A/N: yeah!!!!!! I've reached 43 reviews!!!!! I love you guys! Really! He he
he, I can't wait to read your next reviews! The queen for the last
chappie's review is Elven ice angel, with 1180 words, followed by
Fire'N'Ice with 1173 words... hum, who'll make the longest review this
chappie??? You have to break the record!
Mozartrox05: dear fan of Mozart, here is my chapter!!!! I hope you're happy! Yeah, sorry, but I thought about who was the closest to Draco, and it could only have been Narcissa. I hope you feel awful, then my job is complete!!!!! Muahahaha, soz.
Sabriel4: hey, I love this sentence about darkness and light! I know, I focus a lot on eyes, but like said, they're the mirror of the soul, and I try to stress on the eyes in each chapter, that's sort of Ariane's thread, if you follow me. He he he, I checked your story, and I hope you'll update again!
Miriam G: no...poor you, you don't have a goldfish! Me neither. I hope your Danish test was ok! Yeah, Lucius is evil and I hope you feel sorry for Draco! (who wouldn't...).he he he, did you speak about Draco in your Danish test? Awh, I'm sure your test was ok!
Btrfly: don't worry about update...if you read that, then you know there's a chappie below! Whoa, in fact you reviewed 2 times!!! I can't believe it!!!! *grins like a madman*
LiLCuNtRyGurl: whoa, it takes time to write your pseudo! I think you beat everybody in the shortest review section!!!! He he he, at least, you pushed the button!
Elven ice angel: don't glare at Fire'N'Ice like that! That's rude! I couldn't have guessed you liked to ramble.*innocent smile* Again, soz I didn't reply to your review...but you should have posted it sooner, muhahahaha! Anyway, do you know how to check an inbox????? I wrote you an email and you didn't answer...I'm sad now, are you proud of your achievement? *pouts like a 4 y.o., you know, with chocolate at the corner of the mouth, arms crossed and all* yep, I love this image! He he he, thanks for giving me soooo many cinnamon scrolls!!!!! Are you happy, Hermione is in this chappie!!!! However, as it is NOT a Hr/D...that doesn't change anything!!!! Muahahahaha, I know, I'm wicked! Yeah, I'm very happy I made you cry, that was sort og my goal in fact. ( ok, if you wish to say all those things before Fire'N'Ice, then, review before her! Oh, besides, she told me her next review would be aimed at you too, so check it out! Hum, I don't think she really appreciated the You-know-who thing...but I let you deal with her!
Pupulupk: no no no, no way!!!!! I can't make a D/Hr! if you wanT one, check Fire'N'Ice story, it's brilliant! I write a D/G, even if it's not official yet. I think Ginny, related to Molly makes the story a whole. Soz, maybe I'll write a D/Hr later. Say hi to your fish, I'm glad it's ok! (
Fire'N'Ice: yay, thanks for your job!!!! Ah, I can't wait to read your review!!!!!! Who's gonna win the Goddess of reviews title???? Your friends thought you were crazy...but you are! I can just imagine you yelling in front of the computer and you friends looking at you, then at each other, shrugging and rolling their eyes. Oh, dear Meg, I always jump into books when I read them! And as a reading freak, I'm sure you understand what I mean! Don't worry, I relate everything to HP too!!!! He he he, I convinced my reading freak friend to read Harry Potter! She's going two months in England and was worried coz she wouldn't find books in French...so I told her HP in English was quite easy, and she'll read them through the summer! He he he, I didn't know it would be soooo easy to convince her! Have you made a beautiful funeral to your goldfish??? Njark njark njark! Soz, but I have to keep ramblings for my review!
Sunkitten: I really hope you checked your inbox! Anyway, God, your review hurt!!!! But I have to thank you, coz this is the first real criticism I received, and besides, it helped me thinking a Lucius/Draco meeting chappie! Damn ff.net!!! It doesn't allow me to read Cyrillic characters! *very angry face*
Yeah, sorry, my replies will soon be getting longer than my chappies, but I love to reply to people, even when they don't answer my emails..... anyway, thanx everybody for your comments on your goldfishes. He he he, I couldn't help making a small allusion to this in line 2. yeah, I know, I'm insane, but I'm proud of that!
Disclaimer: yes, I'm JKR, I've just decided to move country and write with mistakes. In fact, fame started to bother me seriously, so I thought I would only write on ff.net, stories with lame plots and all, after all, I'm rich now, so why use my brains anymore to write wonderful stories when I can post that? Does it really sound like JKR? Yes? Then you're damn insane!
