Hey people, please be nice to me, this is my second attempt at a beyblade fic. It takes place after season 2. I sadly enough did not see G-revolution. It doesn't show here in Holland. I was hoping someone could tell me in their review, what happens in G-revolution, because I'd really, really, really like to know that and who those new guys are. Thanks in advance. Feel free to let me know what you think. The girl was YURIKO! gives Kai-Dranzer a cookie AND a brownie! Congratulations again you guessed right twice!
Disclaimer: Would I be writing this if I did? I only own this story and my OC's Yuriko, Kazumi, Rachel and Jin and their bitbeasts. Shin (if you can guess what it's short for you get a Kai plushie from me), Shinobu (just made it up on the spot. - ;), shitsukoi (it means pain in the ass! hihihi!) and tomodachi (it means friend)
new OC's:
Carlos: Rachel's cousin. He's a beyblader for one of the new teams that lost. redhead biker punk with green eyes.
Chanty: Beyblader. Leader of team Dearka. The new Biovolt team. Long orange streaked messy hair in a ponytail and blue-black eyes; light blue around the pupil and darker toward the edge of the iris. White sleeveless turtleneck belly-top, white miniskirt very tight, knee-length white boots and white fingerless elbow length gloves all have gold trimmed edges and the turtleneck has a green gemstone on the middle of the collar so it looks like a necklace.
Trevor: another Dearka member. short spiked white/blue hair with lavender highlights eyes like Chanty's but then in green. gothic street punk clothes and a black cloth covering his forehead.
Trey: Jin's younger brother, which is kidnapped by Biovolt. Brown hair and crimson eyes. boy's school uniform; grey slacks and a white button-up shirt covered by a dark red jacket with the school's name on it. He has a fancy golden watch around his wrist, which has a chip in it that contains a bitbeast called Zhu that only Jin knows about.
Summary: "Why do you get up every time I knock you down? Don't you see it's much easier to just give up? Why can't I defeat you?" he yelled angrily. "Because…I must…fight! Losing is not-not an option for me! Makeru mon ka!" (I will not give up! in Japanese) she said breathing raggedly as she stood up once more.
Chapter three
"Well, well, well! If it isn't the tramp. Bringing reinforcements?" their trouble said. He was a fairly tall boy that wore gothic street punk clothes. He had white/blue spiked hair and green eyes that seemed to grow darker from the pupils down.
"Trevor!" the blond bit out. Trevor just smirked and launched his blade at them. He was about to launch his own blade when she placed a hand over his hand and nodded at the blond before pulling him back down the stairs. She ran back outside letting go of his hand and found another one of her teammates and Olivier taking on yet another two Dearka members. She sighed as her friend told her to get to Jin. She nodded and rushed to the front knowing that she had to get to Jin now! He looked at what was happening and caught Olivier mouthing 'Max needs help' to him and nodded before following the girl to the front of the building.
Once they reached the front of the building Yuriko jumped onto the closest balcony and quickly made her way up. Ray raised an eyebrow before following her up.
"I get the feeling this isn't your first time scaling a building." He said as he hoisted himself onto a balcony on the thirteenth floor.
"Maybe, hurry we've got thirty-seven more to scale before we're at the top!" Yuriko answered as she jumped over to the balcony on her left before going upward again.
With Jin and Max in the elevator earlier
"I saw you train the other night and your battle this morning. Not bad." Max said trying to make conversation with the petit girl.
"Thanks, you're not bad either." Jin said softly. Max looked at her again and noted that she looked a little sad.
"What's up? You look so sad. I know it's probably none of my busyness, but I can't stand seeing people sad." Max said rubbing the back of his head. Jin sighed as she stared at her necklace.
"Nothing really." she said sadly.
Max peeked over the petit girl's shoulder at the necklace. it held a photo of a Jin and a boy in grey slacks and a white button-up shirt covered by a dark red jacket with his school's name on it. He wondered if he should ask her. Max glanced over his shoulder at the elevator doors and the floors they still needed to go before they reached their floor.
