Leila Stewart & Odessa Covington
June 30th, 2006
Neon Genesis Evangelion:
Premonition
Chapter 1: Weaving A Story
Author's Note:
Hello, Hello! Welcome to my third Evangelion story everyone! It is actually a role play I (Leila) have working on with one of my best friend (Who I got addicted to Evangelion after she originally couldn't stand it, might I add!)
Well, as it said in the summary, this story takes place in the last episode's AU, or Alternate Universe…okay, okay…so we played around with the settings and stuff, but nothing really changed…but we did make up the character backgrounds and all that…so give us that credit, at least!
So of course, me being the devil and all, I played as Asuka herself! MUWAHAHAHA! So we played characters opposite in the story…like…for example…since I play Asuka, Odessa played Shinji…since her custom character eventually may like someone, I played as that character…
(It is basically my job to edit and review over Odessa-Chan's grammar, seeing as she never capitalizes the characters name's and randomly capitalizes other things. Lol.)
Well…never mind…I'll just get onto the story…please enjoy and review it when you are done! Thank you so much for reading "Neon Genesis Evangelion: Premonition"
As for me (Odessa—the person doing most of the writing) I take the role play and turn it into the story, you see...I'm the mastermind behind everything. I add small things to the story to make it more interesting, and I help come up with most of the plots.
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Premonition
Chapter One: Weaving a Story
Walking into the not so crowded homeroom, Asuka set her briefcase like backpack on the small metallic hook on the edge of the wooden topped desk. Hearing the small noise of shoes hitting the tile, her head looked up to see Hikari walking towards her. Hikari lent against Asuka's desk, the usual friendly smile placed upon her face as she looked over her dear friend.
"Hey Hikari" Asuka mumbled quietly, setting her chin in the palm of her hand, looking around the nearly empty classroom with a slight hint of absolute boredom shone in her cerulean blue eyes.
"Mornin' Asuka-" Hikari's eyes glanced around questioningly "-No shinji today? Is he sick or something?" Usually Shinji would be following Asuka around like a lost little puppy…had something gone wrong?
Asuka's blue eyes glance around, her head unmoving though she let out a defeated sigh "Hell if I know, I really couldn't care less about that stupid idiot…We got in an argument this morning. So I stormed off and left his ass there" Sure it wasn't exactly the right thing to do…considering how long they've been close friends. Though she had had it with his antics, he could wake up his own ass in the morning!
As if on queue, the door to the homeroom burst open startling the few people who decided to get to school earlier then the rest. Standing in the doorway stood a panting Shinji. The school uniform was in slight disarray from nearly bolting out of bed, and straight to school. Shinji's eyes glance around the room and landed on Asuka's form, it was almost as if it was an automatic reaction that his eyes narrow. Deciding that it would be best if he sat down to avoid any more suspicious looks then he had already received.
Really….Asuka couldn't have cared less if that Idiot decided to come in late and make a complete fool of himself, it wasn't her fault if Shinji was being a complete ass. Opening her eyes, she blinked lazily. Her eyes found their way over to Shinji, crossing her arms angrily and then turned her head. Looking in the opposite direction of Shinji "Hmph!"
Though Hikari on the other hand, looked between Asuka and Shinji…though Shinji did seem in a worse position then Asuka was. Often Asuka would manipulate others to get her way…and if you didn't give into her…she'd only manipulate you more. "Shinji…is something wrong, you're not sick are you?"
Shinji shook his head briefly signaling that he wasn't sick, nor was he feeling any symptoms of an oncoming illness. Looking past Hikari's form, they landed on Asuka's…it sort of pissed him off that she was ignoring him. So what if they got in a fight that didn't mean she had to ignore him till he practically fell off the end of the earth!
With a glare across to Shinji, Asuka turned her head back away from him. She couldn't stand the fact that he always had to do everything with her…always walking to school together, always doing homework or studying together, always left alone in the house when their parents left together…She constantly cursed the fact that their parents worked together, along with the fact that they were next door neighbors.
"You look like you had an eventful morning." She said dully, not bothering to spare him a glance. Oh, she could only imagine the story he had to tell to make her feel terrible.
With a glare back, he pointed an accusing finger at her. "You!" He growled angrily. "I was chased around this damned city by a crazed psycho driver!" He took a breath. "You left me for dead!"
She bit her lip in anger. "Me? I left you for dead? What the heck, you idiot!" She half screamed. "So you think it's my damned fault that you got chased around by someone because I didn't wake you up and escort you to school?" She pounded her fists down onto the table hard before standing up and prancing down the isle in a nervous way. "Oh, look at me! I'm Shinji Ikari and I need a girl to wake me up and make sure I get ready for school! She even has to walk me there or I'll end up dying in some way!" She took in a dramatic intake of breath and put her hand to her forehead.
