Vixxie-chan: Bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah ha ha ha ha ha ha hah ha! YO, I'M BACK! I TOLD YOU I'LL UPDATE IN A FEW DAYS! And yeah, I read all your reviews. You guys are all hilarious, I just love you guys! ; P
(Grins) this has to be a record for me, twelve reviews in ONE day and now it's a total of 41 reviews (I think)! Plus… did I get flamed? Yeah, I think I did… WOW! That was seriously cool! (Not being sarcastic!) My first flame… Wow…
Here are my replies for some of you:
AncientSilverYouko: thanks for pointing out my mistakes. I'll try to avoid them in the near future. And if you find any for this chapter, tell me. I asked a friend of mine (not Mari-ko) to edit my work and check for any mistakes, but she's currently unavailable… oh, and thanks also for your tip! It sue will help a lot! ; D
Sanouske S. Sagara: (blinks) … wow… what a GREAT idea! Why didn't I think of that?.! (Grins sheepishly) you know, I think I'll be using your idea in the near future… and to answer to your question: Umm… not sure if the Haradas will find out, but they sure will notice the change in Daisuke… heck, EVERYONE will! Especially his parents (and that will bring some problems…)!
MySoulIsAPoem: Sexy scenes? (Grins evilly)… I'm waaay ahead of you! Don't believe me? Enjoy this chapter… (Wanders off with a wicked smirk)
Iluv2critic: did you… just flame me?.!… That is so COOL! (Starts grinning stupidly) you're my first flamer… YAAAAY!.!.! XD
Benji's lover iz a cowfree: interesting name. And thank you for supporting my fic!
Mr. IMHBIMN…: YAAAAY…!
Anendee: Yes, poor Dark. Glad you like my fic!
Xxyaoi-loverxX: Ummm… lemons? I'm not sure about it… maybe some lime or other citrus fruit, how about it?
Kakashisninjadogs: Heh! Thanks, nice to know you enjoy my fic! Hope you enjoy this chapter! ; P
Inuome92: ITAI! (Rubs head) Why did you hit me? TT (sniffs) I did update this chapter early… but I guess, you might wanna hit me again after you finish reading this chapter…
MoonlightPrincess: oO OH. MY. GOD. Really?.! That happened to you?.!… Wow…
passing HeNTai: Oh, you want smut, eh? (Smirks) Enjoy this chapter…
Oh, if there are those whom I've forgot to mention, thanks for your reviews. You kept me entertained for the past few days.
I received some reviews that want some lemon/smut/sexy scenes in this fic. Well, here's the deal. I don't think I'll be doing lemon… totally uncomfortable in writing it (I just enjoy reading it though…) but there probably will be lime/smut and some pretty suggestive things.
Disclaimer: nope! Don't own DN Angel!
Warnings: (looks around innocently) nope, no warnings here… honest! Just get ready for some touchy-feely and incessant groping…
XXXSatoshi tried very hard to concentrate on the sensei's teachings, he really did! But it was so damn hard, when a certain little red head keeps staring at you all-day, unashamed and unabashed by his actions.
Satoshi felt the prickling sensation on the back of his neck and he cast a sideway glance. Sure enough, the object of his admiration and fantasies was gazing at him with a blazing look of… passion?.!
Satoshi shivered and quickly looked away, feeling that it was highly impossible but how could he explain that intent look he received? Why was the young Niwa staring at him anyway? He hadn't done anything that might have triggered the said boy's interest, had he?
For what seems the 100th time that day, he wondered what was wrong with Daisuke. He was feeling very uncomfortable with the attention, he was not used to. Usually, it was he who did all the intent staring…
A dry chuckle escaped his throat. Was this what Daisuke felt when he kept watch on him? ' I swear, I'll try and stop staring at him if he stops staring at me back!' Satoshi mentally vowed, but admittedly he knew it was futile.
