I am going to try to write my first Gilmore Girl fanfic. I've done one Charmed One and I'm working on a second one. I know writing two stories at once can be hard but I need something to fill up my time. This story is taking place at the beginning of Gilmore Girls but I'm making a change. Lorelei is already dating Luke and she's seven months pregnant with his kid. This is going to start out with Lorelei going to her parent's house to ask for money for Chilton. Also I'm changing the time line of a lot of things so don't get confused. Please review and tell me if I should continue with the story.
"Okay, just don't take off your coat and they won't see that you're pregnant" Lorelei thought to herself.
Lorelei rang the doorbell. A maid opened the door.
"Hi I'm Lorelei Gilmore, I'm Richard and Emily's daughter" Lorelei said. "Are they home?"
"Emily is in the living room" the maid said. "May I take your coat?"
"Actually I'm going to keep it on" Lorelei said.
The maid walked away. Lorelei went into the living room.
"Lorelei, what are you doing here?" Emily said.
"Gee, nice to see you too mom" Lorelei said.
"You know that's not what I meant" Emily said.
Richard walked into the room and saw Lorelei.
"What holiday is it?" Richard asked confused.
"It isn't a holiday for god's sake" Lorelei said. "Can't I stop in and see my parent's when it's not a holiday"
"Are you going to take off your coat?" Emily asked.
"I'm actually cold so I think I'll leave it on" Lorelei said.
"Are you sick?" Emily asked.
"No just cold" Lorelei said.
It was quiet for a second.
"Can I sit?" Lorelei asked.
"Yes" Emily said.
Lorelei sat on the couch.
"I have a favor to ask" Lorelei said.
"Yes, we're listening" Emily said.
"Rory got into Chilton" Lorelei said.
"Good for her" Richard said.
"Chilton is a very fine school" Emily said.
"Yes it is but they are asking me for a 30,000 dollar deposit upfront" Lorelei said.
"Richard get your checkbook" Emily said.
"That's it? You're going to give me the money?" Lorelei asked.
"It's for Rory's education. Of course we will" Richard said.
"I'll pay you back I promise" Lorelei said.
"You don't have to Lorelei" Richard said.
"I want to" Lorelei said.
"Wait" Emily said. "I want to be part of this. Rory and you come to Friday night dinners"
"What?" Lorelei asked.
"Dinner every Friday night until you can get the money to pay us back" Emily said.
Lorelei thought for a second.
"Fine" Lorelei said.
"Good, I'll see you at six Friday" Emily said.
"Okay" Lorelei said.
She left.
"How am I going to hide this now?" Lorelei thought.
She drove to Luke's.
"Coffee please" Lorelei said.
"Tea" Luke said.
"Coffee" Lorelei said.
"Decaf" Luke said giving her a cup.
"Meanie" Lorelei said.
"My child is not growing up to be as coffee obsessed as its mother" Luke said.
"I've been thinking" Lorelei said. "Maybe you should move in"
"Really?" Luke asked.
"I don't want this kid to miss out on having a dad" Lorelei said. "So what do you say?"
"I say yes" Luke said smiling.
"Really?" Lorelei asked.
"Really" Luke said.
Lorelei kissed him.
"So it's settled" Lorelei said. "You're moving in"
"That's what I hear" Luke said.
"Good" Lorelei said. "I think I like this"
Just then Rory walked into Luke's.
"How was your last day at Stars Hollow High?" Lorelei asked.
"Fine" Rory said.
"Fine? Not great? Not fabulous? Not…" Rory cut Lorelei off.
"It was great" Rory said. "There, you happy now?"
"What happened?" Lorelei asked.
"Nothing just a bad day" Rory said. "I lost my Macy Gray CD and my lip gloss"
"I have your Macy Gray CD and…"
Lorelei pulled a giant bag of lip gloss out of her purse.
"God, Ru Paul doesn't have this much make up" Rory said.
"Someone's very grumpy" Lorelei said. "I have something that could possibly cheer you up"
She pulled out her latest ultrasound picture.
"Aww" Rory said. "It's so cute"
"I don't like calling it It" Lorelei said. "Let's call it something creative"
"Like what?" Rory asked.
"Coffee" Lorelei said.
"You want to call the child you're carrying Coffee?" Rory asked.
"Yeah, what better to call it then something we both love" Lorelei said.
"What is Luke going to think of this?" Rory asked. "Speaking of Luke, what did he say about moving in?"
"He said yes" Lorelei said.
"Good" Rory said.
"Man, Coffee is making me hungry" Lorelei said.
"I don't know you" Rory said.
"Hey Rory what do you want?" Luke asked.
"A new mother" Rory said.
"I'm hurt" Lorelei said. "I'll take blueberry pancakes"
"Same here and coffee" Rory said.
"Cancel the coffee" Lorelei said. "If I can't have any she can't either"
"No fair" Rory said.
"Life's not fair" Lorelei said. "Anyway I need your help"
"With what?" Rory asked.
"We are going to dinner at Grandma and Grandpa's house Friday" Lorelei said.
"Why?" Rory asked. "It isn't a holiday"
"I know" Lorelei said. "Okay you're going to find this out sooner or later. I asked them to loan me some money to pay for Chilton"
"Wow" Rory said. "Okay so what do you need help with?"
"They don't know I'm pregnant"
"What?" Rory exclaimed. "You didn't tell them?"
"I didn't want them to think I was irresponsible. I mean I'm still unmarried and pregnant with my second child" Lorelei said. "That doesn't exactly scream responsibility"
"How did you hide it from them when you asked for money?" Rory asked.
"My coat" Lorelei said.
"It would be a little weird if you wore your coat for the next two months" Rory said.
"Really, see I thought I'd set a new trend" Lorelei said.
She ranted and raved for a few more minutes.
"You done?" Rory asked.
"Yup" Lorelei said. "Now I'm hungry"
Luke brought them their food and they ate. When they got up to leave Lorelei went over to Luke.
"Any chance you can open the diner late and come with me to Rory's first day at Chilton?" Lorelei asked.
"Sure" Luke said.
"Good, are you spending tonight at the house?"
"If you want me to" Luke said.
"I do"
"Then I am" Luke said.
"Good, see you later"
"Yup" Luke said.
"Mom it's time to go!" Rory yelled.
"I'm coming" Lorelei said. "I look fat!"
"You look great" Rory said.
"That won't work" Luke said.
"I know"
Lorelei came down the stairs.
"Ready" Lorelei said.
She was wearing a red maternity shirt with a black skirt.
"Come on" Rory said.
"Fine"
They all got in the car and drove to Chilton.
"You ready?" Lorelei asked Rory.
"I think so" Rory said.
"Do you want me to come with you?" Luke asked.
"Yes" Rory said.
They walked to the headmaster's office. They opened in the door.
"Mom" Lorelei said surprised.
Review and tell me what you think. I know it was a kind of short chapter but I'll update faster with the more reviews I get.