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by the way, during this, Chris is drunk.


Hoping his words would scare Chris Luke said "Do you really want to do that? I mean think of who you will have to deal with if you kill her. Emily, Richard, Rory, me, this whole town. Do you really want to kill a daughter and mother? Think of how hurt Rory will be. Do you want to do that to Rory?"

"Luke he won't listen" Lorelai said in a soft voice. She didn't want to be loud because of fear of what Chris would do.

"Rory doesn't have to know about any of this. What do you think I'd be stupid enough to just leave her body in the middle of the floor?" Chris looks down at Lorelai.

"And I heard you talk to him, you better shut up or I'll kill him first right in front of you. I'll make you watch every minute of it!" Chris kicks Lorelai in the stomach and she screams.

"Okay what can I do that would make you stop hurting her?" Luke asks while he tries to stay calm.

Chris thought for a minute "Here is the deal. You break up with her right here in front of me and I'll stop hurting her. That way she will be with me"

"I don't have another option? If I don't you'll still hurt her?" Luke asked

Lorelai laid on the ground clutching her stomach from the pain

"Well your other option would be for me to hurt her, so I'd say yeah that's your only option and I can make it so she stays with me no matter what, so either break up with her or watch her suffer."

"You mean I would never get to see her again?" Luke asks, very scared.

"Exactly, and I swear if you call the cops or if you tell Rory, you will be in worse shape than Lorelai."

"Chris...please...do...don't...make me suffer anymore." Lorelai breaths out, once Chris hears her voice he pulls her back up by the hair and slaps her again.

"I told you not to talk. You don't listen. That's why you get in trouble ever since you been a kid"

Lorelai winced and cried even harder

"Christopher for Gods Sake just stop it. Take the beating out on me"

"Maybe I should just give up Luke" He watched her eyes become heavy he could tell she was in pain and didn't want to fight anymore "I...I...just want the pain to go away. All my life I dealt with pain. When will it go away? I never had pain like this but it hurts the same as emotional pain"

Chris glares between them, ready to kill or watch Lorelai get dumped.

"No, Lorelai please don't give up. Your too strong, just try and hold out as long as you can."

"I don't...think...I...can Luke." She cries and Chris just laughs.

"Is that your finally decision Lorelai?" Chris asks as he still grips on her hair.

Lorelai and Luke look at each other sadly. Lorelai nods slowly and Luke just hangs his head down.

"So Luke would you like to watch, or would you rather I did this upstairs in her room?" Chris asks pulling Lorelai up the stairs.

"Neither. Kill me first, but not in her room"

"Well, Lorelai should I Kill him?" he looked down at her to answer but she didn't "Answer me" He said kicking her again this time in her side.

"I don't know. If it's what he wants." She looks at Luke

"I do. I want her to live no matter what. She has a great kid that needs her"

Lorelai glared at him still "I...I Love you" It was the first time Luke heard the words come out of her mouth. He had said it to her many times but, he knew she wasn't ready any of the times he said and that he understood. The words slowly were breaking his heart. The thought that he was losing her or her losing him hurt.

"Don't kill him Chris, I've changed my mind. Kill...me. Because if you don't there is still know way I will ever go back with you."

Chris shoves her on the stairs and stands over her. She screams in pain. Luke's heart is breaking for her. Luke tried to call the police but Chris had cut all the wires and threatened to kill him if he did anything or even moved.

"Please... (She coughs)...Chris...j...just get it over with."

Lorelai tries to look over at Luke but she is too weak and continues staring at the floor.

"Christopher, if you kill her, you kill both of us, at the same time!" Luke says.

"Anyone going to make a move?" Chris yelled. He still has the bottle in his hand

Luke realizes his cell is in his pocket. He gets it out quick and dials 911. Chris notices.

"Is that a phone? I said no phone or police or I'll kill her. Put it away or throw down so I can see It."

"Okay" Luke threw the phone on the couch

"You know what. I feel like doing some more hitting." He took the glass bottle and hit Lorelai over the head with it. She instantly becomes unconscious.

"Lorelai!" Luke rain over to the stairs

The whole time Chris don't know that the 911 operators heard the whole thing.


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