Hey people, please be nice to me, this is my second attempt at a beyblade fic. It takes place after season 2. I sadly enough did not see G-revolution. It doesn't show here in Holland. I was hoping someone could tell me in their review, what happens in G-revolution, because I'd really, really, really like to know that and who those new guys are. Thanks in advance. Feel free to let me know what you think. Kai-Dranzer gets a brownie! The guy was indeed Ray! (gives brownie to Kai-Dranzer) But so far no one even tried to guess who the girl was they're having another conversation at the end of this chapter! Whoever guesses who the girl is will get a cookie AND a brownie! Guess away! HINT: She's half-Japanese so it's not Jin or Rachel!
Disclaimer: Would I be writing this if I did? I only own this story and my OC's Yuriko, Kazumi, Rachel and Jin and their bitbeasts. Shin (if you can guess what it's short for you get a Kai plushie from me), Shinobu (just made it up on the spot. - ;), shitsukoi (it means pain in the ass! hihihi!) and tomodachi (it means friend)
new OC's:
Carlos: Rachel's cousin. He's a beyblader for one of the new teams that lost. redhead biker punk with green eyes.
Chanty: Beyblader. Leader of team Dearka. The new Biovolt team. Long orange streaked messy hair in a ponytail and blue-black eyes; light blue around the pupil and darker toward the edge of the iris. White sleeveless turtleneck belly-top, white miniskirt very tight, knee-length white boots and white fingerless elbow length gloves all have gold trimmed edges and the turtleneck has a green gemstone on the middle of the collar so it looks like a necklace.
Trevor: another Dearka member. short spiked white/blue hair with lavender highlights eyes like Chanty's but then in green. gothic street punk clothes and a black cloth covering his forehead.
Trey: Jin's younger brother, which is kidnapped by Biovolt. Brown hair and crimson eyes. boy's school uniform; grey slacks and a white button-up shirt covered by a dark red jacket with the school's name on it. He has a fancy golden watch around his wrist, which has a chip in it that contains a bitbeast called Zhu that only Jin knows about.
Summary: "Why do you get up every time I knock you down? Don't you see it's much easier to just give up? Why can't I defeat you?" he yelled angrily. "Because…I must…fight! Losing is not-not an option for me! Makeru mon ka!" (I will not give up! in Japanese) she said breathing raggedly as she stood up once more.
Chapter one
"What a battle people! The majestics are battling it out against team Kazumi in a battle royal!" AJ yelled through the microphone.
"They sure are AJ! team Yujiraka seems to have a hard time keeping up the pace and lost two players already, while the majestics lost only one! Leader Kazumi and her teammate Yuriko are fighting to keep in the battle, but against the powerful hits from Olivier, Robert and Johnny they have very little chance of survival and they have to win this round to go to the quarter finals with the other seven teams. It seems that- Ai there goes Robert's blade out of the dish and he's out of the match. Was that a lucky strike from Kazumi's side or did Robert meet his match?" Brad best said as he watched from the newly commissioned commentary boot in the top of the beystadium.
"Why don't we ask Robert himself? Robert?" AJ said.
"It was a lucky shot, they've got good defenses, which is why they lasted so long but they're tiring now." Robert said watching the remaining four bladders from the bleachers.
"There you have it!" AJ said.
"Hey Yu let's show them some teamwork like no other!" Kazumi asked her teammate.
"Ryoukai!" Yuriko yelled not looking up.
"Alright! Shinobu arise!" Kazumi yelled. A woman with long black hair and grey eyes, dressed in dark onyx colored ninja clothes appeared holding a sphere of light in her hands.
"Shin, come forth!" Yuriko yelled. A teenage boy with black bat wings in black clothing appeared. He had long chestnuts colored hear which hang loose, glowing violet eyes, long fangs and pointy ears. He was holding a big scythe.
"What the hell? Salamelion rise!" Johnny yelled.
"Unicolion Come forth!" Olivier yelled.