Meanwhile, Daisuke gave a sigh, enjoying his little view of the young commander. He rested his cheek on his hand for support and felt content with just sitting there… staring…
" Daiiisuuuke!" Dark yelled at the back of his mind, " Quit. Staring. At. Creepy boy. You're freakin' me out!"
Dark's reply came in a form of an incoherent grunt. " He… s'not… creepy boy… shuddup…"
Dark nearly pulled his hair in frustration. " Auuugh… Daisuke, snap out of it! What the fucking hell is wrong with you? Why are you acting so frickin weird? And why, for cripes sake, aren't you listening to me?.?.?"
" Quit whining… you're distracting my focus on Hiwatari-kun…"
This time Dark really did pull his hair out of frustration. " AUUUGGGHHH…!.!.!"
Daisuke winced at the mind-numbing scream but he tried to take no notice. He gave a dreamy sigh when he saw Satoshi pushed a strand of light blue hair away from his forehead.
" … Hiwatari-kun…"
XXXThe school bell rang throughout the entire school, signaling the time for recess. Many scrambling and shuffling to get out of the desk and into the school cafeteria was heard. It was all a rush; if they don't hurry, all the good food and seats might be taken.
Though it was not a hectic event for some of them, since they were the ones who preferred to bring their own lunch. Daisuke was one of them, and he knew Satoshi was one too. Though a piece of croissant and a juice box could hardly be called a lunch…
" Niwaaa…!" one of the Haradas called him, though Daisuke didn't notice which one, " Let's have lunch together, ne?"
" Gomen, Harada-san, but no thanks," Daisuke replied automatically without a glance, he was too busy eyeing Satoshi.
Satoshi was about to get up and leave the classroom, if it wasn't because of a pair of glinting ruby red eyes staring right at his face in front of him. Satoshi blinked. " Niwa?"
Daisuke gave a wide smile. " Hiwatari-kun, let's have lunch together, ne? We'll go to our usual place."
Satoshi felt a surge of uneasiness within him. He didn't know why; he had lunch with Daisuke before and he enjoyed- scratch that, he LOVED the young boy's company, so why is he feeling rather awkward? Probably because of what happen earlier and because of the odd smiling look on Daisuke's face…
Satoshi decide to dismiss the feeling he had, a chance to be alone with the sensual red head is not to be wasted. And while he's at it, he'll try to find the reason behind Daisuke's strange behavior.
" Of course, Niwa. We'll have lunch together. Lets go!"
Daisuke's odd smile grew wider.
XXXSatoshi felt it was rather hard to chew on his piece of bread. He'd decided to try a different lunch instead of his usually croissant, so he got himself a meat bun. But today was not the day to enjoy it. He felt that it was even more troublesome to swallow, when there was someone breathing down your neck and staring, unblinking, right at you or to be even more precise, staring at your chewing lip.
With much trouble, Satoshi swallowed his chewed bread that taste like chalk in his throat, and took a glance at the little Niwa next to him.
Daisuke was staring, just like he did in class, and he probably wouldn't realized it if Satoshi didn't point it out.
" Umm… Niwa. Daijobou ka?" Satoshi asked hesitantly.
Daisuke blinked and tilted his head in a cute manner in return. " Why do you ask? Of course I feel fine!"
" Well, then. May I ask why you're not touching your lunch?"
" Because I'd rather touch you!" Daisuke replied sweetly.
Satoshi nearly choked on his bread and spluttered, looking at Daisuke with embarrassed disbelief. " Ex- excuse me? What did you say?.!"
" Nothing!" Daisuke took his chopstick and picked a tempura calamari ring, " care to share my lunch, Hiwatari?"
Satoshi glanced at the little piece of squid that Daisuke was waving in front of him. " Iie, arigato."
A cute puppy dog pout was sent his way. " Awww… c'mon, Hiwatari-kun," Daisuke insisted with a whine, " just a little bit, it won't hurt you. Besides, I've plenty of food to share…"
Indeed, Daisuke did have plenty of food tucked nicely in his over-sized bento, courtesy of Niwa Emiko. The amount was twice the usual on the day before a heist, but nevertheless the contents were enough to make a big greedy fat kid to drool a swimming pool.
