killed your wife you asshole!! Feel bad!! Now!! I command you dammit!!! "After all, he is responsible of her departure." Bastard. Molly's part is perfect! Totally in character, wonderful! AHHHH that letter! Damn that bastard, DAMN HIM!
Only one comment to that...HE HE HE!!!!!!!! Glad to see you're still as insane as ever!
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So...How was that????? If you liked it, you really should go and read Fire'N'Ice story, Killing Me Slowly! Now, REVIEW!!!!!!! Tell me about the story, about the weather, about your goldfish if you want, but DO SOMETHING!!!!!!! Hum, don't flame, or I might become really harsh.
Zuzu-Petals: it doesn't "look like", it's quite sure, actually! But I won't give away my story! He he he.
Miriam G: he he he, do you want me to send you a flame???? Your story is sheer crap, I don't understand how you're not ashamed to post that! Really forget about writing! He he he, does that sound convincing????? Hey, of course, I'm joking! So you don't have any excuse not to review this chappie!!!!!!
CarminaBurana: yep, it's true! And I generally like what people are doing with him. Hum, depends in fact! Anyway, I think JKR should write more about him. But after all, you can't write about everybody!
Sunkitten: whoa... A degree in math? I'm impressed! Math is one of my weakest subject, but I don't care, coz I don't have it anymore!!!!! True true true!!!! Your sentence is exactly what is to be said about him! Everybody goes in the review section and reads Sunkitten's sentence!!!!!! Hey, you're Russian? I learn Russian, but I'm slow and it drives my teacher crazy lol!
Mozartrox05: he he he, yep, I know, the Molly part is very short, but I can't write every thing now!!!! He he he, I still hope this matches your expectations!!!!
Fire'N'Ice: hum...I don't know if I write a nice comment or no. ok ok, no need to shout in my ears like that!!!! Thanks millions of times for the nice job you're doing on that story (ideas and beta) He he he, I can't wait for your very very very long review!!!!!!!! Of course, you're not like Lucius! I keep that sort of insults for my flamers!!!! Yeah, torture him, I allow you to do whatever you want!!!!! Yep, he isn't his father, well he is, but he's not his dad! Does that sound clear???? Hum, not sure! So, how was it to know you were reading that chappie before everybody else???? Happy?????? Sorry if my Lucius is so much like yours, but as there is only one way to describe him, I couldn't do better than you. Maniac, psycho, coward, bastard, and all the things we enumerated in mails!!! Hope to "hear" about you soon!!!!! He he he, I so couldn't wait to receive this back that I woke up at five in the morning (a Sunday!!!!!) coz you said you would send it at 8, which means 4 in Switzerland...I'm insane.
MysticalWoodElf: of course you don't want to delete it off your favs' list! You're too hooked to this wonderful story! *innocent smile* he he he, ok ok, I know I'm a bit bigheaded, but it's your fault to you all! You shouldn't write sooooo cute reviews! Nah!
Disclaimer: well, I'm not JKR; but I'm a witch, so I DO have rights on HP. yep, I forgot to say that I'm totally insane and untrustworthy *sheepish smile*
A/N: again, sorry! Thanks thanks thanks to Fire'N'Ice!!!! It's while reading your Lucius chappie that I thought I had to do a bad Lucius chappie too.
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Chapter 6:
*Lucius POV*
There's a big storm outside, and I feel relaxed. The storm is dark and frightening. It helps for reflection.
It has now been a few days since my bastard of a son left for Hogwarts. I still can't believe he rebelled against me. Went against my authority. I'm his father, for Merlin's sake! I have all rights on him!
Still, he paid a hard price, I took care of that. But I think it's not enough. He destroyed my life, shattered all my expectations. Voldemort now thinks I'm weak, because a teenager was able to get rid of my influence, and thus, I also paid a hard price.
I hate my son. I just wanted an heir to carry our name; somebody I would be able to manipulate till my death. A copy of me.
What has gone wrong this summer? It was not supposed to happen. He has gotten himself a mind of his own, and I hate that.
Well, if he has a mind, then he has a conscience, right? So I'll destroy his soul. I can't reach him physically till Christmas, but I'll get him down to hell psychologically. He will come back to me or he will die.
I can't help smiling now. I exactly know where I am going to start. I have to sacrifice everything to destroy him and regain Voldemort's trust. Narcissa will be my first step on the way to revenge.
She's there, reading in the living room. Her wavy blond hair is neatly done. She keeps a neutral face, but I know that she hates me. Oh, she is also on Voldemort's side, but she can't stand me anyway. Or, should I say, anymore. I never asked her why. In fact, I really don't care at all. She was a tool, too. Just like everybody else in my circle of family and friends.
I don't know why I chose her. Maybe because it was easy to manipulate her. And this Molly Weasley who still thinks she could save her from my claws. Ha ha ha! I'm a predator. My prey never has a single possibility to escape. That's why I know Draco will eventually come back to me. Or I'll have to kill him. My honour is at stake
Narcissa doesn't hear me coming behind her. She never tried to protect Draco against me, but I know that she nevertheless hates what I do to him. I don't know if Draco loves her, but I know that she is still somebody that never hurt him.
I clench my wand in my fist. Anger emanates from me. The Cruciatus will be strong and violent. It will even maybe kill her. Power. Basis of life. The weak never survives. And Narcissa is weak.
She finally turns her head and sees my wand and my expression.
"Lucius, what are you doing?"
Her voice is full of fear. I'm overwhelmed with the power it gives me.
"Crucio."
My voice is as sharp as a knife, but I am calm and say it nearly lazily. She starts to contort on the floor and her screams fill my ears. She is now cuddling in a corner of the room. Tears stream on her face.
