I was told that I should make another poem, so here it is. Another Where Were You?


Where were you,

On that day?

Where were you when,

The flames came to play.

As cats began to panic,

My heart began to race.

For I saw terror

Stamped on every face.

I followed with the others,

As we left in a hurry.

But there were three others

Who had cause to worry.

Two elders and a kit

Were nowhere to be found.

So when you offered to look,

I decided to help search around.

The air was thick with smoke,

But as I drew in another breath,

I wondered when we found them,

Will they have met their death?

The camp was in flames,

But through the smoke I could see,

The shapes of two cats,

Longing to be free.

I rushed past you to meet them,

Grabbing Halftail in my jaws.

You followed behind me,

We walked on heavy paws.

Breathing was hard,

I soon fell behind.

You turned back to help me,

But was there enough time?

A cry came from somewhere,

You looked up to see,

Bramblekit frightented,

Clinging to a tree.

You jumped to save him,

Instead of me.

But he needed your help,

That was plain to see.

The tree crashed down,

You were lost to sight.

And deep down I knew,

I would not see the night.

Where were you when,

I layed down to die?

Where were you when,

I no longer could try?

You left me for a kit,

The son of a traitor no less.

But a life is a life,

You StarClan will bless.