"We'll trample your weak bitbeasts!" Johnny said.
"Not on my watch you won't! Darkness-slash!" Yuriko yelled. Shin swung his scythe and a black flash covered the bey-dish so they couldn't see the blades anymore.
"NO! What did you do?" Olivier yelled.
"What's wrong guys I thought you were going to trample us?" Kazumi said teasingly.
"Salamelion! Attack!" Johnny yelled angrily.
"Shin block." Yuriko said calmly as she kept her eyes closed. The clashing of two blades was heard and Johnny's blade left the dish along with Yuriko's.
"I may not be able to defeat you but I will take you with me when I loose." Yuriko said smirking as she walked back to her teammates.
"Oh! This match just keeps on getting more excited and it isn't even the finals yet!" AJ said.
"Now it's Kazumi versus Olivier. Who will win? Will it be Olivier who has more experience or will Kazumi have luck on her side.
"I don't need luck. All I need is faith. Shinobu! Shrine of wind blast!" Kazumi yelled.
"Unicolion! Attack!" Olivier yelled.
A large Tunnel of wind rushed around the two bitbeasts which charged at each other with all their might. The wind became stronger and stronger until both bladers were pushed into the air by its force.
"Both bladers were thrown into the air by the power of Kazumi's shrine of wind blast attack!" Brad said jumping out of his seat.
"Ugh…My head. What the hell happened?" Kazumi muttered as she woke up.
"We won, but you landed in the audience. Next time you want to do that let us know okay?" Rachel said.
"What about Olivier? Is he okay?" Kazumi asked worriedly.
"Ask him he's in the bed next to yours for check up." Rachel said. Kazumi looked to the left and saw the boy sitting up reading a book.
"Hey! Sorry about sending you flying in the match. I've got to work a little more on that one." she said smiling apologetically.
"It's okay. I've been treated to worse. No one ever said blading was a safe sport. Nice match though. We should blade again sometime. Maybe in the semi-finals if we're lucky?" Olivier said smiling happily.
"If our teams get that far, but we'll most definitely have a re-match. But when we do I'll try not to land us in the hospital." Kazumi said smiling back.
"I see you're okay again." a voice said from the door.
"Chanty. What do you want?" Rachel snarled angrily. Olivier looked back and forth between the blond and the orange haired teen.
"Old enemies?" he whispered to Kazumi in the bed next to his.
"Yeah, she works for Biovolt. They used to be best friends until Rach found out Chanty only befriended her to get to her cousin Carlos, whom you defeated earlier today." Kazumi whispered back.
"Ouch, that hurts. Poor Rachel." Olivier said calmly.
"Chanty!" Jin yelled jumping up. The petit brown haired girl launched at the girl near the door but Yuriko stopped her.
"She's not worth it." Yuriko said calmly, but her eyes betrayed her anger. They were pitch-black. At that moment, a nurse walked in.
"Okay young lady unless you have a serious injury or are related to one of those two you must leave." the nurse said calmly looking at the girl near the door.
"Just came to wish her luck, I'm going now. Bye Jin." Chanty said turning around and walking out.
Jin just ran out of the room once the orange haired bitch was out of sight.
"What's wrong?" Olivier asked worriedly.
"Long story without short version which isn't up to us to let." Yuriko said walking out as well.
"You know I hate it when she makes sense like that." Rachel said following the Chinese teen out the door.
"Guess we'll see you around sometime?" Kazumi asked before leaving as well.
"I guess. Hey, wait! I'll walk with you, if you want!" Olivier said getting up and following the girl.
"Thanks that'd be nice." Kazumi said happily. The two teens walked back to the BBA assigned hotel where all the teams were staying talking about things and laughing together.
"Hey! Wait up Hold the elevator!" a voice yelled, bringing Jin out of her train of thoughts. She looked up, saw the blond boy from the other night running up to the elevator, and held it before it closed.
"Thanks...I'm...Max." he said catching his breath before pushing the button to his floor.