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Chapter 7:
*Ginny's POV*
I hate divination. I really hate that subject and I think I should change and take runes studies or arithmancy. Trelawney is such an excuse for a seer! I think my goldfish could do a better job! She keeps telling me how dark my soul is; how I have suffered too much and might be suffering even more in the future. Hum. I'm kind of a martyr.
I suddenly stop in my track. I look around and I am surprised to see that I am not on the common room way. My steps unconsciously led me to mum's office. It is strange, how of all places, my mind chose this one; as if my subconscious wanted some comfort.
I enter the room and feel instantly at home and start to look around. The room is small, but with magnificent stain glass frame on the windows and the colours make a kaleidoscope on the wooden floor. There are shelves with books piled on them reaching the ceiling. Mum is not exactly organized. There are candles of all shapes and colours everywhere.
I sit in her comfortable night blue chair. The desk in front of me is a mess, but still, there's a crumbled paper stick out of a stack.
'Hum, last time you put your nose in someone else business, you just ended crying in front of your mum'
Shut up, nasty little mind of mine! You know I am just too much curious! I have to read it!
It's a letter. And a damn harsh one. That's just the kind of letter that brings you down and breaks you. I wonder how mum got it, and how she reacted. This is horrible. Finally, my life isn't as dark and difficult as I thought it was. Some people are going through worse. Trelawney seems nearly cheerful now.
I put the paper back and leave this peaceful haven, even more disturbed than I was before entering it.
'I told you.'
"Shut up!"
"What?"
"Oh God, I'm so sorry Hermione, it wasn't directed to you."
I must have a strange look on my face, because she doesn't leave and just stare at me. I return her question.
"What?"
"You have a problem."
"Oh, it's nothing, just nothing." I know she won't buy it. Hermione has become my best friend over the summer and that's exactly the sort of lies she sees right away.
"Yeah, sure. And Lucius Malfoy is a fluffy teddy bear. Now what?"
As I don't answer, Hermione grabs my arm and pull me all the way to the quidditch pitch. I don't even react and we sit on the grass. The suns warms me up, Hermione is silent. She waits for me to speak, but I don't know where to start.
'Come on, silly girl! She is your best friend, if someone can understand you, it's her!'
"I feel depressed."
Hermione still says nothing. Damn her, why does she have to be such a good listener?
"There's someone I know that is really in hell, but I can't help this person coz we hardly know each other and that someone will never accept my help. I've told mum and she tried to do something, but she failed. In fact, I was considering telling Dumbledore."
"Is it really that bad?" I can see concern written on her face.
"Worse than everything you can imagine."
I lie down on the grass and look at the sky. The blue is deep, calming. I close my eyes and breathe deeply. The sun is now setting and the air is cooling, but I feel so peaceful that I just want to stay there forever.
After a few minutes, I feel Hermione's hand on my arm. I reluctantly open my eyes and turn my head to meet her gaze.
"Whatever walls are between you and this person, you have to go and speak to him or her."
"He will send me away, I know it." I sigh heavily and turn my head to the sky again. There are flaming ribbons decorating it now and the blue has turned a pale grey.
"You're a fighter Ginny. You have become stronger since the Chamber of Secrets. I am sure you can help that boy. It'll take time, but if it's worth it."
I suddenly realize that I accidentally told her it was a boy. Now, she's going to conduct a survey to discover who it is. Crap.
Hermione is right, I am strong and I can go through this. I was so happy to have my family after my first year. Draco has nobody, but not for long.
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*Molly's POV*
I'm sitting in Albus' office, but he's still isn't there. Nothing has changed through the years. Fawkes is looking at me from the window and there are lunar charts, models of planets and all sort of weird things around.
"My dear Molly, how can I help you?"
Oh Merlin! He scared me so much! I nearly died of a heart attack. He sits down at her desk and stares at me with his twinkling eyes.
"Oh, this is quite difficult. It's about Draco Malfoy."
The twinkle in Albus' eyes disappears instantly. I retrieve the letter from my pocket and give it to Albus. His face darkens considerably before looking back at me.
"What else do you know?"
I start to report the whole library episode, my meeting with him, the discovery of the letter and my spying on Ginny. I know she read that letter this afternoon, and I know she is just tortured about this whole story.
"I don't know what to do."
"Molly, I think we are going to wait for a while."
"What?" I'm simply dumbfounded by Albus' reaction. This boy is getting down and down, he's drifting away and we wait? I'm really angry now, but Albus is used to the Weasley temper and just smile.
