If you have any tips on writing fan fiction please tell me it might get worse. So how did you guys like the prologue? I thought it was bad (but hey that's me, low self-esteem) and too short but here's another chapter. At the moment, this has no title so after you read the chapter; help me think of a title. Oh, and I might be changing around genre's since I don't exactly what genre this will turn out to be. For now it's just drama/general.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho. I only own Kai and Kioko right now for this chapter.
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CHAPTER 1
--Kioko's POV--
"Kai, don't walk so fast," I yelled after him. I caught to him when he said "Slow poke." I gave him a playful punch and said "Shut up."
'My name is Kioko Fukunaga. I'm 16 years old and this year, I attend Meiou High. To let you out on a little secret, I'm not your typical human being. I'm actually a… *counts* 299 year old fox demon. I took on a human and moved into the human. I didn't really fit in as well in the demon world as I did before. Let's just say I went through a small transformation. It's not really my choice when I choose to change appearances. Technically, I'm connected by spirit to my brother. If he changes appearances so do I. So I figured if I transformed he must be a human also. Hmm…my brother. I don't talk much about since I've held a grudge against for say at least 100+ years. My parents were slain when I was really young. After that I just ran away from home never speaking a word about my brother.'
I looked over and saw Kai acting like a total idiot as usual.
'That's Kai. I meant him in a battle to be honest. I ended up injuring him pretty badly and he got in trouble with his boss. His boss made his condition worst. It ticked me off pretty bad so I killed his boss, took Kai home with me, healed his wounds, and we've been close since then. He's like the brother I never had. He's basically a demon in human form like me. More specifically he's an elemental demon. He can control thunder and water.'
I looked over at Kai again and saw him walking backward and waving.
"What the hell are you doing?" I asked.
"Waving at our classmates that we're gonna have this year," he replied.
"Okay whatever," I looked back to see whoever Kai was waving to when I felt a power surge through my whole body. 'It can't be' I thought.
I grabbed Kai arm and said "Okay that's enough waving. We have to go."
"What? It's not even close to the time we start class."
"I said GO!"
Kai hesitated a bit but followed me as far as I ran to get away from the power I sensed.
"What's going with you? All of a sudden you want to get to school early? This is so not like you. What's up?" asked Kai.
"I'll tell you later," right now I need to get my mind together. After all these years, he was here. 'Well of course he was here; you wouldn't be in human form right now if he wasn't here,' retorted the voice in my head.
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Well what do you think so far? Sorry it's so short but this is just an introduction at the moment, I'll try stretch the next chapter.
So who do you gave Kioko the power surge. *Ding* you've guessed right but shhhh….you don't want to give them away. Continue reading if you would to find out, if you already know then just keep reading anyway.
See you in the next chapter, bye bye.