Satoshi glance at the large bento then at the adorable puppy look of Niwa Daisuke. His eyes were wide and pleading, making anyone who comes across it to melt into oblivion. Satoshi sighed, no one gets to him and get the best out of him like Niwa Daisuke does. " Oh, alright. I'll share your lunch…"
Daisuke gave a cheer and Satoshi instantly got the image of a hyper child who got free ice cream. ' How cute…' he thought with a small smile.
Satoshi reached out his hand to take a piece of Californian sushi roll when his hand was slapped away.
" Ah, ah, ah, Hiwatari-kun!"
Satoshi raised his eyebrows with slight annoyance. " I thought you want to share?"
Daisuke smiled mischievously and hold his chopstick up near Satoshi's mouth. " Say 'ahhh', Hiwatari."
Satoshi raised his eyebrows, Daisuke wants to feed him? " That's not necessary, Niwa-kun. I can feed myself."
Daisuke flashed another puppy dog pout. " Mou… what's the harm, Hiwatari? It's not like I'll bite you or anything. Come on, open wide!"
" I prefer to eat myself, thank you. I'm not a child!" Satoshi replied albeit more stubbornly.
Daisuke grinned childishly. " Don't worry about that, lil' baby. I'll try not to make a mess. Come on; say 'ahhh'… the choo-choo train wants to enter the tunnel. Choo-choo…"
Satoshi rolled his eyes at the kiddy antics. " I take it you won't take 'no' for an answer?" Daisuke just grinned lop-sidedly. " Guess I have no choice then…"
Satoshi opened his mouth and allowed the pieces of food to enter his mouth, savoring the spicy taste. Daisuke beamed goofily as he watched the young commander chewed appreciatively. Daisuke watched, entranced, as the icy boy moved his pale lips in a slow and sensuous manner, making Daisuke licked his own lips subconsciously.
Satoshi felt a prickling sensation and as he glanced at his companion he noticed that once again Daisuke was staring at him, but this time with an almost hungry look.
" Niwa… aren't you eating? You look… ravenous," Satoshi offered quietly, worry suddenly filled his consciousness.
" Hai… I am…" Daisuke agreed softly as he look away and picked on his food.
Satoshi stared at him for a while, wondering why the sudden mood change. Daisuke just continued to pick through his bento, occasionally nibbling on a tenpayaki chicken or some crab meat. Satoshi decided to let him be, and popped a dumpling into his mouth.
Unbeknownst to Satoshi, Daisuke was watching him through the corners of his eye, watching and waiting for the time to catch the commander unaware. He smiled slyly when he saw Satoshi closed his eyes to rest.
Slowly, Daisuke crawled up to the resting commander, his small nimble hands working its way up to the other boy's thighs.
Satoshi cracked his eyelids open when he felt his lower body being weighed down. He was shocked to see Daisuke on all fours, inching closer and pressing their bodies together.
' What the…' " N-Niwa? What are you…"
Satoshi gasped when Daisuke smiled and place his hands near his crotch, applying pressure there, and raised his head up so their faces were inches away. Satoshi sucked in some air and hold his breath, wondering what is it that Daisuke wanted from him.
Daisuke stared hard into Satoshi's ice blue eyes, except they weren't icy. He saw the different emotions swirling in those pools, the confusion, panic and… what was that other one? Daisuke couldn't say, but he longed to find out.
" Hiwatari-kun…" Daisuke whispered huskily, his eyes were blazing.
" H-hai…"
" You know, I can't believe I never noticed this before… but you have such a pretty eyes…" Daisuke nuzzled his nose affectionately.
" Niwa… what is it that you want?" Satoshi murmured, trying to ignore the feeling near his private area, but failing badly. Damn, his body felt hot because of the close contact.
Daisuke smirked at the question directed at him. His hands innocently brushed across Satoshi's groin, making Satoshi flushed violently.