"I know. You're Max Tate, you're with the bladebreakers. Your bitbeast is named Draciel you got it from your grandmother. It's mostly defensive. You're from America, your mom Judy Tate is the coach of the All-stars and your dad owns a beyblade shop. Your favorite food is hamburgers with fries and a strawberry milkshake." Jin said not looking at the boy.
"You sure know a lot about me. You're not stalking me are you?" Max joked.
"No, I'm just good with computers and my specialty is hacking them. I know where to look for background info and I saw you order that food yesterday. You told Tyson it was your favorite and I heard you tell some girl about how your grandma gave you a locket with a bitchip in it that was Draciel." Jin said giggling softly.
"Is that so? Well Miss Jillian O'Connor from Scotland. I also know things about you. You're the second youngest member of Yurajika. You have one younger brother that lives with your mom and you live with your dad. You like to play video games and your favorite food is chocolate in any form shape or flavor. Your mom gave you your bitbeast Tomodachi. You met the other three members of your team on a fieldtrip. You're all from different schools except for Yuriko and you were at a museum that fieldtrip where you had gotten bored and left to explore the city; meeting Yuriko and her brother Fei. You became friends immediately and became a blading group not much later. Your favorite color is pink and you have an obsession with teddy bears." Max recited from what he remembered Kenny telling him the other night.
"I see Kenny hasn't been sitting still last night." Jin said.
"Nope, he hardly ever does. Even when he does he has Dizzy work her proverbial butt off for him gathering information.
"Hey." he said finding her in the same spot as the day before after training.
"Hey." she said calmly looking at the sky as the sun was about to set.
"You like watching the sky don't you?" he asked.
"Just sitting here and listening to the wind or watching the sky relaxes me." she answered closing her eyes and smiling serenely as the wind picked up. He looked at her and blushed as he saw her laying down on the rock with her arms spread and her hair fanning out behind her now it wasn't held in its traditional style on top of her head; held up by chopsticks and rubber bands
"Yes it is relaxing isn't it?" he said closing his eyes calmly smiling has he laid his head back in his neck to enjoy the calmness the wind brought. She opened her eyes and blushed a little looking at the boy that almost seemed at one with his surroundings. She quickly closed her eyes when she sensed his movement. He opened one eye and saw her close hers. He blushed slightly. Then he heard someone calling her name. He looked up and saw the blond girl from her team run up to them.
"Y-you h-have to come! Jin and her new blond haired friend are in trouble! They were in the gym doing a friendly match! Then that bitch and her team attacked them!" the blond said taking some deep breaths.
"I'm on my way!" she answered the blond getting up and grabbing her blade.
"I'm going with you!" he said.
"Fine just hurry!" the blond said before running back.
"Oh great they broke the elevator!" the blond cried in frustration. He looked at the blond and then at her. She nodded and ordered her friend to take the stairs and lead the way to the gym. However halfway down the stairs they met trouble.
"Well, well, well! If it isn't the tramp. Bringing reinforcements?" their trouble said. He was a fairly tall boy that wore gothic street punk clothes. He had white/blue spiked hair and green eyes that seemed to grow darker from the pupils down.
"Trevor!" the blond bit out. Trevor just smirked and launched his blade at them. He was about to launch his own blade when she placed a hand over his hand and nodded at the blond before pulling him back down the stairs. She ran back outside letting go of his hand and found another one of her teammates and Olivier taking on yet another two Dearka members. She sighed as her friend told her to get to Jin. She nodded and rushed to the front knowing that she had to get to Jin now! He looked at what was happening and caught Olivier mouthing 'Max needs help' to him and nodded before following the girl to the front of the building.
Well that's chapter two! And remember: Whoever guesses who the girl that is talking with Ray is will get a cookie AND a brownie! Guess away!
HINT: She's half-Japanese so it's not Jin or Rachel!
So, let me know what you think! and take a guess for that delicious brownie!