Rakuen (Paradise)
HEY! I'm back with your new chapter! I never expected to get so many review I love them ALL! Sad to say I haven't gotten past chapter 16 yet I am having a horrible case of writers block T.T Well I hope you enjoy this chapter oh and sorry for taking so long to update but I had a busy weekend. Once again I love my reviews!
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AhnigurL: Actually I think it really is "Hagane no Renkinjutsushi" but the only proof I have is the two websites and since wont let me put up a url here I have to show you like this: www (dot) wikipedia (dot) org: if you look up the word "hagaren" it says that the anime is called "Hagane no Renkinjutsushi" but it is abbreviated as "FMA" or "Hagaren" by fans. And on another site www (dot) full metal-alchemist (dot) com: under the 'facts' section it says "hagane" is full metal "no" transition word and "Renkinjutsu" is the art of Alchemy and "shi" is to end of a skill you refer to a person so "Renkinjutsushi" would be alchemist. That makes the name "Hagane no Renkinjutsushi" and since this is the Japanese name, Japanese people can't abbreviate it to "FMA" like us here in the US so they abbreviate by taking (Haga)ne and (Ren)kinjutsushi to make "Hagaren" and as far as the lemon vs. lime thing yeah im sure it would explain better about what content is in the chapter (to long time fanfic writers and readers) but not all readers use fanfic lingo and when they publish a fan fiction dictionary to explain all the terms we use then I'll be in heaven! In other words that stuff is optional! Well I hope that clears things up a bit…
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Lemon warning: Full lemon Alchemist XD (if you don't like lemons don't read on!)
Chapter Ten: Fulfillment
It was a horrible feeling being so close to what you want, then having it pulled away. They ate supper as if nothing happened moments before. Ed went to bed early, ignoring how his body still yearned for physical pleasure. Al tried to sleep, but could not ignore the same longing that his body cried out wanting to finish what they had started in the bathroom. He watched Ed sleep from across the room in his own bed. Al felt like a starving lion with the fresh meat he hungered for dangling just out of reach. The next day seemed to go just the same. Al had not recovered from his craving, and Ed seemed to be very good at ignoring it. Ed woke first sitting up in bed yawning. Al was half awake watching him as he got up slowly. Al studied the way the boxers fit Ed's wonderful body falling low on his hips revealing his well shaped abs. Ed pulled out some cloths and left the room. It seemed to irritate Al that he could so easily brush off his emotions and urges. It was torturing Al, and Ed didn't seemed to be bothered by it at all.
Al finally pulled him self out of bed and headed for the bathroom. He walked in realizing Ed was already in the shower. Al turned to the mirror to wash up shortly after the shower shut off and Ed stepped out putting a towel around him. Al seemed to be spacing out in front of the mirror as Ed started to dry off.
"Can't you just look as if you are bothered by this?" Al said still looking in the mirror. Ed stopped what he was doing and looked up at Al.
"Bothered by what?" Ed asked as if he didn't know.
"You know what I mean." Al said turning around and leaning on the sink.
"Aren't we supposed to act normal?" Ed asked a little annoyed
"Not like…well…yes but…" Al stammered.
"Then what's the problem?" Ed asked lowering his expression.
"Nothing never mind." Al said turning back to the mirror.
"Look this shit hurts me just as much as it does you. Do you think I want to ignore my feeling like this? I'm just doing what you asked me to do. Its not easy." Ed said trying not to sound angry.
"No its not." Al said sadly.
"Then what do you think we should do?" Ed asked.
"I don't know." Al said.
"Then I guess it will continue the way it has been." Ed said continuing where he left off. Al watched him dress from the mirror after which Ed left the bathroom. Al finished getting dressed then made his way down stairs.
Al was still soaking in what Ed said to him before breakfast as they cleaned the kitchen. Ed said he too was hurting from the separation but it didn't seem like it. Al wished for some of his will power. Every time he looked at Ed he wanted to forget all the secrecy, and tackle him to the floor. He was so lost in thought that he couldn't hear Winry talking to him.
"Need anything?" Al questioned thinking to him self that all he needed was Ed.
"Are you deaf? What have I been talking about the past ten minutes?" Winry said. Ed watched Al closely as he struggled to remember what was going on. Winry sighed and made her way to the door. Ed and Al followed her standing in the hall watching her put her shoes on.
"I said I'm going into town for a while with Granny, do you need anything, or would you like to come along?" She said once more. Al and Ed both shook their heads.
"I don't need…anything." Al said looking at Ed.
"Me either." Ed said looking at Al shrugging.
"Whatever. We are leaving then, you two behave." She said following Pinako out the door.
"We will." Ed said as the door shut.
