Hey everybody it's me TheAwesomeCoolJay and welcome back to LLIBB (That's the acronyms to the title if you didn't get it). So once again it has taken me awhile to update and once again I apologize. The spring semester is ending and final exams are popping up, so the bad part of this means some stories get the update a little late, but on a positive note that means free time is coming and now I can update faster. So when May hits expect things to get better.
READ THIS! So while reading other Loud House fanfics I saw that one of my favorites, Brotherhood, was updated. Got all excited, but what I read filled me with sadness and anger. I'm sad that such terrible events happened in his actual life, I hope the author will have good fortune in the future. Now I'm angry because he told us readers that the people who inspired him, kind of shut him down in a harsh way. Listen no set of people can tell you if your bad or good, that's up to the audience and how you handle a story. But the negativity of those people were an additional factor of the author canceling his story and leaving this website. Whoever did it don't speak up, just know your not great. That is all
READ THIS TOO! By the way if anyone calls out me for just seeking attention, just leave. I'm a human being I can care for other people!
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Sunday morning had came and Lincoln woke up feeling excited. Today was the day he can finally make his big debut as a superhero. The smile on Lincoln's face was big and it grew even bigger once he heard the his walkie-talkie beep.
"Hello, Loud Bat do you copy?" Clyde's voice coming out of the device. "Loud Bat respond, this is McHeadquarters do you copy?"
"This is Loud Bat and I hear you good buddy." Lincoln picking up his walkie-talkie and responding. "Everything ready for me to start?"
"Affirmative."
"Sweet!"
"But there's just one problem."
"Of course there is." Lincoln replied back with a bit of his hype going down.
"So I have the costume made, but there's no mask for it and I don't have much material here to make one."
"You've done enough for me Clyde, I'll try to find something here and be at your place as soon as possible."
"Roger that, see you soon Lincoln." The boy's final words as he got off the walkie-talkie.
With his conversation done with Clyde, Lincoln puts his walkie-talkie down and turns to us.
"A mask to a superhero is very important, not only does it hide my identity and protect my family, it's also going to give me this cool mysterious look." He explains to us while opening his door and exiting his room. "Now where am I going to find one?"
As he began to take his walk down the stairs, Lincoln's enhanced smell kicked in. His nose picked up the familiar scent of a family member that was right behind him.
"Hey Lincoln."
"Hey Lucy."
"Once again you show no fear when I appear, adopting this new trait tells me that you might be considering the dark arts." She explained while forming a small smile on her face. "Would you like to start your initiation?"
"I'll pass." Lincoln tells her, as he actually gets a little scared now.
"Your loss older brother, but can you at least do me the favor of grabbing my clothes out the dryer for me."
"No problem."
Making his way downstairs and going through the door in the kitchen, Lincoln was now in the basement. Opening the dryer, Lincoln expected to see nothing but black dresses, but for some reason his eyes spotted something yellow in there. Grabbing the item, Lincoln realized it was that wrestling mask Lynn put on him when he allowed the girl to stay in his room because of the fight she and Lucy were in. The yellow part of the mask stayed the same, but around it the rest of the mask was now black instead of green. This was results of washing anything with Lucy's clothes.
TheAwesomeCoolJay: I might be off with material just changing color like that, but just go with it for the sake of fanfiction!
"I think I just found my mask." Lincoln says, but takes another look at the mask. "Just needs a few changes."
Getting all of Lucy's clothes in a basket and giving it to the girl, Lincoln made his way back to his room, with the mask and a pair of scissors in one hand and in the other a bucket of red paint and a brush. A few minutes in his room later, Lincoln finally got down with the changes he wanted for the mask. He colored the center yellow part red and cut open holes for his eyes and mouth.
"Great, now I can actually see through this thing and it looks cool!" The white haired boy admiring his work. "By the time I make it Clyde's house the paint should dry, but there's just one more thing I need to bring."
The McBride's house
Clyde was in his room waiting for Lincoln and admiring the costume. When he heard a knock he knew that just had to be Lincoln greeting his dads and making his way to the young McBride's room. When he heard his door was being open, Clyde prepared to greet his friend.
"Lincoln prepare to be...you brought the police scanner?" Clyde said when he notice the device in his friend's arms.
TheAwesomeCoolJay: From the episode "Lock 'N' Loud"
"Yeah, you know for the future." The Loud boy informing his friend.