Hikari, a mutual friend to them both, looked at them in a mildly nervous way. There was no way something good could come from this, not when they were both angry…hell nothing good came out of anything when an angry Asuka was involved. "Um…Asuka?" the female brunette took in a deep breath "I really don't think that's exactly the best thing to do…"
Though Asuka, being the person that she was, ignored Hikari's advice and continued to prance down the isle. The second after Hikari had finished speaking; Kensuke walked through the door, and raised an eyebrow in question.
Shinji, no longer able to sit back and watch as Asuka degraded him any further. Quickly he took two large handfuls of tissue paper from the front of the room. Unbuttoning the top of his school uniform just enough so he was able to shove the handfuls of tissues down his shirt- giving himself fake, lumpy, breasts. He then proceeded to walk down the isle, sashaying his hips as he walked. "Oh! Look at me-", Shinji began, speaking in one…or maybe several octaves higher then a man should speak "-I'm Asuka! I love to act like the Devil, and I'm madly in love with Kaji- who is MUCH to old for me" Sighing dramatically he put the back of his hand on his forehead, as if he was about to feint. No later after he did that, both of his hands went to his cheeks "He is just too hott!"
From the doorway, came laughter. Kensuke was dubbed over, holding his ribs. It was too much for him to handle "S-Shinji stop" he gasped from where he stood, it had gotten to the point where he could no longer support himself and had to rely on the doorframe to hold his weight.
Hikari's eyes darted between Kensuke and Shinji, "hey you two, stop!" something was bound to go wrong, she could feel it…but somehow she had known that neither of them were listening to a word that she was saying.
From where she stood, Asuka's anger could easily be seen. Her face had turned a shade of red from both embarrassment and anger. "Shut up! That's not how I am you idiot!" for a brief moment she thought, her arms crossing over her chest, she turned her head, nose turned upwards into the air. "At least I don't need a girl to wake me up every morning. As for Kaji…He's better then you'll ever amount to be!" Now she was yelling in anger, and before she could think of what she was about to do, she drew her hand back.
A loud smack echoed through out the classroom and everyone froze and turned from what they were doing to Asuka and Shinji in the middle of the room.
Shinji's head was turned to the side, his brown eyes looking to the floor in shock. Never in all sixteen years of their life had she ever hit him, ever! As Asuka's hand slowly left his cheek, a large red handprint was left there in its wake. Slowly he turned his head to look at Asuka, his eyes narrowed. "I need to go use the bathroom" While he spoke to her, his voice was eerily calm. Turning, he walked out of the classroom. Anyone that he encountered while he walked had quickly gotten out of his way.
As for Asuka, she stood in the same spot from where she was. Emotions quickly changing in her eyes as she came to realize just exactly what she had done, breaths coming in short pants before they returned to normal. 'You idiot…now look what you have done' the thought echoed throughout her mind. Sitting down at her desk, she slammed her head down on the hard wood surface. Resting her head on the desk, she blinked back tears.
Behind Asuka, Toji stood with his hands on his hips. Giving her back a friendly slap he couldn't help but give a loud laugh. "Great going Asuka, it seems as if Shinji was pissed more then I've ever seen him! Whoowe! You've done quite a number!" of course, he didn't actually mean to say such harsh words towards such an angry Asuka…but normally he wasn't exactly someone to think before they talked.
To say the least, Asuka wasn't exactly a happy person at the moment, though...though Toji just made it only so much worse. Snapping her head up to look at Toji, a nasty glare in her eyes "Don't touch me, don't talk to me, don't ever come near me monkey boy!" Growling out the words before she turned back and put her forehead back against the surface of the wooden desk.
"Why don't you just say sorry if it bothers you so much?" Hikari asked quietly and kneeled down next to Asuka's desk so she was eyelevel with her red headed friend.
"No! It's that idiot's fault! He shouldn't have started it yesterday! It's only what he deserves!" After her slightly angry explanation, she let out a moan of frustration with an expression that could be clearly defined as one that was a why-do-i-even-bother-with-you type of look.
Toji lent against Asuka's desk, his eyes looking over to both Hikari and Asuka. "Ya know Asuka, sometimes you just have to give up and be the bigger person. You can't always have your way or get the last word in." He was being, well, surprisingly mature…for a few seconds anyway.