" Why, Satoshi…" Daisuke whispered near his ears, his lips barely touching Satoshi's cold pale cheek. " I thought it'd be obvious by now…" he nipped the commander's earlobe, making him gasp. " I. Want. You!"
Daisuke straddled his hip so that their groins touched, creation friction between their pants. Satoshi couldn't help but groan at the contact. He felt Daisuke's breathing on his neck, nuzzling and the soft lip touching his skin.
" Ni… Wa…" Satoshi groaned, despite the pleasurable contact. ' What is wrong with him today?' Satoshi wondered, ' why is he acting so… out of character?'
Daisuke blinked innocently at him. " What?"
" Why are you…" Satoshi's words trailed off when he saw Daisuke's nimble hands had somehow unbuttoned his school shirt without him noticing. He gulped when he felt the same hands trailed its way up from his abdomen to his chest, rubbing in soothing circles and creating heat in its midst.
Daisuke's hand came across a pert nipple and he playfully pinched it, making the other boy shudder and bit his lip. " Ahh… Niwa-kun…"
Satoshi felt a small moan escaping his lips when Daisuke massaged his chest. The soft warm hands caressing his bare torso, it was affecting him deeply and making him hard. He couldn't protest when Daisuke fondle his peaking nipple or when he caressed his stomach, running his hands in gentle circles. He couldn't stop it when Daisuke's lips planted butterfly kisses across his neck, sometimes lingering his lips to nip a certain area of skin to have the young commander moan and shudder.
This was what he wanted, for a very long time. This was his fantasy. To have Daisuke touching him. Satoshi wondered if this is all one of his wet dreams, but when he hands touching his hard-on, making him groan uncontrollably, he knew that this was all too real to be a dream. None of his dreams had ever felt this good!
Somewhere at the back of his mind, his logic and common sense told him that something was wrong, something was obviously not right, and telling him to stop. Daisuke wouldn't act like this, he wasn't this forward. But unfortunately, the young genius mind was turned into mush, thanks to Daisuke seductive caresses.
Satoshi arched at his touches, closing his eyes and let his head hang upwards, taking in the pleasurable contact. His lips were slightly parted and his breathing ragged. His face was lightly flushed while his body was heating up as his heart was beating rapidly. Small moans escaped his lips, encouraging Daisuke even more.
Daisuke was enjoying his little ministration over the usually icy teen's body. He has no idea what cause him to be so forward, but he glad that it did. He enjoyed seeing Satoshi in a state like this; pale face flushed with undeniable pleasure, lips slightly parted and that sexy lil' moan was turning him on! Plus, the young Hikari heir wasn't stopping him, so he can do whatever he wants. Daisuke wondered if he could bring this to the next level… Daisuke blinked. How did that cross his mind? It sounded like something Dark would say… maybe Dark must have a great effect on him; he was staring to turn into him already!
Daisuke grinned when he heard Satoshi moan his name, soft and slightly husky. He pulled up his undershirt and lowers his head, tongue licking Satoshi's muscular abdomen. Satoshi moaned even louder.
A warm wet tongue trailed down the lines of his lower torso, and Satoshi felt his mind whirling into oblivion. He was enjoying himself, but a small part of his mind was starting to oppose, telling him to stop. Stop, stop, it said, stop before something happen and you might regret it. That small conscience in him was starting to grow, and Satoshi was panicked to find the inner battle in him to either stop Daisuke from going even further or just let go and enjoy it.
The internal conflict grew and Satoshi suddenly felt uncomfortable with Daisuke's touches. He loves it, no denials there, but was this what he really wants? Daisuke wasn't acting himself, shouldn't he stop him? Shouldn't he find out the cause of Daisuke's strange behaviour? It can't be because Daisuke loves him, Satoshi knows it for a fact that the said boy's initial love interest is the Harada onee-san and that he sees Satoshi as nothing but a friend. What could have made the young Niwa to be suddenly interested in him?