"Makes sense, but as I was saying, Lincoln prepare to be amazed!"
Clyde stepped out of the way and revealed to Lincoln the costume he made. It was a gray colored body spandex costume, with little pockets inserted to the side of it, and two large holes for the sides of the arm.
"Clyde it looks amazing, can I try it on now?"
"I be insulted if you didn't."
Wasting no time Lincoln took off his shoes, normal clothing and put on his costume. With it on Lincoln finally put his mask on and from that moment everything felt complete.
"This feels so right." Lincoln getting a little too excited as he turned to Clyde. "You did a great job with this Clyde, I only got a few question."
"Constructive criticism always happy to hear... but it better be small."
"I don't have anything bad to say, I'm just want to know what's up with the pockets?"
"That's for holding stuff that you might pick up or a place where you keep your phone or walkie-talkie so I can communicate with you."
"Okay, but what with these big holes for my arms?"
"That's so you can fly, don't need sleeves stopping your wings and you don't always need you destroying your clothes."
"Way to save my shirts buddy, okay last one, why this color?"
"It just felt right?" Clyde told him while shrugging his shoulder. "I don't know how to explain it but a bat themed superhero just looks right in gray."
"Good point." Lincoln responds while picking up and turning on the police scanner. "Now we just wait for a crime and then the real fun will begin."
Many hours later
Lincoln and Clyde sat on the latter's bed, both bored out of their minds. Nothing came up on the scanner, this superhero business was slowly going down for the boys.
"Clyde, how long has it been?" Linc asked deciding to lay back on now.
"Almost as long as those online authors to update their stories." Clyde answered back.
TheAwesomeCoolJay: That was a low blow Clyde
"Help!" A voice coming from outside.
Both Lincoln and Clyde sprung up to the call and realized that this was the moment. Lincoln grabbed his phone, put it in his pocket, and made his way too Clyde's open window.
"Time to make history!" Lincoln's final words to Clyde as he takes to the sky.
With his wings, Lincoln quickly soared up high and with his enhanced hearing he could pinpoint the cry of help. Lincoln flew down to this person, who was revealed to be Carol Pingrey standing on the sidewalk.
"Hello there... Miss." Lincoln awkwardly trying to pretend like he doesn't know her.
"Oh my gosh, you're that hero who saved the little girl!" Carol realizing who's in front of her while at same time a little excited.
"Yes I am, now what seems to be the problem?"
"Oh the wind blew my headband in this tree and it's stuck up there."
"Really?" The boy responded in a deadpan tone.
"I'm sorry if you thought this was something big." The teen embarrassedly responded.
"It's fine, it's my first day anyway."
Wasting no time, Lincoln quickly climbed up the tree, spotted the purple headband, grabbed it, and came back down.
"Here you go." The hero handing her the accessory.
"Thanks and as a reward how's about a selfie to help spread your name." That last part actually got the girl to wonder. "Speaking of your name what do we call you?"
"Call me... call me... Bat Boy!" He tells her the only thing that seems to work in his mind.
TheAwesomeCoolJay: FINALLY!
"Alright, smile Bat Boy."
Taking the picture with her phone, Carol quickly uploaded this to social media. Before anything else could be said, Bat Boy's phone started to ring, which caused Carol to giggle at situation.
"Sorry got to go, this is sort of a private call."
"I understand, can't keep people like you busy."
Going back into the sky, Lincoln took this time to look at his phone and see that it was Clyde calling him. The Loud boy landed on a house and answered the phone.
"What's up Clyde?"
"Hey I don't know if what you did was big-"
"Trust me I did something I could without having powers." Lincoln interrupting Clyde.
"Oh, well something just came up on the scanner when you left."
"Really, what is it?"
"Two Caucasian robbers just stole some money from a cash register from the Burpin' Burger."
"Any clues where they might be?"
"According to what the cashier told the police these guys don't have any vehicle, by they did get pretty far before the cops arrived." Clyde informs Lincoln.
"How do these guys look?"
"One's a skinny guy with a snake tattoo on his forehead and a big guy who's not very bright."
"Okay I'll be on the lookout for them."
"Lincoln be safe out there."
"Clyde I have powers now I'll be fine."
TheAwesomeCoolJay: WARNING, WARNING, ORIGINAL CHARACTER ALERT! So this part involving the criminals has me create two bad guys. I never got into the idea of making an original character, but a story likes this call for it. So criminals, cops, & other characters I make that aren't from the show serve only one purpose. I already have the true antagonists and they are actual characters from the show. That is all.