I remember the scene when Draco was in her place. Everything was alike, expect for the tears. But I know he was holding them back. I am sure he cried after our little session. He thinks life is unfair, but it is his fault if he isn't able to take the challenge. Coward.
These thoughts strengthen my power even more. Narcissa is still twitching on the floor, but her screams are lower now. She is loosing her mind and rambles. Suddenly, everything stops. She is dead.
The adrenalin has left me all quivering. I haven't felt better since my session with Draco. Shame I killed her, it would have been elating to do this again tomorrow. I smile at the thought. I have other things to do. I have to find my next prey, and of course, let him know about his mother's death. After all, he is responsible of her departure.
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*Molly's POV*
Ginny is still standing in front of me, but I don't see her anymore. I'm sitting here in shock since she told me, but I can't remember for how long.
Things for this boy are worse than I could have imagined. He reminds me of Harry who has like the world on his shoulders. Children shouldn't have to live that kind of lives. They should have fun, have a bright childhood. But it's never like that. There is always some darkness in their lives. Some just have to suffer more than others, and Draco and Harry are in this category.
I don't know what to do. Draco will never let me even approach him. His leaden walls are just too well built. As much as I loathe his family, I can't help to feel sorry for him. He needs somebody that would listen to him, somebody who would help him sort out his feelings. I know he won't ask for some help, damn his Slytherin pride; and I know he won't speak to a teacher. But I have to get involved. I can't leave him alone.
Narcissa is dead. We heard of that this very morning. When Albus announced it to Draco, he didn't even react. I thought it was because he had no heart, but now, I think it is because he doesn't want to be hurt by being weak in front of people. Narcissa has been killed by a Cruciatus, which means it is probably a Death Eater work. But Lucius is one of them. Nobody would hurt his family, because he has too much power. Then, it's either himself, either Voldemort. However, I can't figure out the scheme. What was the point in killing her?
I feel so sorry for my dear friend. I have lost her times ago, but there was always the hope of her redemption. Now, there's nothing left, just mourning.
I hear the door close slowly: Ginny has left. I finally gather my thoughts. I have to find him, to speak to him, even if I know he will reject me.
........................
He's here, in the cherry tree near the lake. His eyes are closed and his cheeks are stained with tears. He's more human than I have ever seen him. I see him stiffen when he hears my steps and he jerks his head toward me. I see pain flashing through his eyes, but that last only a second before he comes back with his neutral expression.
"What do you want?" he asks harshly.
"Nothing, I was just walking and thinking and I saw you. In fact, I was thinking about your mother."
Great, Molly, just great! You're just plain stupid!
"And what were you thinking? How stupid she was to have married Lucius, or maybe that she is happier now that she is free of the burden her family was?"
I am startled by his bitterness. It is as if he loved her. Wait, who said he didn't? Oh my God, I shouldn't have come, this is turning really bad.
"No, I was just wondering who killed her and why."
He doesn't answer to this, but I see that his fist is clenched on a letter. He makes a ball with it and throws it in the lake. He then jumps down the tree and leaves, but I don't react at all. My eyes are locked on the white ball rolling on the waves.
I retrieve my wand from my pocket.
"Accio, letter."
The wet paper lands softly in my hand and I start to read it. It's a letter from his father.
~Draco, You certainly heard about your mother and I hope you feel forlorn. After, all this is your fault. If you had stuck with the family instead of destroying it, she would still be alive. Voldemort sends his greetings and like me, he hopes your new found conscience will torture you forever.
Most hypocritical greetings,
Lucius Malfoy~
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He he he, this is now my dear beta-reader's ramblings.....Ta da! This is Fire'N'Ice!
Okay, Cinnamon, this was WONDERFUL !!! Honestly, I adored it, and my review is going to SHINE !!!!!!!! I changed a couple things, but they were typos, like « ot » instead of « to » and such, they were really good. Anyway, these are the little thoughts that ran through my head as I read it, hehe, I thought you may find amusing... Ahh, storms calm me too! I'm not like Lucius, am I?!? NOO, the horror!!! note to self never beat son... ok, now I'm not like him, hah! Of course that would help him, stupid bastard, lol. Argh!! How dare he insult my baby Draco, ::imagines many torture sessions::... ::contented smile:: He is not his father!!! He's the guy who's sperm managed to make it! That doesn't make him a father!! yay, Lucius had to pay, haha bastard!!!!! lol Draco could never be a copy of you, jerk! Oh, how I love him, lol. Nooo, no Draco die, what would happen to my dreams??? Ohhh, I hate Lucius smiles, they never mean anything good. I mean, god, in my story he smiles when thinking about spilling his son's blood. Awww, poor Narcissa, that's going to kill Draco. oohhh I love that line "she can't stand me anyway. Or, should I say, anymore". ::shudder:: his laughter is scary "Power. Basis of life." I love that line too. "Her voice is full of fear. I'm overwhelmed with the power it gives me." ::shudder:: God, I hate Lucius. Lucius is the coward!!! You killed Narcissa!! You killed your wife you asshole!! Feel bad!! Now!! I command you dammit!!! "After all, he is responsible of her departure." Bastard. Molly's part is perfect! Totally in character, wonderful! AHHHH that letter! Damn that bastard, DAMN HIM!
Only one comment to that...HE HE HE!!!!!!!! Glad to see you're still as insane as ever!
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So...How was that????? If you liked it, you really should go and read Fire'N'Ice story, Killing Me Slowly! Now, REVIEW!!!!!!! Tell me about the story, about the weather, about your goldfish if you want, but DO SOMETHING!!!!!!! Hum, don't flame, or I might become really harsh.