"We are going to wait and see what your daughter will do. I know Ginny is going to be involved, she just can't help it. It's better for us to let teenagers sort things together."
"But Ginny is just too shy and she won't have the courage to face him."
"Don't underestimate her."
It seems like the discussion is closed, so I leave and head for dinner. Wait. As if I had patience skills at all!
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yeah, soz, this is Fire'N'Ice again...so sorry you have to deal with her ramblings. Oh, don't look at me like that ms Insanity!
Yay !!! Okay, I admit I was a little disappointed there was no Draco (because he's Draco, hehe), but there was no place for him in this chapter. It is wonderful !!!! Ginny's emotions are described so perfectly and I'm so glad her and Hermione are close. Hehe, these are some random comments of mine while reading, but I saved a bunch for the review (which will be huge muhahahaha !).... I agree, Trelawney is pathetic... ohh wait I'm seeing something... it's her death! muahahahaa Yes, that letter is awful, DAMN LUCIUS! Hermoine is very smart, you can't hide from her Ginny!! :) Hehehe!!! I love that, "And Lucius Malfoy is a fluffy teddy bear" hm.. if he was, then I could just take out the stuffing and then burn him and take his beady eyes... sorry, lol, I really hate him. Oh yes, Hermione, it's very bad. And you know why it's bad? Because Lucius is a heartless, murdering bastard and you should now join with us to TORTURE him! :p Ohh, I like your description of when Ginny lies on the grass, it's very good :) And "flaming ribbons", I really like that. Yes, you're strong, go for it!!! Help my baby (yes MY baby, hehe) Awww, Molly is so nice. Albus is right, Ginny can do it, yay Ginny! hehe, they can bond!!!!! Once again, WONDERFUL chapter, I cannot wait to see Ginny trying to reach Draco.. I'm all jittery :)
...and you forgot to say damn crazy!!! He he he, thanks for your reading!!!! I'll post that, then I promise I go and work on my other story (not on the web yet, dear readers...) no, first I have to review your story! Muahahaha, I'm coming!!!!!
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now, press the lil blue button!!!! You know, press it and write a line will take you...15 seconds!!!!! Omg, sooooo sorry to make you waste your such an amount of time like this!!! In 15 seconds, you could at least have read three other stories! Anyway, if you want to flame, you're free to do so, but may I remind you that if you had stopped reading that after first chappie, you WOULD have had time to read other stories? So if you reach this chappie, and consequently this message, write at least something constructive! Quite confusing, aren't I? njark njark njark!!!
Mozartrox05: dear fan of Mozart, here is my chapter!!!! I hope you're happy! Yeah, sorry, but I thought about who was the closest to Draco, and it could only have been Narcissa. I hope you feel awful, then my job is complete!!!!! Muahahaha, soz.
Sabriel4: hey, I love this sentence about darkness and light! I know, I focus a lot on eyes, but like said, they're the mirror of the soul, and I try to stress on the eyes in each chapter, that's sort of Ariane's thread, if you follow me. He he he, I checked your story, and I hope you'll update again!
Miriam G: no...poor you, you don't have a goldfish! Me neither. I hope your Danish test was ok! Yeah, Lucius is evil and I hope you feel sorry for Draco! (who wouldn't...).he he he, did you speak about Draco in your Danish test? Awh, I'm sure your test was ok!
Btrfly: don't worry about update...if you read that, then you know there's a chappie below! Whoa, in fact you reviewed 2 times!!! I can't believe it!!!! *grins like a madman*
LiLCuNtRyGurl: whoa, it takes time to write your pseudo! I think you beat everybody in the shortest review section!!!! He he he, at least, you pushed the button!
Elven ice angel: don't glare at Fire'N'Ice like that! That's rude! I couldn't have guessed you liked to ramble.*innocent smile* Again, soz I didn't reply to your review...but you should have posted it sooner, muhahahaha! Anyway, do you know how to check an inbox????? I wrote you an email and you didn't answer...I'm sad now, are you proud of your achievement? *pouts like a 4 y.o., you know, with chocolate at the corner of the mouth, arms crossed and all* yep, I love this image! He he he, thanks for giving me soooo many cinnamon scrolls!!!!! Are you happy, Hermione is in this chappie!!!! However, as it is NOT a Hr/D...that doesn't change anything!!!! Muahahahaha, I know, I'm wicked! Yeah, I'm very happy I made you cry, that was sort og my goal in fact. ( ok, if you wish to say all those things before Fire'N'Ice, then, review before her! Oh, besides, she told me her next review would be aimed at you too, so check it out! Hum, I don't think she really appreciated the You-know-who thing...but I let you deal with her!