In an alley the two robbers had hid behind a dumpster to hide from the cops. Both men's attire looked like sleazy car salesman, but only the skinny man one had a hat. This man's name was Dennis and he was a man who can lie so much that he could even start to believe it. His heavy set friend was Louie, who wasn't known for his brains, but he definitely made up for it thanks to his size. This duo was a bumbling one but at least they got the job done.
"Louie where's the money?" Dennis asked his partner.
"Oh, I was suppose to grab the bag wasn't I?" Louie nervously replied.
"You mean you left it in the bathroom!"
"Don't be mad, at least we know we can get the money."
"Yeah, but next time they'll be expecting us." He complained as he took off his hat and rubbed his head. "I swear you make my head hurt."
"Guess I'm about to make it worse then!" A voice called out from the sky.
Both men looked up and saw that a child was flying towards them, more specially towards Dennis. Putting his feet together Lincoln had kicked Dennis in the face and sent the man a good distance from Louie. On the ground now and standing between both men was Lincoln, who began to boast.
"Was looking around for a good minute to find you two, I didn't come at you guys right away because I had to make sure you fit the description." The kid hero explaining his actions and looking at the guy he kicked down. "Thanks for showing me that snake tattoo, you made real-"
Lincoln was silenced the moment Louie got close and grabbed him. With enough strength Louie threw the kid hard enough to a building to make a little crack on the wall.
"Don't put your hands on my friend!" Louie told the child.
"Louie you idiot help me up!"
Louie walked over to Dennis and helped him back on his feet, and the first thing he did was grab a big stick and approach Lincoln. The boy held his sides and backed up to the wall the moment he saw the man approach him. Before any action was performed Dennis actually got a good look of the kid and figured out who he was.
"Hey your that small fry who saved an even smaller fry."
"Dennis I'm hungry now."
"Shut it!" Dennis commanding his accomplice. "Listen kid I'm going to let you off with a little warning, but the next time you decide to play hero and mess with me again, I'm gonna do this to you!"
Using the stick as an example, Dennis tried to break over knee, but he failed and in the process hurt himself. His next attempt would have him try and break it with just his bare hands, but he couldn't do that either.
"For crying out loud, Louie break this thing!"
"Got you D-man."
"WAIT LET ME MOVE IT FROM MY FA-"
Louie broke through the stick and punched Dennis in the face, the latter looked at his partner with anger but turned back to Lincoln to make sure he got the point. However, to his surprise, the boy had climbed the wall and flew away. To make sure the message was clear, Dennis cups his hand to mouth to yell it.
"Remember that kid, mess with us again we will make you pay!"
In the sky he was safe, but Lincoln's mind couldn't process how brutal the situation was going to be. He has taken hits before, from his sisters, kids his age, and kids slightly older, but being tossed and threaten like that made Lincoln realize something. This is no comic book, this is real life. The day was almost over, which meant it was time for Lincoln to get home soon. First he would knew go pick up his clothes at Clyde's house and make another big decision.
The McBride's house
Lincoln entered Clyde's room through the window and when he was in, the boy's best friend immediately appeared before him.
"So how did it go Lincoln, did you show those thugs your fists?" Clyde asked excited to hear what had happen.
The young boy didn't receive a reply, he only saw Lincoln remove the costume and mask and put his regular outfit on,
"You okay Lincoln?"
The only Loud boy simply walked towards and handed him the mask and suit.
"Never again." Lincoln finally speaking and taking his leave.
Clyde couldn't quite get what he meant by that, is Lincoln really calling it quits after one day. There has to be more to this story.
"Lincoln what happened?" He asked now stopping his friend by holding by the arm.
Lincoln simply turned to face his friend with tears streaming down his face, shocking the young McBride.
"I choked!" Lincoln's last words as runs out of the house and back home.
Wow that's a sad ending to a chapter, but that's how these things work. I guess most of you reading expected Lincoln to really handle those guys, but you got to remember this all new to him. Saying your going to stop crime is easy, but actually doing it harder than it looks. Hopefully by next chapter he realizes, speaking of the next chapter.
Can a pep talk from Clyde get Lincoln back in the hero or will it take something more? And if he does return can he take down Dennis and Louie? That's next time ladies and gentlemen, but right now R.F.F. (Review, Favorite, Follow) PEACE!