I got ... 2 REVIEWS!!! WOOHOO!!!I feal luvd!!! It's low expications, I tell
you. Anywayz... ummm... here we are... and u8mm... I know the story... so... umm... ON TO
THE REVIEW RESPONCES!!!
...: Nice start, but you really need to work on your spelling. I'm quite sure you meant "betrayal", not "betrail", and "wait" instead of "wait", "piercing" instead of "pearsing", "feeling" instead of "fealing", "devastating" instead of "devistating", "seem" instead of "seam", "interfere" instead of "interfear"... and so many others. It's a bit odd, because your writing style's real nice, it's just your spelling...
Well... You never know... I REALLY can't spell, and I get told for it enough at school. Plz just bare with me. My poor computer dosen't have spell check... :*( Sry 4 the errors.
dark-wolf-soulX : Yay!Me liky the chappie!Anywho, Shippo?Inu Yasha and Kouga betraiyed!I dont know how to spell that...oh well!Im so happy you updated!Cookie for you!Nutha chappie soon pweas!
Read the chapter for the Shippo! I can't spell (note above... ^_^;) COOKIE!!!!!
Ani-chan : I like your fanfics... or storys. They're pretty interesting.
Thankz! I don't think that my other one is as good as this one though...
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Chapter 6!!! New Allainces Pt. IV (AAGGGGHHH!!! But I think it is the last one!!! O_O;)
The ball of fur continued to cry into his shirt.
"Inuyasha!!! I missed you so much!!! I was so worried and scared!!! I thought that you were going to die!!!"
"Shippo?!?"
"Who's Shippo?"
"That little kitsune that used to tagalong with me."
"Ohh..."
Shippo looked up at Inuyasha.
"What happeded to you?"
"What do you mean? And why aren't you with... K-Kagome?"
'It still hurts him to even think abouot her...'
Koga looked at Inuyasha's face as he said her name. He studdered and his eye's narrowed slightly.
'But then again, I can't bame him, I know what it feals like to be betrayed...'
Koga cringed at the last thought.
"WHY AM I NOT WITH KAGOME!?! WHY AM I NOT WITH KAGOME!?! DON'T TELL ME THAT YOU'VE FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY DID TO YOU!?!"
Inuyasha put a han dover Shippo's mouth.
"Sssshhhhhh! I remember all right?"
"Inuyasha!!!"
Shippo cryed into Inuyasha's shirt again.
"How did you know about that?"
"I saw it..."
~*~ (back on the last new moon.)
Shippo heard a loud scream and sat up. He had been asleep when the scream woke him up.
"Kagome? What was that noise?"
He rubbed the sleep from his eyes and wated for Kagome to answer him. When she didn't, he opened his eyes and looked around.
"Kagome! Where are you? Sango? Miroku? Kilala!?!"
"Mew."
"Kilala!?! Is that you?"
Kilala came over and rubed into Shippo in a very cat like manner.
"Oh, Kilala! There you are! But where are the others?"
Another scream cut through the night.
"Kilala! That sounded like... Come on! We've got to hurry!!!"
They rushed to the sorce of the voice. They were about to start down the hill when Kilala pulled Shippo back by the back of the shirt. She pulled him into some bushes.
"Kilala!Aggh!— "
Kilala was in her big form and she softly hit Shippo in the mought with her paw. He was silent and followed her stare.
He looked down the hill and saw Inuyasha being beat up by Mirkou, Sango, and...
"K-Kagome?!?"
Tears slowly began to form in his eyes. Kilala began to growl and wimper. How was she supposed deside between her loving master and her best friend? Inuyasha was trying to fend off his attackers but in his human form he was as good as helpless, the fact that he was tied down to a tree didn't help at all.
"Kilala... What do we do?!?"
Shippo and Kilala watched Inuyasha's torture. Finally they stoped.
"Finally... Th-They stoped... W-Wait!!! What's M-Miroku doing?!?"