"Is he your brother?" he asked Jin.
"Yeah." she said sadly.
"You miss him huh?" Max asked kindly. Jin turned away and she was about to speak again when…
/BANG! SQUEAK! FTSSSS! CRACK!/
Something seemed to have exploded above them. The elevator stopped abruptly causing both teens to crash into one another. The lights gave out as the bulbs exploded with a dull sizzle. Then something cracked. The two teens stumbled around in the dark for a few moments.
"M-Max?" Jin's frightened voice inquired softly.
"Yeah?" Max answered as he felt his way on hands and knees around the elevators.
"It's so dark! W-what happened." Jin said trying to sound braver then she felt. Max finally hid something and upon inspection found it was Jin's foot. Jin yelped fearfully.
"It's okay it's just me! The elevator's broke down, the lights are broken and the control panel is busted too. I'm sure of it, my back met it up close and in person…and none to gently either." Max said trying to lighten the mood. Jin giggled softly.
"Good you're laughing again. Now we need to make light! Any ideas? I forgot to pack my matches this morning." Max said as he finally found Jin's hand and squeezed it gently.
"I think so, hold on I've got to…got it. Eh you might want to cover your head…Three…Two…One…Let it rip!" Jin said shakily as she let go of Max and launched her blade.
"Okay Tomodaichi! Solar array!" Jin said. A bright light lit up the elevator and Max got up.
"Well I was right about the control panel, but I think I can get us out." he said pulling out his own blade and launching it at the hatch above them which shot open immediately.
"Cool!" Jin said grinning. She then crouched down and jumped up. When she did she grabbed the edge of the now opened hatch and hoisted herself out of the elevator. Then she reached down and pulled Max up before ordering her blade back to her hand.
"Nice. We're right next to a door too! okay now if only it will open up!" Max said straining as he pulled the doors open with Jin.
"Yayness! Light!" Jin said jumping through the door. Max chuckled.
"Nice thinking back there!" Max said. Jin blushed a little and looked away.
"Thanks…You eh, you really helped me back there." she then said not looking at him.
"You made the light and got us out." Max said laughingly.
"That's…that's not what I mean. I-I I'm affright of the dark." Jin said so soft Max almost missed it.
"Oh, bad experience huh?" Max asked as they quietly walked down the hall.
"Yeah, I was blind for three weeks as a kid after an accident. It was horrible." Jin said looking ashamed.
"That's bad. Hey! How about a beybattle? You know just a friendly match!" Max said changing the subject.
"Sure, race you there!" Jin said running off to the stairs which lead to the gym on the roof.
"Okay! Three, two, one LET IT RIP!" they both yelled at the same time and launched.
"Go Draciel!" Max cheered.
"Go, go Tomodaichi!" Jin cheered happily as she watched their blades. Max smiled. If Tyson found out he like her he'd throw a fit over it. Kai would probably not care in the least as long as his techniques didn't lack from it and as for Ray, well Max had the idea Ray liked another member of Jin's team.
His thoughts however were rudely broken when a green/golden/white blade passed just millimeters from his face. Jin growled and her honey-brown eyes suddenly narrowed dangerously on the white and golden clad girl who stood a while away from them at the gym entrance.
"Chanty." Jin growled angrily. Said girl merely chuckled as she made her blade attack a second time. This time however Max was paying attention and Draciel blocked it.
"Nice Max, but you'd best stay out of this. It's a girl thing. Angra attack that little nerd! Claws of night!" Chanty yelled. A large fire cat jumped out of Chanty's blade. Tomodaichi came out at the same time, she was a young girl who looked a lot like Jin in her white dress with straps only she had long brown hair and big blue eyes. She also wore a silver helmet on her head.
"Tomodaichi! Oxy blaster!" Jin yelled quickly and as Angra charged at Tomodaichi with it's claws out blasts of compressed air hit it rapidly. The fire cat was thrown back and got up.
