MaskedNicci.
Glad you like. Don't know who you were talking about when you said 'is this who I think it is'.
Updated the chapter to rhyme a bit better. Just so you know, this is old work renewed.
It's a bit of and old idea,and it was written before. I'm just rewritting it so that it makes more sense.
My Elphie.
I've already started using your idea. Thanks. And I got MOST of the old chaptsie back. I hope it's as good.
LonesomeGurlAngelofDeath.
The chaptsies are fixed now. Please continue to read. Hopefully, that will never happen again.
chocorose89.
Glad you think my story is interesting, please be more specific on which parts you like and didn't like this time. :)
Bold: CharlesErik, or Charles Phantom.
Italics: GerardErik, or Gerard Phantom.
Underline: MichaelErik, or Michael Phantom.
Normal: KayErik, or Kay Phantom.
Here we go! Chaptsie 3:
((BEGINNING OF CHAPTER))
'Michael' Erik
After
we were in a circle again, I saw the determination look in my friend's
eyes.
Though
I did not know what was next, I knew he would help us. I looked into
the face of my, prey.
What
a shame, she was a beautiful woman. She had a gentle look to her
face.
She
had a face that made smiling look terribly easy. I stroked her gentle face.
She
had hair that was the deepest of ebony, it was tied back with a black
satin ribbon.
Wearing also pair of thick, dark blue pants, and a blood red shirt
that said something in cursive.
Around
her neck was a silver chain with a golden ring on it, along with
something else...
A
small white mask, a replica of my own, in fact. I touch my mask in
realization and smiled.
I
listened into their conversation. I guess I was suppose to be
listening already.
It
was between the good-looking half-masked man, and the one in the
full-mask.
considering
the fact that they both have the same first name. I'll find some way
to address them.
I
don't know how to address them otherwise, they are always talking to
each other.
The
half-mask man with the sword is speaking. He is only really handsome
one here.
I
shall have to address him as something to the effect of his name.
'Charming'. Yes, that will do.
"That is crazy, and it will never work!"
"Sure it will! If done correctly."
"I
do not see how! It doesn't make any sense!" Charming was
trying to speak hush-like. Nice try.
"It
will never work!"
"Not
if you let you continue shouting! Keep quiet! You shall wake her!"
He
went over to Charming, and gave him a shake. She stirred, and they
all looked down at her.
Charming bit his lip.
"Sorry." He leaned over her as he spoke. Then sat up."Are you confident in this plan, monsieur?"
"Right
now I am. Believe me; if we preform this correctly, everything will
be fine." He sounded calm.
Then
again, he is usually calm. I have no idea what he means... I should probably tell them I did not hear.
"Excuse
me? Did I miss something? I am not quite sure what we are doing."
They
froze at my words, and slowly turned in my direction. Charming slowly
opens his mouth.
"Where... Did you... Leave off?" He pronounced every syllable as if it were a different word.
"Most likely... At the beginning." Charming glared at him.
"Okay.
Listen to this: He says that we should--" He is cut off my
her groaning as she wakes.
She
slowly opens her eyes, and stares straight into mine. She seems
dreamy.
"Hello, my Angel. Am I dreaming?" She says dreamily. She has a
beautiful voice.
I
had to tell her the truth, even if it spoils her dream.. I sigh at
the thought.
"No, my dear, I am afraid you are not. This horror is real." I say to her.
"Horreur ? De quelle horreur parlez-vous ? J'ai pensé que c'était un rêve merveilleux.
Mais il est bien mieux savoir qu'il est vrai. " I smiled.
"Parlez-vous
français, mademoiselle?" I said in surprise. If I am lucky
many people will speak French,
and
we shall be in France; in Paris. I can only wish...
"Oui,
monsieur. Bien qu'il ne soit pas habituel ici en Amérique,
j'ai
appris comment parler français quand j'étais jeune.
Aimer cela? " Her accent is a bit off.
"Pardon
moi, mademoiselle, mais… Vous a fait parole juste que c'est…
L'Amérique ?" I asked,
shocked.
I looked over to the others. They exchanged shocked glances.
"Vous
n'avez pas su que vous étiez en Amérique? Je suis
confus, monsieur." she says, slowly.
Her
eyes widen. She looks as if she just came out of a dream, to enter a
nightmare.
"Oh,
for goodness sake, you two! Speak English! People are staring!"
She
slowly turns her head in Charming's direction. She fully inspects my
friends. Her gaze falls back on him.
"I
have seen you, but never in person. You look better in person."She
smiled.
I
saw the left side of his face, the only part visible, turn a light
shade of pink. I smiled.
He
turned from her in his embarrassment. She stood up, went over to him,
and took his obviously larger hand.
"No one has ever told me that I looked good. Especially not better."
She
turned his head to face her. Then, silently, she kissed him on the
cheek.
We stared for a moment, unsure how to react. Why him, anyway?
"Don't be jealous, you guys. He needs it. Hey, you wanna come over? I've got room."
"Really? All of us?" He motioned in our direction. Nice of you to include us, Charming.
"Of
course! I couldn't very well leave ANY of you behind! I've been wait
my whole life...
Well,
almost, to meet all of you! I won't let this opportunity slip away!
Come, come!"
We
quietly followed her. She led us to a strange looking car. It was
black, and shined in the light.
She
frantically told us to get inside, and we got in, worriedly. She
seemed a bit too eager.
She
got us seated, even buckled us in herself. All of us jumped when it
started.
It
was louder than we had expected. She smiled at us, assured us it
would be alright, and drove it.
I
wonder what will happen to us now...
((END OF CHAPTER))
Reviews with compliments are welcome. Reviews with constructive critism are also welcome.
I would like to know if this chaptsie brought them out-of-character. I'm afraid it may come across as a bit cheesy.