Amortentia is the most powerful love potion of all. Just a single drop is suffice to make a person to fall in love with the first person he sees…
Satoshi's eyes widens at the piece of information that had suddenly flashed in his mind. 'Amortentia! Of course!' he thought with utter dread, ' there is no other explanation than that damn artwork and its curse!'
Satoshi groaned, this is such a bother. The potion really did spill on Daisuke after all. No wonder Daisuke was being so… not himself. He's being affected by the curse!
Even though he was admittedly reluctant to do this, but Satoshi knew he HAD to stop Daisuke. His mind suddenly snap to normal when he heard the sound of his zipper flew open.
" DAISUKE! NO! STOP!"
Daisuke's eyes widen in surprise and his mind whirled into confusion, when he was suddenly pushed away roughly by the other teen. ' Aww… and it was suddenly getting interesting…' he thought disappointedly.
Daisuke stared at the other teen with bewilderment. Satoshi stared equally back at him, panting and face flush red, as he quickly zipped his pants.
' Maybe I went too far,' Daisuke mused mildly, ' should have gone slow…'
" Daisuke!" Dark yelled, a bright blush on his cheeks.
" Gah! Dark, I thought you were asleep!" Daisuke mentally scowled, " don't you DARE say a thing. Just make like a tree and leave!"
" Like hell! I'm not going to leave alone with HIM! You might end up in- hey! What're you doin'? Don't you- don't you dare- arghhhh… Daisuk-" suddenly darkness engulfed Dark as Daisuke forced him to fade away to the back of his mind.
" Phew!" Daisuke grinned sneakily, " man, he was annoying!"
He blinked when he noticed Satoshi opening his mouth, trying to say something but failed. Daisuke smiled softly at the awkward look on the commander's face.
" Hiwatari-kun…?" he murmured tilting his head in a cute manner. " What's the matter?"
" N-Niwa… y-you… you're not…" the words kept stumbling in his mouth as Satoshi tried to explain what's wrong with Daisuke. But it was hard to speak when he was looking at him like that.
" Hiwatari-kun…" Daisuke whispered huskily, keeping a steady gaze as he crawled seductively towards the other boy. Satoshi panicked when the other boy drew closer. " Don't you like it…? I tried to make it pleasurable for you… or would you like me to try something else instead?"
Satoshi blushed at the suggestion. " N-no… Niwa-kun! That's not necessary… it's just… you have to listen to me… you… you're not…"
Satoshi's words trailed off when Daisuke advanced even nearer till their face was inches apart. He could feel the other boy's hands propped on his thighs for support and his moist breath touched his pale skin.
" N-Niwa…"
Daisuke move his face nearer till their lips was about to touch when-
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING…!.!.!
The school bell rang shrilly, signaling that recess was over and students must return to their classes PRONTO!
Satoshi quickly scrambled away from Daisuke and stood up, his body stiff and rigid as he made a mad dash towards the roof's exit. He stopped near the doorframe before turning around to glance awkwardly at the smaller boy that was left on the floor.
" Anou… Niwa-kun. We should be going to class now!"
With that he hurried down the stairs without a second glance at the other boy. He was halfway down the hallways when he stopped and leaned near a wall, clutching his chest to calm down his raging heartbeat and panting heavily.
" Dammit, Niwa!" he hissed though clenched teeth, " damn stupid ancestor! Damn stupid artwork and damn stupid curse! What am I suppose to do now?.!"
XXXVixxie-chan: (drawls lazily) so… enjoy the fic? I know I did! XP this is my first time writing this kind of stuff so… yeah… (Blushes slightly) anyways, I've got some pretty bad news for everyone: I'll be stopping writing my fic.
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… Oh, no! I won't be stopping forever… just for a month. See, the march test is coming up and I need to concentrate in getting good results. Usually I don't care about my results, I'm quite content with getting mediocre grades but there's no pleasing my dad. He had threaten to take away my laptop AND cutting off the internet if I don't get many A's. Sheesh… knowing my dad, he's serious!
So, wish me luck or else I'll be stopping FOR GOOD! (SIGHS) so… see you guys in April (hopefully)