Miroku was leaning down near Inuyasha, who had slumped down in exaustion. Miroku stood back up and they all three laughed. It was a cruel, cold laugh that Shippo had only heard from 2 other people, Hiten and Monten (Sp, sorry!) and... demonic Inuyasha.
The sun slowly began to rise.
"Yes!!! Kilala! Now Inuyasha will get his demon strength back!!! Then they will leave him alone..."
Kilala mewed happily.
They were so busy celebrating that they didn't notice what was happening untill they heard the scream.
"What?!?"
They looked back and saw Inuyasha surrounded with a bright pink glow, like the glow of the shekion jewel and of Kagome's miko magic.
Shippo looked at Inuyasha's hair, it was silver, with two dog ears sticking out of his head. Out of his open mouth he saw Inuyasha's fangs.
"What's the matter!?! Why isn't Inuyasha fighting back!?! Oh no!!! Is Miroku... INUYASHA!!!"
Shippo jumped out of the bushes and ran down to Inuyasha, ut he triped halfway down and tumbeled down the hill, he looked up and saw Inuyasha grit agenst the pain and cut through the bonds that held him. The magic stoped and Inuyasha ran deep into the forest behind him. They laughed and watched him run off. Shippo ran past them and looked into the forest, but Inuyasha was too deep for him to see. He turned to Kagome and the others, they had stoped laughing and were looking almost comfused, and... sorry?
"How Could You!?! What did he ever do to you!?! I HATE YOU!!! Come on Kilala!!!"
Kilala ran half way between Shippo and the others. How could she deside? She couldn't.
Kilala wimpered and backed up a bit untill she was beside Sango.
"KILALA!!! Fine!!! I'll juat go after him on my own!"
Then he ran off into the forest, vowing never to go back. He would find Inuyasha, no matter what it took, he just hoped that he wouldn't be too late...
~*~
"I was so scared that I wouldn't find you... Please! Let me stay with you!!!"
Inuyasha looked a bit shocked. He didn't realize that Shippo loved him so much!
"Of-Of course Shippo..."
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-_- Now I'm all depressed for Shippo... O_O, Next chapter Happier!!!
Next chapter:
7 Years Later: The Not-So-Happy Reunion (Hope I spelled that right...)
...: Nice start, but you really need to work on your spelling. I'm quite sure you meant "betrayal", not "betrail", and "wait" instead of "wait", "piercing" instead of "pearsing", "feeling" instead of "fealing", "devastating" instead of "devistating", "seem" instead of "seam", "interfere" instead of "interfear"... and so many others. It's a bit odd, because your writing style's real nice, it's just your spelling...
Well... You never know... I REALLY can't spell, and I get told for it enough at school. Plz just bare with me. My poor computer dosen't have spell check... :*( Sry 4 the errors.
dark-wolf-soulX : Yay!Me liky the chappie!Anywho, Shippo?Inu Yasha and Kouga betraiyed!I dont know how to spell that...oh well!Im so happy you updated!Cookie for you!Nutha chappie soon pweas!
Read the chapter for the Shippo! I can't spell (note above... ^_^;) COOKIE!!!!!
Ani-chan : I like your fanfics... or storys. They're pretty interesting.
Thankz! I don't think that my other one is as good as this one though...
~^~*~^~
Chapter 6!!! New Allainces Pt. IV (AAGGGGHHH!!! But I think it is the last one!!! O_O;)
The ball of fur continued to cry into his shirt.
"Inuyasha!!! I missed you so much!!! I was so worried and scared!!! I thought that you were going to die!!!"
"Shippo?!?"
"Who's Shippo?"
"That little kitsune that used to tagalong with me."
"Ohh..."
Shippo looked up at Inuyasha.
"What happeded to you?"
"What do you mean? And why aren't you with... K-Kagome?"
'It still hurts him to even think abouot her...'
Koga looked at Inuyasha's face as he said her name. He studdered and his eye's narrowed slightly.
'But then again, I can't bame him, I know what it feals like to be betrayed...'
Koga cringed at the last thought.