Ed and Al stood in the hall for several minutes making sure they were really gone before either boy moved. Suddenly they simultaneously flew at each other, wrapping them selves in each other's arms, and smashing their lips together. Al invited Ed's hot tongue in his mouth as Ed nearly slammed him against the wall beside them. Ed seemed to work fast placing his hand in the right places to make Al gasp from the sudden rush of arousal. All the disregard of their urges heightened their pleasure greatly after finally being able to advance on it. Ed pulled Al's shirt, nearly ripping it over his head, next working on the buttons of the pants. Ed pulled his lips away disappointing Al, until Ed kneeled down sliding off the pants so he could take in the hardened flesh in his warm mouth. Al cried out from the sudden delight Ed fixed upon him. Al could only moan taking hold of Ed's head, as the joy increased.
Ed was still working fast and Al was building up a wonderful climax very fast but suddenly he stopped completely standing up and taking Al's hand. Soon Al was being dragged up the stairs. He led Al to the door of their room pulling him into another deep kiss as he twisted the door open. He backed Al up to the bed pushing him down onto it. Ed crawled over him taking one last kiss before trailing his lips down Al's chest. Al moaned anticipating the destination of his kisses. Ed continued getting closer to the throbbing place his lips had already been earlier. He worked slower this time almost as if he was savoring every moment of Al's gratification. Being that the house was empty Al took no effort to quiet him self. The joy Ed brought was nearly enough to make him scream.
"Don't…stop.." Al managed. Ed pulled away with a smile.
"Come on Ed.." Al moaned
"Ready to finish?" Ed said seductively.
"Uhhh yes." Al grunted just before Ed continued.
He moved much faster driving Al wild as the pleasure increased and his flesh throbbed more nearing the climax. Al resorted to clutching onto Ed's shoulders knowing he would hurt the auto mail side but digging his nails into Ed's flesh shoulder. His back arched feeling the hot throbbing increase greatly. He gasped as if he was drowning in the satisfaction releasing all his climax into Ed's mouth. Al panted for air as his body began to melt into a warm blissful state. Ed pulled away enjoying how well he could give Al pleasure. He watched Al gasp in air as his body shivered with delight.
"Enjoy that?" Ed purred.
"Mmmmmmm." Was Al's response.
"Good." Ed said with a grin.
He let Al rest a while savoring the after effects of the wonderful finish. Al sat up a little after catching his breath. He smiled up at him crawling towards him kissing the soft skin of Al's stomach and chest until he reached the tender skin on the neck. He sucked strongly on the skin just under Al's neck rubbing his tongue over it again and again for several minutes before he pulled away. He nuzzled into that spot just before inticing Al to turn over onto his stomach. Al shivered as Ed moved around behind him. After removing his cloths he crawled over top of Al kissing the soft skin of his lower back. He moved Al's legs apart then continued to kiss moving up towards the neck once again. He nuzzled into Al's ear making him shiver in response.
Al was nervous as to how much it would hurt this time. He tried to relax him self while Ed started to rub against him. Al held his breath as Ed started to push his way inside. Al clenched his teeth feeling a burning pain run through him. Ed could tell Al was in pain from the entry so he paused a moment so he could relax.
"You okay? I'll stop if.."
"No I'm alright." Al shut his eyes tight and waited for Ed to continue.
Ed did so cautiously not wanting to hurt him more. Al seemed to handle it better now and Ed began to enjoy the tight warmth inside Al. Ed held firmly onto Al's hips trusting in slowly unable to hold in his moaning now. Al gripped the bed breathing harshly feeling Ed's thick throbbing flesh inside him. Al shivered as Ed dragged his fingers down his back now moving a little faster.
"Al…uhh…you feel so…good." Ed moaned.
Ed leaned forward putting his hand on Al's back to help himself dive deeper, and harder. The increased harshness started to take its toll on him. It was no longer uncomfortable, it was starting to hurt. He shut his eyes tighter hoping Ed would finish soon. Ed leaned further over Al digging his face into the back of his neck. Ed's finish was building and he began thrusting harder. He was nearly in tears now too, but not from pleasure.
Ed must have been mistaking Al's groaning for pleasure because he continued going harder nearing his finish. He seemed to last much loner this time then the first time. He was also much more rough keeping a fast and hard rhythm causing pain to shoot through Al's body. It burned and Al hoped for him to finish soon. Finally Ed put an arm around Al holding him tight as he released his own climax deep into Al. He pressed his sweaty face into Al's shoulder nearly yelling out all his satisfaction while gasping for air. Al felt tears slide down his face as Ed shot roughly into him one last time. The only thing that seemed to be holding Al up was Ed's strong arms as he shook a little absorbing Al's warmth letting himself relax slowly. Ed let go of Al letting him sink into the bed while he continued to nuzzle into Al's shoulder. Ed breathed deeply into Al's hair as contentment started to make him drowsy. He lifted himself up and dropped next to Al in the bed. Al was face down breathing deeply into the mattress. he rolled to his side putting his arm over Al.