Queen Susan the Not-So-Gentle
Created by Narnian magic
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Rabadash seethed. He clenched his fists. Then he beat the bed as hard as he could. He was angry. Queen Susan was being courted already. He couldn't believe it. But whoever was courting her, he'd better watch out. Because him, Rabadash, will become future King of Narnia. He smiled insanely, and then fell on his bed. He would find out just who was Queen Susan's lover, and kill him. He fell asleep, dreaming of the day which he would claim the Narnian throne for himself. Little did he know that that day he dreamed for would never come.
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Peter laughed silently. He laughed harder when he saw his sister's reaction. Today, the suitor was the duke of Galma. He saw Susan's expression turn from perfectly calm to furious when the duke had drawled on about the good of her leaving Narnia, and being his wife instead in Galma. He offered her a letter, like a contract. Once she signed it, they would leave Galma to be wed. Susan had politely refused, but this guy kept talking. The Gentle Queen's eyes slowly turned from neutral to icy blue. Peter could have sworn that the room dropped a few degrees, and that Susan was just like the White Witch herself. When the duke offered the contract, Susan got so angry, she took the contract, and saw the duke's satisfied smile before ripping the letter into tiny pieces, and stormed out of the throne room. The duke was paralyzed, and after he recovered, he ran out of the room as well.
"Well, looks like we won't be seeing any more of him anytime soon." Edmund smirked to Lucy. Peter looked at them. "How unfortunate." He said, crossing his arms. "Come on, let's check on Susan." "Make sure she doesn't do anything stupid." Lucy agreed. Edmund laughed, and then followed the light haired Pevensies to Susan's chambers. She wasn't there. Peter grimaced. "I think I know where she is." Peter led them to his room, and opened the door. Susan was lying down, the sheets clenched in her fists in a desperate grip.
Peter sat down, next to her, and laid a hand on her shoulder. "Susan." He said gently. She raised her head, and then got up, and wrapped her arms tightly around him before letting go. She finally spoke, in a quite voice, "I don't believe some of these suitors. Who do they think they are?" Susan didn't usually talk like this. Peter was frightened by her tone. He was about to say something when someone cut him off. "Susan, please, you're scaring us." It was Lucy. Susan fixed her eyes on her younger sister. "Just tell those…those…. those bastards to get out of Narnia!" At this, her three siblings did a double take. Susan never called anyone a bad word.
Peter was the first to recover. "Don't worry, we will…somehow." Susan smiled gratefully at him before hugging him again. He smiled, and closed his eyes, his head buried in her dark hair. Edmund smirked, and caught his younger sister's eye. He motioned for her to take a step back, and she did. Susan's head lifted from Peter's chest, and her eyes were a little red-rimmed. "Thanks." She finally said. Then suddenly, she heard a rumble next to her. She looked, and there was Edmund. Lucy laughed. "Let's go down to dinner now." she suggested. Susan and Peter laughed as well, and she went down, feeling cheerier than she had since Rabadash arrived here.
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He smiled. The plan was ready. He just needed the Kings out for a little while, and Narnia would be his!
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Peter appeared the next morning at the breakfast table looking grim. Susan stopped to look at him, and asked, "What's wrong?" Peter looked at her, then Edmund. "Ed, we have to leave Narnia tomorrow." he said, as a-matter-of-factly. Edmund looked up. "Why?" "Archenland. We're supposed to go sign a treaty there or something." "Oh." Peter turned to face the girls. He took Susan's hand.
"You guys be careful." Susan smiled, and tweaked his nose. "We know how to fight if we ever need to." "Yeah, we can defend ourselves." Her younger sister piped up. Susan then eyed Peter. Then she grinned. "Instead of you worrying for us, don't you ever worry for yourselves?" she asked her older brother. Peter grinned back at her. "Um, no. Remember, that time, it was me that defended you against Rabadash." Susan frowned at him. "Uh, no, High King." She said mockingly. "I drew my sword first." Peter looked at her, raising an eyebrow. Susan sighed. "Whatever. We can protect ourselves." "I should hope." Peter muttered under his breath. Unfortunately, she heard him.
She whipped around and marched back to him. "Say that again?" she hissed, daring him to. Peter backed away, and then she smiled, satisfied. "Good. See you later." She said, flicking her hair back. Susan smiled at him, before going through the door and out to her chambers. The two brothers sighed, leaving their youngest sister grinning. If Lucy knew what was in the future, she wouldn't even dare to be smiling.
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Narnian magic: sorry for the delay! And sorry for making it so short. Haha.