The Return Of Evil Tim
Chapter 1: The Silver Jawbreaker
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One stormy night Ed was reading a Comic Book called The Return of Evil Tim. Meanwhile the Candy Stares only employ went to the backroom where the gold and silver jawbreakers where. "Master soon I will be able to free you from the silver jawbreaker." The man said then he toke the jawbreakers out after putting the silver one on sale he throw the gold one into the room of space in the end of the back room. The next day Ed woke up and stated to go to Eddy's house when his mother gave him his allowance. Hurrying to Eddy's now he ran to Eddy's house where he found Eddy. "Eddy look what I have $5.00." Ed said when Eddy said, "Wow lets get sockhead." On the way they ran into a new kid how said "Hi I'm Lou I just moved here." "Hi Lou we have to go to Double D's now." Ed said and started running again. When they got to Double D's Double D said, "Have you met my cousin Lou yet." "Lou is you're cousin" Ed and Eddy said in unison when Ed remembered the $5.00. "Double D we must go to the candy store now" Ed said and he grabbed them and ran to the candy store. At the candy store the Eds bought their jawbreakers. When Ed sucked on the silver Jawbreaker a beam of silver light flew out of Ed's mouth and Evil Tim was free. "At last I am Free again after sir Ed trapped me in the silver jawbreaker." Evil Tim said when he fled from the spot to find the Great-Great-Great-Great-Great-Great-Great ancestors of his followers and enemies of the Great sir Ed, sir Edd, and sir Eddy.
Ed then said "these reminds me of the comic book The Return of Evil Tim where a store manager sells a silver jawbreaker that contains Evil Tim." And then Lou walked up to Double D and asked "What was that" "I have no idea" replied Edd when Ed said "It was Evil Tim who has came from the silver jawbreaker that was made by my Ancestors" Ed said smartly. Then Edd devised a plan "Ed you read all the Evil Tim comics and me Eddy and Lou gather the other kids." Edd told the kids that Evil Tim has been released from a jawbreaker and showed them the photos of the event when Kevin said "so where is Ed any ways?'" "Here I am" Ed said in response "To stop Evil Tim we must journey miles into a storage room and find the legendary golden jawbreaker of the great Knights of the Eds." Ed said, "Double D shall build the transports and tools. The rest of us can get ready by locating the door that shall be entered in the candy store." "If Evil Tim has escaped it's are only hope so I agree " Jimmy said, Sara, Johnny, Plank (according to Johnny), Nazz, and Kevin all nodded so they began the search when they looked in the door that the gold jawbreaker is in and they told Double D.
One week later Evil Tim located the Kanker Sisters and went into their trailer. "You are the descendents of my last minions you shall do my biding or perish." Evil Tim said "what's in it for us." Marie asked "anything you want if we succeed if we fail you're life." Evil Tim said annoyed last time they wanted to join. "OK we'll do it boss just don' expect us to call you master we'll call you boss." They all said together. The next day The kids were ready for their voyage into the room of roundness. "So what are the transports and tools Double D?" Eddy asked. "There are all terrain transports and there are also grappling hooks and some time reversers for everyone." Double D said. They started their journey into the Room when The Kanker sisters attacked them. "You will not retrieve the golden Jawbreaker and stop Evil Tim fools" The Kankers all said in unison. Then they shot at Double D's transport that then fell into a Canyon. "Double D nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo." Ed said now that one of his Best friends has fell into a Canyon. When suddenly a Whirring noise started to get closer "DOUBLE D" They all said happily. When he shot water at the Kankers who fled "water they get hurt by water?" The kids all said surprised "all who work for Evil Tim are weakened by water" Ed said. They continued until they got to a river of lava that was wider than the cars could cross and the cars were stuck on the ground so they had to cross on foot across the stones that where hundreds of feet above the lava. "We have to jump across the lava everyone Sara and Jimmy stay here incase we don't make it." Double D said Ed jumped and landed then Double D jumped he started to fall when he grabbed on to the edge "Ed If I fall tell everyone how I died" Double D reached for Ed's hand when Ed grabbed for it there was a loud terrible noise Double D falling to a almost certain Doom "NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO" He yelled as he fell. When he heard a thud Lava doesn't go thud it must be a rock But when he looked down he saw lava then he saw what held him up my grappling hook must have went off due to the heat. Aha a ledge I'll just swing on to it. Yes. Lou then jumped across then the others. They finally got to the other side and then started to set up camp.
Is it a good chapter should I continue with Double D going into his doom then come back as a ghost. Will Lou have Revenge with her cousins death. Will Sara and Jimmy betray the others? Stay tuned to find out.