From where Asuka sat, her eyes lifted looked up to glare at Toji. 'Can't anyone see that I don't want to be talked to!' the angry thought ran quickly though her head. Growling in frustration, her eye gave an involuntary twitch "shut up, monkey boy! It's none of your business what happens between that idiot and I! Just butt-out! Let him hope about me hitting him!"
"Asuka! That's not fair! It's as much as your fault as it was Shinji's! You should apologize!" Hikari, still kneeling next to Asuka's desk, gave a sigh.
As for Toji, he rested his hands behind his head and looked to the ceiling while contemplating why women were always so god damned difficult to deal with and why he was always being surrounded by the devil herself, Asuka.
Letting out a quiet sigh, Asuka began to think over what they were saying. 'Maybe they were right...maybe I was being a little harsh on him….' She had begun to reconsider hitting him over the fact that he was mocking her just as bad as she was him. It wasn't like she didn't care for him; she did to be completely honest. 'Maybe after lunch, I'll apologize for hitting him.' As an after thought she added, 'but it's still his fault'
A young teenager, about the same age as Shinji, Asuka, Kaworu, and the rest of the junior class…she had elbow length pin straight onyx black hair that was pulled into two low pigtails, as well as bangs that swept over her azure blue eyes, and the forehead of her tanned heart shaped face. "…Shinji? I uh…heard what happened earlier. But you know…you really shouldn't worry about it to much, she's Asuka…the one to get pissed off and terrorize all in her path when angry…It's probably all just a misunderstanding" sitting down next to him, her azure blue eyes look outside of the school windows
Shinji wrapped his arms around his shins as he looked towards his feet, his cheek had stopped throbbing some time ago, and now it was just left left with a fading red handprint. "It doesn't matter. No matter how long we've been friends…she still hates me, Asuka always has"
As quickly as she had come, she had stood up once more and looked down to Shinji, azure eyes sparkling from the sun's reflection. "I've got to get back to class Shinji, but I'll talk to you later and see how things went." Offering Shinji a slight smile, she ruffled his hair with her hand before walking off. She loved Shinji…but not romantically, it was more of the type of love siblings would share.
Wrinkling his nose in annoyance as he felt her hands ruffle his hair, glaring at the floor as she walked away…it was stupid; he didn't do anything to Asuka but state the truth…or maybe stretched it just a little. But she mocked him just as bad as he did her.
Shortly after the five minute warning bell—signaling the start of class sounded, Kaworu walked through the door. Taking his usual seat in front of Asuka, he turned around in his seat and blinked "why is the Devil so calm this morning? I take it that Mr. Ikari is sick?" his voice was full of question as he looked over to the empty desk where Shinji normally sat.
In return Asuka looked up and narrowed her eyes at him. The two of them were never ones that had gotten along before, and she didn't exactly see them getting along in the near future. He had always found a way to poke fun at her, knowing that she wouldn't attack him like she would Shinji "No, that idiot is sulking god knows where because I hit him…"
Looking towards Asuka curiously, Kaworu raised an eyebrow. "You…Hit Mr.Ikari? Why is that? I thought you two were good friends…Friends don't hit friends from what I know of...or did you just loose your temper and decide to take it out on him like usual?" his voice was calm as he spoke.
Eyebrow twitching, she ground her jaw for a moment before answering "I don't take things out on him! He's just always the problem! It's always his fault why I'm mad; if he could just see that and change…maybe I would be nice to the stupid kid!"
Kaworu was about to answer, though he found it rather hard as he found a body suddenly attached to his own person. Hearing quiet laughter from the person behind him, he turned his head to look at Takiko.
Hugging Kaworu from behind, she rest her chin on his shoulder, azure eyes looking over to Asuka "Hey Asuka…I was just talking to Shinji a few minutes ago…he was really upset that you hit him'" tilting her head to the side as she watched Asuka…she had the feint thought that Asuka was bipolar, but perhaps it wasn't the best idea to voice this.
In response Asuka frowned "I don't know what he's so upset about! It's his fault In the first place!" as she spoke she had a low tone of a growl to her voice. Looking up at Takiko…they had been friends for nearly her whole life, almost as long as Shinji and herself…but not quite. "I mean, he's practically blamed ME for him being stalked…he's the lowest person I know! He can't do anything right!" looking down at her desk, she had lied right through her teeth. There was so much he had done for her…she had known him for so long, and these past ten years there had to been at least fifty things he had done on his own. Like…when her father had died, she refused to take it in…and wasn't until Shinji had held her down and told her it was okay had she cried and let it out. Mentally, she shook her head vigorously, trying to get the thought out of the head. "Where is Shinji, anyways…?"
So, that's the end of the first chapter. .
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