"WHY AM I NOT WITH KAGOME!?! WHY AM I NOT WITH KAGOME!?! DON'T TELL ME THAT YOU'VE FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY DID TO YOU!?!"
Inuyasha put a han dover Shippo's mouth.
"Sssshhhhhh! I remember all right?"
"Inuyasha!!!"
Shippo cryed into Inuyasha's shirt again.
"How did you know about that?"
"I saw it..."
~*~ (back on the last new moon.)
Shippo heard a loud scream and sat up. He had been asleep when the scream woke him up.
"Kagome? What was that noise?"
He rubbed the sleep from his eyes and wated for Kagome to answer him. When she didn't, he opened his eyes and looked around.
"Kagome! Where are you? Sango? Miroku? Kilala!?!"
"Mew."
"Kilala!?! Is that you?"
Kilala came over and rubed into Shippo in a very cat like manner.
"Oh, Kilala! There you are! But where are the others?"
Another scream cut through the night.
"Kilala! That sounded like... Come on! We've got to hurry!!!"
They rushed to the sorce of the voice. They were about to start down the hill when Kilala pulled Shippo back by the back of the shirt. She pulled him into some bushes.
"Kilala!Aggh!— "
Kilala was in her big form and she softly hit Shippo in the mought with her paw. He was silent and followed her stare.
He looked down the hill and saw Inuyasha being beat up by Mirkou, Sango, and...
"K-Kagome?!?"
Tears slowly began to form in his eyes. Kilala began to growl and wimper. How was she supposed deside between her loving master and her best friend? Inuyasha was trying to fend off his attackers but in his human form he was as good as helpless, the fact that he was tied down to a tree didn't help at all.
"Kilala... What do we do?!?"
Shippo and Kilala watched Inuyasha's torture. Finally they stoped.
"Finally... Th-They stoped... W-Wait!!! What's M-Miroku doing?!?"
Miroku was leaning down near Inuyasha, who had slumped down in exaustion. Miroku stood back up and they all three laughed. It was a cruel, cold laugh that Shippo had only heard from 2 other people, Hiten and Monten (Sp, sorry!) and... demonic Inuyasha.
The sun slowly began to rise.
"Yes!!! Kilala! Now Inuyasha will get his demon strength back!!! Then they will leave him alone..."
Kilala mewed happily.
They were so busy celebrating that they didn't notice what was happening untill they heard the scream.
"What?!?"
They looked back and saw Inuyasha surrounded with a bright pink glow, like the glow of the shekion jewel and of Kagome's miko magic.
Shippo looked at Inuyasha's hair, it was silver, with two dog ears sticking out of his head. Out of his open mouth he saw Inuyasha's fangs.
"What's the matter!?! Why isn't Inuyasha fighting back!?! Oh no!!! Is Miroku... INUYASHA!!!"
Shippo jumped out of the bushes and ran down to Inuyasha, ut he triped halfway down and tumbeled down the hill, he looked up and saw Inuyasha grit agenst the pain and cut through the bonds that held him. The magic stoped and Inuyasha ran deep into the forest behind him. They laughed and watched him run off. Shippo ran past them and looked into the forest, but Inuyasha was too deep for him to see. He turned to Kagome and the others, they had stoped laughing and were looking almost comfused, and... sorry?
"How Could You!?! What did he ever do to you!?! I HATE YOU!!! Come on Kilala!!!"
Kilala ran half way between Shippo and the others. How could she deside? She couldn't.
Kilala wimpered and backed up a bit untill she was beside Sango.
"KILALA!!! Fine!!! I'll juat go after him on my own!"
Then he ran off into the forest, vowing never to go back. He would find Inuyasha, no matter what it took, he just hoped that he wouldn't be too late...
~*~
"I was so scared that I wouldn't find you... Please! Let me stay with you!!!"
Inuyasha looked a bit shocked. He didn't realize that Shippo loved him so much!
"Of-Of course Shippo..."
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-_- Now I'm all depressed for Shippo... O_O, Next chapter Happier!!!
Next chapter:
7 Years Later: The Not-So-Happy Reunion (Hope I spelled that right...)