Max watched helplessly at the two bitbeasts who exchanged attack after attack. Suddenly Chanty had Angra attack Jin herself and Jin froze at the sight of the flames coming at her. Max ordered Draciel who'd been spinning next to him all this time to block the attack. Jin removed her hands from her face and saw how Draciel forced Angra back. Max came to stand next to her and smirked at her before ordering Draciel to fight with Tomodaichi against Angra. But Chanty surprised them by making Angra multiply itself around them.
back to Ray and Yuriko in the here and now.
They finally reached the top of the building and into the gym in time to see Max and Jin being attacked by Angra while their blades lay next to them. Yuriko's eyes went black and Ray shruddered at their cold calculating glare. Yuriko pulled out her blade and attacked Angra before it could hurt her friend and his. Chanty hissed angrily and attacked vigorously. Yuriko could not do much to attack, every time she tried Angra moved to hurt Jin and Max. Ray got an idea. He watched the fight a while and when he saw Chanty had forgotten him he ran to Max and Jin and got in front of them. Yuriko however was completely aware of what happened around her and finally went in an all out attack.
"Shadow blaster!" Yuriko yelled and blasts of black energy hit Angra.
"Argh! Angra! Nightmare slash!" Chanty yelled angrily.
"Darkness slash!" Yuriko yelled. Ray wondered how it would stop this attack and saw that Shin Yuriko's bitbeast swirled around it's scythe before slashing effectively blocking the blast and sending one of his own. Angra growled when it was blinded by the defensive move and so did its owner, but other then growing annoyed they seemed to suffer no ill effects from the attack and send another attack at the girl who ordered Shin to block it. However the gust of wind coming free from the attacks send Yuriko into a nearby piece gym equipment and she grunted in pain before getting up again. Kazumi, Olivier and Rachel just reached the gym
"Go away Chanty, you're not welcome here. Shin! SHADOW BLAZE!" Yuriko yelled and as she did swirling dark flames trapped Angra on all sides and burn it badly. It returned to its blade and Chanty left. She glared at Kazumi before smirking evilly.
"Sayonara … Hime.1 Hey Jin I'll tell Trey you said hi." Chanty said softly before walking out. Kazumi paled at this. Jin glared a burning hole in the back of Chanty's head.
"Iie… kudasai…" Kazumi whispered then her eyes rolled back and she passed out. Olivier caught her just before she hit the floor.
Max helped Jin onto her feet.
"Hey you okay?" he asked quietly.
"Yeah…" Jin said not meeting his eyes. Max sighed and turned to Ray who wasn't paying any attention to him but to the black haired girl that just ran out of the gym. Max chuckled a little when Ray went after her.
"Come Olivier and me will take you girls to your rooms now." he said holding out a hand to Jin.
"Okay." Jin said. Rachel grabbed Kazumi's blade which she'd dropped when she passed out and Olivier carried Kazumi out of the gym.
He found her behind the building in the park. She was fighting an invisible enemy.
"Hey." He said quietly. She didn't stop or look at him.
"Go away." She growled.
"hm…no." Ray said watching her moves and jumping in at the right moment.
"Fine then don't but don't say I didn't warn you." she huffed. Not long after that they were locked in a heavy fight which neither wanted to lose.
"You're…not bad." she said between breaths when they finally stopped and lay in the grass.
"You're…no…not bad…ei…either." he said smirking.
"Thanks." she whispered. He smiled as he watched her close her eyes and calm her breathing. He knew there was something about her and her team that wasn't quite right. He remembered what Chanty had said and wondered what it meant. Kazumi wasn't a princess or at least not according to Kenny's data she wasn't and who on earth is Trey. He pushed the thoughts away for later and looked at her again. Her breath had evened out and her eyes were still closed.
"Yuriko?" he questioned softly. He got no response. He chuckled again. She'd fallen asleep. It was getting late though. He quietly picked her sleeping form up and went back to the hotel.
Oh boy excitement, excitement. Let me know what you think people!
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