Pupulupk: no no no, no way!!!!! I can't make a D/Hr! if you wanT one, check Fire'N'Ice story, it's brilliant! I write a D/G, even if it's not official yet. I think Ginny, related to Molly makes the story a whole. Soz, maybe I'll write a D/Hr later. Say hi to your fish, I'm glad it's ok! (
Fire'N'Ice: yay, thanks for your job!!!! Ah, I can't wait to read your review!!!!!! Who's gonna win the Goddess of reviews title???? Your friends thought you were crazy...but you are! I can just imagine you yelling in front of the computer and you friends looking at you, then at each other, shrugging and rolling their eyes. Oh, dear Meg, I always jump into books when I read them! And as a reading freak, I'm sure you understand what I mean! Don't worry, I relate everything to HP too!!!! He he he, I convinced my reading freak friend to read Harry Potter! She's going two months in England and was worried coz she wouldn't find books in French...so I told her HP in English was quite easy, and she'll read them through the summer! He he he, I didn't know it would be soooo easy to convince her! Have you made a beautiful funeral to your goldfish??? Njark njark njark! Soz, but I have to keep ramblings for my review!
Sunkitten: I really hope you checked your inbox! Anyway, God, your review hurt!!!! But I have to thank you, coz this is the first real criticism I received, and besides, it helped me thinking a Lucius/Draco meeting chappie! Damn ff.net!!! It doesn't allow me to read Cyrillic characters! *very angry face*
Yeah, sorry, my replies will soon be getting longer than my chappies, but I love to reply to people, even when they don't answer my emails..... anyway, thanx everybody for your comments on your goldfishes. He he he, I couldn't help making a small allusion to this in line 2. yeah, I know, I'm insane, but I'm proud of that!
Disclaimer: yes, I'm JKR, I've just decided to move country and write with mistakes. In fact, fame started to bother me seriously, so I thought I would only write on ff.net, stories with lame plots and all, after all, I'm rich now, so why use my brains anymore to write wonderful stories when I can post that? Does it really sound like JKR? Yes? Then you're damn insane!
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Chapter 7:
*Ginny's POV*
I hate divination. I really hate that subject and I think I should change and take runes studies or arithmancy. Trelawney is such an excuse for a seer! I think my goldfish could do a better job! She keeps telling me how dark my soul is; how I have suffered too much and might be suffering even more in the future. Hum. I'm kind of a martyr.
I suddenly stop in my track. I look around and I am surprised to see that I am not on the common room way. My steps unconsciously led me to mum's office. It is strange, how of all places, my mind chose this one; as if my subconscious wanted some comfort.
I enter the room and feel instantly at home and start to look around. The room is small, but with magnificent stain glass frame on the windows and the colours make a kaleidoscope on the wooden floor. There are shelves with books piled on them reaching the ceiling. Mum is not exactly organized. There are candles of all shapes and colours everywhere.
I sit in her comfortable night blue chair. The desk in front of me is a mess, but still, there's a crumbled paper stick out of a stack.
'Hum, last time you put your nose in someone else business, you just ended crying in front of your mum'
Shut up, nasty little mind of mine! You know I am just too much curious! I have to read it!
It's a letter. And a damn harsh one. That's just the kind of letter that brings you down and breaks you. I wonder how mum got it, and how she reacted. This is horrible. Finally, my life isn't as dark and difficult as I thought it was. Some people are going through worse. Trelawney seems nearly cheerful now.
I put the paper back and leave this peaceful haven, even more disturbed than I was before entering it.
'I told you.'
"Shut up!"
"What?"
"Oh God, I'm so sorry Hermione, it wasn't directed to you."
I must have a strange look on my face, because she doesn't leave and just stare at me. I return her question.
"What?"
"You have a problem."
"Oh, it's nothing, just nothing." I know she won't buy it. Hermione has become my best friend over the summer and that's exactly the sort of lies she sees right away.
"Yeah, sure. And Lucius Malfoy is a fluffy teddy bear. Now what?"
As I don't answer, Hermione grabs my arm and pull me all the way to the quidditch pitch. I don't even react and we sit on the grass. The suns warms me up, Hermione is silent. She waits for me to speak, but I don't know where to start.
'Come on, silly girl! She is your best friend, if someone can understand you, it's her!'
"I feel depressed."
Hermione still says nothing. Damn her, why does she have to be such a good listener?
"There's someone I know that is really in hell, but I can't help this person coz we hardly know each other and that someone will never accept my help. I've told mum and she tried to do something, but she failed. In fact, I was considering telling Dumbledore."
