Queen Susan the Not-So-Gentle
By Narnian magic
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Peter woke up to the yelling of voices. He felt rhythmic breathing on his side, and he remembered Susan was there. He smiled, and listened to the two yelling voices outside. He could make out that it was Edmund and Lucy, and they were calling him and Susan. As gently as he could, he laid Susan's head on his pillow before climbing off the bed to join the younger two Pevensies outside. He opened the door and quickly shut it, fearing that Susan would wake up. He then faced his youngest siblings, and then looked at Edmund, before he said rather grouchy, "What?" Edmund then looked at him dubiously, and then looked behind him. "Where's Susan?" he asked. "She's sleeping." Little did Peter know it was the wrong answer.
He looked at Lucy and Edmund questioningly, while the younger two exchanged glances. Peter suddenly felt very uncomfortable, when he heard a sound behind him. He whipped around to see Susan emerge from his room. Looking at her, he completely missed the look the other two were exchanging. Then Peter moved, and Edmund and Lucy caught his movement, and looked just in time to see Peter lean up to her and kiss their older sister. Lucy covered her mouth with her hands and Edmund grinned. Then he faced Lucy with a look in his eye that said, 'What'd I tell you?' Lucy then looked at him, and even if her hands were still on her mouth, he could see that there was a smile lighting her eyes. They then stared at their older siblings, and half grinned, half smirked. When Peter and Susan finally parted, they grinned sheepishly at their younger siblings.
"Wow…. how long was that, Edmund?" Lucy asked her brother, smirking. Edmund returned her smirk, and said, "Their longest one yet." Peter rubbed the back of his head. Susan grinned. "I guess there won't have to be any explanations now, am I correct, Edmund?" she fixed her younger brother with a knowing look. Edmund was taken aback. She knew it. She figured that he saw the marks on her neck when they saw Rabadash. He grinned, and said, "Yeah."
"But, what do we do with Rabadash?" Lucy suddenly said. All of her siblings looked at her, and none of them spoke. That is, until Susan suddenly had this huge grin on her face. "Well, this is our court, isn't it?" She asked the other monarchs. Peter knew what she was trying to say. Then he grinned as well. "Kick him out of here." He said slowly. Edmund smirked. "This is gonna be fun." The two brothers looked at each other in the eye, and knew what the other was thinking. It was time to prank someone.
Susan caught the look the brothers exchanged, and shook her head. Lucy exchanged the same look with each of her brothers. Susan sighed. Then she looked at Peter, took his hand, and looked into his eyes, her sapphire blue eyes locking with the mischievous blue of his. She sighed again, and said, "If you must." He nodded, and beckoned for Edmund to follow, "They're going to use the old trick again, right?" Lucy's train of thought was broken when she heard these words. She almost fell down. How did Susan know? Surely Peter didn't tell her… Susan, seeing the look in her sister's eye, laughed.
"No, Lucy, Peter didn't tell me. I 'overheard' you guys in the stables after Prince Granitine left." Lucy looked up, rather startled. Then she grinned, and said, "I think so." Then she laughed with her sister. "Oh, I just can't wait to see the look on his face." Susan said, laughing even harder as she pictured Rabadash in her mind. Then the two sisters walked to Susan's room onto the balcony and the bed, waiting for their brother's return.
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Peter grinned. He grinned wider as he saw Rabadash's expression. This time, it was he who must resist the temptation laughing as Edmund dealt with Rabadash. It had been Peter last time when Prince Granitine was here, and now, it was Edmund. Peter's eyes were now filled with tears of silent laughter. He hid his head in his unicorn's mane, as he was about to burst out into laughter. Thank Aslan that he didn't. He breathed in the scent of hay and grass, and he lifted his head when he heard his unicorn neigh. He looked up just in time as Rabadash slowly turned his horse around, and make for Cair Paravel. Peter and Edmund followed, looking at each other with tears pooled in their eyes.
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Rabadash grew angrier each passing moment. Queen Susan already has someone courting her? He couldn't believe it. He had been tricked into believing that Susan was single. But it didn't matter anyway. He would make Susan marry him. Narnia would be his at last! Narnia will join with Calormen, and become the most powerful country the world has ever seen. He couldn't stand it anymore. He held up a hand to indicate to King Edmund that he heard enough. He turned, and led his horse back to the castle.
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Lucy heard the horse's hooves. She grabbed Susan's hand, and they went to the stable, first in hiding when they saw Rabadash, then jumping out when their brothers came in, laughing like they were crazy. Edmund had tears spilling down his face, and Peter had tears pooled in his eyes. Susan smiled, and she pulled Peter in for a hug. "Awww…." Lucy crooned. Edmund smirked and wiped his tears away with the back of his hand. They then looked at Peter and Susan. It appears that they were kissing. Edmund smiled, and then started to count in his head. Lucy laughed silently, tears also pooling in her eyes. When they finally parted, Edmund whistled. Lucy looked at her brother. "Well?" she asked. "Wow. Longer than the last one. Three minutes and twenty six seconds." They laughed, clutching their stomachs and rolling on the floor. The elder Pevensies looked at them, and then at each other. "Kids." Then Peter looked deep into her blue eyes with his own, and pulled her in for another kiss, this time celebrating in their own way of their success in keeping the Calormen prince away. Little did they know that there was something else going on entirely.
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Narnian magic: Hey! Sorry for the delay in stuff, but I was busy updating the other stories. Thanks again to reviewers!