Queen Susan the Not-So-Gentle

By Narnian magic

Thanks to reviewers!

Caithzadz- I MIGHT make her marry Rabadash….hehe.

Aminuleen- yeah, sure. You know, that that kind of stuff doesn't work on me. But I'll take pity on you. I mean, I haven't updated in a month, so I'll be nice.

KibumiWong- Hey! Thanks! Yes, you should hate Rabadash. The guy that's meant to be hated. Haha.

HermoniePotter1378- oh my gosh, thanks so much! Yes, yes, I'm updating!

Yes, I know, I haven't updated for a loonnnnggg time, but it was a really big cliffy. So, yes, I update pretty quickly. Normally, that is. Probably like, one or two more chapter until the end. Hehe.

Disclaimer: Own nothing but storyline

enjoyenjoyenjoyenjoyenjoyenjoy

"Let go of Lucy." Her tone was cold and sharp. She stepped up to Rabadash. Rabadash smiled, and as soon as Susan was close enough, he let go of Lucy, pushed her to her brothers, and took Susan by the wrists, putting them behind her back. Peter's eyes flashed dangerously. Rabadash raised his sword. "Oh no, High King Peter is helpless." He taunted. Hatred showed in all four Pevensie's eyes. He then dropped his sword, and wrapped his arm around Susan. Peter's anger came to life, as did Susan's. "My dear, we shall be married this very day!"

Susan tried her best to wrestle with her anger, and she regretted dropping her sword. It was still in sight, and it was a good thing Rabadash forgot all about it when she came to him. "My dear," She heard Rabadash say, "it is nearly time. We shall be wed!" the young Queen tried to not show any sign of disgust. The Calormen Prince had called in a priest, and had forced Susan in front of him, while standing next to her.

The priest began, but Rabadash stopped him. "Just go straight to the vows." The priest nodded in fear of what the prince could do to him. "D-d-do you, Queen Susan, take Prince Rabadash as your lawfully wedded husband?" Susan just stood there. Then she swayed faintly, turning slightly so her side was facing the place where her sword had fallen. It was an act. "Susan!" her siblings shouted, but the Calormen guards held them back. Their prince caught Susan as she fell. "Let me get to her!" she heard her sister shout. The guard made a big mistake by looking at her. He recoiled in fright at what he saw. Pure hatred was in the youngest Pevensie's eyes.

Peter and Edmund swallowed nervously as they saw the look their younger sister threw the guards and the prince himself. Even Susan caught the look, and felt very uncomfortable. She instantly remembered how she had made them particularly uneasy at the dinning table a few days ago. She instantly regretted it, and almost laughed at the memories. She struggled in vain to keep her face straight. She put the back of her hand to her forehead. "Oh…" she moaned dramatically. "What is it, my dear?" Rabadash asked her. "Oh, I feel so faint." Susan replied, trying her best not to laugh. Her acting skills were pretty good. She tried to make it clear to her siblings that she was just pretend, and they should go on with her play. Of course her siblings understood her. Especially Peter. He could read her like a book.

"Susan!" he yelled, trying his best to look desperate, which turned out pretty well. Edmund followed suit, and said, "Su! Answer me!" His voice shook a little from his insides exploding with laughter, but his acting wasn't bad. Lucy continued to give people 'the look.'

Susan staggered, getting closer to the sword, and she quickly calculated the distance of it from her arm. She came up with that she would have to just spin out of the prince's arms, swoop down, and reach for the sword. She had nothing else to try. It was a risk if she calculated wrong. She took in what she hoped sounded like a shaky breath. She tried to turn to see if her siblings were weaponless. She tried not to grin as she saw Peter's sword, always there. Lucy's dagger was in its sheath. Edmund's sword was there as well. Thankfully, they were all wearing cloaks, so their weapons were all concealed, though Rabadash knew about Lucy's dagger. He probably forgot that Peter and Edmund had just returned from a long journey, and most likely that they'd have weapons. Susan managed to look up weakly at the prince, making him let his guard down. Now was the chance.

She regained her balance in a split-second, spun, reached down, and successfully grabbed her sword. She looked up, and saw Rabadash staring at her with wide eyes before them shrinking again, and he narrowed his eyes at her. As for her siblings, they had drawn their weapons, and they had the guards at the sword. Well, the dagger for Lucy. Susan smiled before turning back to Rabadash. She raised her sword once again.

Rabadash smirked. "Do you really think you can escape from me that easily, my little flower?" Without warning, he lunged out, and made her drop her sword by once again holding her wrists behind her back. 'This action is getting so boring and annoying.' Susan thought. She definitely didn't have her sword, but it didn't mean that she couldn't get herself out of this situation. She raised her foot forcefully, so she was basically kicking backwards. She kicked Rabadash's knee, and heard a sickening crack. She spun around when his holds on her wrists were loose, and she kicked him once again in the stomach. It was lucky that she chose to wear a dress like the one she did back when they were first in Aslan's camp. It provided more freedom of movement than her other dresses and gowns.

She picked up her sword again, and placed distance between her and Rabadash. He managed to stand up again, holding his hand to his stomach. "But you're a queen." He protested. "Queens don't- ladies don't…" he trailed off, taking deep breaths. "Go Susan!" she heard Lucy cheer. She smiled before lifting her sword. "If I win, you get out of Narnia that very second. If you win…" she trailed off. "If you win…you can marry me." She said. Rabadash looked at her and grinned nastily. "One more rule. No one can interrupt, or it's instant victory for me." Susan nodded and then cast a glance at Peter.

His eyes were warning her. 'Be careful.' They said. Susan nodded. She took a deep breath and looked at her opponent. He still had that nasty smirk on his face. 'Ooo, I CANNOT wait until I wipe that smirk off his face.' Susan thought. He charged. The fight begin

endofchapterendofchapterendofchapter

Narnian magic: Hey people…so sorry, updated later than I expected. Anyway, yes, the ending is coming soon, and yes, Susan's going to LOOSE! No, I'm kidding. Um, the chapter was shorter than I would have liked, but it will have to do. Until next time! Peace.