Saphira: Sorry the first chapter was quick and undetailed. My friends put me on a deadline, my brother wouldn't let me focus and I usualy have time to write stuff down and go over it. I apologize to my readers and hope you will accept it.
Let him die
Five days had past, they were back in Amity Park, and Danny still had no idea what had happened. He went through all the possibilities and ruled them all out. Jazz said that she didn't remember seeing anyone wearing all blak until the funeral. Not even Sam and Tucker could find an explanation, granted they were never at G.G. Marty's house in the first place.
Danny could't help but ask himself, "Is it wrong to just sit and wait for another Death?" He was sudenly pulled from his thoughts by Sam waving her hand infront of his face.
"Danny. Tucker and I have come to two explanations. She looked at Tuck to begin.
"One: The guy was the Grim Reaper. Two: You've gone crazy."
Danny was getting tired of people calling him crazy. "Isn't the Grim Reaper suposed to be a skeleton with a cloak and a seith?"
"Actualy there are many ideas of what he looks like. But why only you can see him is beond me."
"Mabey it's his ghost powers." Tucker piped up.
"Could be." Danny said deep in thought.
In a large building people rushed through hallways ran in and out of doorways and yelled out what things were going where. It resembled a busy press ofice. One very profesional looking blond woman ran around asking people the same question. "Has anybody seen Death? Anybody?"
"I think I saw him go back into his ofice." one man answered.
"Thank you." she went in the ofice the man pointed to. "Death?"
"Did you get the file I asked?"
"Right here."
Death read aloud from the file. "Daniel Fenton, 14 years, Amity Park. Apointments." He looked down a list of apointments he had with cupid, the muses, ect. "intersting." he said as he looked down at his time to pass. "Rachel look at this."
The woman came over and looked at the file. "goodness. How did this happen."
"I don't know, but I'm going to find out. If word gets out, I may have to become mortal."
"What do you plan on doing?" Rachel asked woridly.
"For now we keep it confidential. Nobody has to know until it's all sorted out."
Back at the Nasty Burger Sam and Tucker were arguing about the Nasty Buger slogan. Sudenly they heard a man choking at the other table.
"Somebody help him!" sam yelled.
"No!" Danny shouted back. He ran to the bathroom and went ghost. When he came back, he saw the man we now know as Death, walking towards the guy who was choking.
"Stop!" Danny yelled as he tackled Death to the ground.
"What are you doing?"
"I'm trying to stop you from killing that man!" Danny shouted.
"He has killed himself!" he snaped back. "I have nothing to do with it!"
The choking man finaly gasped into consiousness. Death rose up, holding Danny by his arms. "Do you have any idea what you've done?" his grip tightened on Danny. "Do you?" He threw Danny to the ground and vanished.
To a human eye, it just looked like a man was choking as Danny phantom was having a seisure. "Danny! What was going on?" Sam asked.
"I think I just cheated death."
Saphira: the horrible thing is, I would've gotten this chapter up sooner if my Dad wasn't always playing Star Wars Galaxies on the only computer in the house with my files in it. I'm suprised I actualy got some reviews on the first chapter