"Is it really that bad?" I can see concern written on her face.
"Worse than everything you can imagine."
I lie down on the grass and look at the sky. The blue is deep, calming. I close my eyes and breathe deeply. The sun is now setting and the air is cooling, but I feel so peaceful that I just want to stay there forever.
After a few minutes, I feel Hermione's hand on my arm. I reluctantly open my eyes and turn my head to meet her gaze.
"Whatever walls are between you and this person, you have to go and speak to him or her."
"He will send me away, I know it." I sigh heavily and turn my head to the sky again. There are flaming ribbons decorating it now and the blue has turned a pale grey.
"You're a fighter Ginny. You have become stronger since the Chamber of Secrets. I am sure you can help that boy. It'll take time, but if it's worth it."
I suddenly realize that I accidentally told her it was a boy. Now, she's going to conduct a survey to discover who it is. Crap.
Hermione is right, I am strong and I can go through this. I was so happy to have my family after my first year. Draco has nobody, but not for long.
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*Molly's POV*
I'm sitting in Albus' office, but he's still isn't there. Nothing has changed through the years. Fawkes is looking at me from the window and there are lunar charts, models of planets and all sort of weird things around.
"My dear Molly, how can I help you?"
Oh Merlin! He scared me so much! I nearly died of a heart attack. He sits down at her desk and stares at me with his twinkling eyes.
"Oh, this is quite difficult. It's about Draco Malfoy."
The twinkle in Albus' eyes disappears instantly. I retrieve the letter from my pocket and give it to Albus. His face darkens considerably before looking back at me.
"What else do you know?"
I start to report the whole library episode, my meeting with him, the discovery of the letter and my spying on Ginny. I know she read that letter this afternoon, and I know she is just tortured about this whole story.
"I don't know what to do."
"Molly, I think we are going to wait for a while."
"What?" I'm simply dumbfounded by Albus' reaction. This boy is getting down and down, he's drifting away and we wait? I'm really angry now, but Albus is used to the Weasley temper and just smile.
"We are going to wait and see what your daughter will do. I know Ginny is going to be involved, she just can't help it. It's better for us to let teenagers sort things together."
"But Ginny is just too shy and she won't have the courage to face him."
"Don't underestimate her."
It seems like the discussion is closed, so I leave and head for dinner. Wait. As if I had patience skills at all!
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yeah, soz, this is Fire'N'Ice again...so sorry you have to deal with her ramblings. Oh, don't look at me like that ms Insanity!
Yay !!! Okay, I admit I was a little disappointed there was no Draco (because he's Draco, hehe), but there was no place for him in this chapter. It is wonderful !!!! Ginny's emotions are described so perfectly and I'm so glad her and Hermione are close. Hehe, these are some random comments of mine while reading, but I saved a bunch for the review (which will be huge muhahahaha !).... I agree, Trelawney is pathetic... ohh wait I'm seeing something... it's her death! muahahahaa Yes, that letter is awful, DAMN LUCIUS! Hermoine is very smart, you can't hide from her Ginny!! :) Hehehe!!! I love that, "And Lucius Malfoy is a fluffy teddy bear" hm.. if he was, then I could just take out the stuffing and then burn him and take his beady eyes... sorry, lol, I really hate him. Oh yes, Hermione, it's very bad. And you know why it's bad? Because Lucius is a heartless, murdering bastard and you should now join with us to TORTURE him! :p Ohh, I like your description of when Ginny lies on the grass, it's very good :) And "flaming ribbons", I really like that. Yes, you're strong, go for it!!! Help my baby (yes MY baby, hehe) Awww, Molly is so nice. Albus is right, Ginny can do it, yay Ginny! hehe, they can bond!!!!! Once again, WONDERFUL chapter, I cannot wait to see Ginny trying to reach Draco.. I'm all jittery :)
...and you forgot to say damn crazy!!! He he he, thanks for your reading!!!! I'll post that, then I promise I go and work on my other story (not on the web yet, dear readers...) no, first I have to review your story! Muahahaha, I'm coming!!!!!
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now, press the lil blue button!!!! You know, press it and write a line will take you...15 seconds!!!!! Omg, sooooo sorry to make you waste your such an amount of time like this!!! In 15 seconds, you could at least have read three other stories! Anyway, if you want to flame, you're free to do so, but may I remind you that if you had stopped reading that after first chappie, you WOULD have had time to read other stories? So if you reach this chappie, and consequently this message, write at least something constructive! Quite confusing, aren't I? njark njark njark!!!