I have been getting a lot of reviews saying 'weird idea' but they also say they like it. I know my story has a kind of weird plot so I guess I know why they do that.

Chapter 11, snow

ThunderClan

Leader-Firestar

Deputy-Greystripe

Medicine cat- Cinderpelt

Warriors- Mousefur,

Apprentice, Spiderpaw

Cloudtail

Apprentice, Shrewpaw

Brightheart

Shadowflight

Apprentices- Shrewpaw

Spiderpaw

Queens- Goldenflower

Shadowflight opened her eyes. Snow was falling heavily. She was up to her belly in it.

She put out her paw and rolled a little ball. When Cloudtail emerged from the warriors den she whacked it at him.

For a second he was startled. Then he saw Shadowflight and charged over to her. His long white fur camouflaged him well, so he only looked like two staring blue eyes.

Shadowflight tried to move over to him but was met by snow over her back. She leaped forward, bounding over the snow until she reached Cloudtail.

He grinned at her. "Why did you thro that?" He asked.

Shadowflight shrugged. "Wanted to have some fun," She meowed. She reached down and made another snowball and threw it on his face. Cloudtail knocked it off with his paw and looked out around the snow-flooded camp. "Hunting will be hard today," He reasoned.

Shadowflight started to wash the snow off her back. It just made her mouth cold, so she stopped.

She turned to see Firestar bounding toward her.

"Shadowflight!" he called "I want you for-cough cough-a hunting party with Mousefur and ... StarClan!" Firestar moaned, "Ashfur had so many allies in ThunderClan that he toke away everybody!"

Firestar looked around the clearing. Cloudtail and Brightheart where walking over to each other. Mousefur was cleaning herself a little ways away. And Greystripe was talking to Shrewpaw and Spiderpaw.

Shadowflight then noticed just how small the Clan was.

"Go with Mousefur and Greystripe," Firstar finished. "Cloudtail!" He addressed the white tom, "You lead a patrol with Shrewpaw. Brightheart, you stay in the camp with Spiderpaw and me."

Shadowflight plowed her way over to Mousefur and Greystripe. She now looked like a white cat, and so did Mousefur and Greystripe.

Shadowflight followed Greystripe into the forest with Mousefur close behind.

Shadowflight climbed out of camp and onto the forest floor. The ground was covered in a blanket of white. She smiled, savoring the sight. Never before had she seen a snowy forest.

Shadowflight toke a step forward. For a second she fell into a drift, with snow way above her head. She gave a startled yowl, and fought to get to her feet.

Greystripe's head appeared at the edge of the snow hole. "You all right?" He called down.

"Yes." Shadowflight pushed her way through the side of the hole and came out onto land where the snow was only a couple mouse lengths deep.

Shadowflight gazed around at the white forest. Suddenly a movement caught her eye. It was a large white hare which was hopping around, eating frozen drops off a bracken branch.

Shadowflight crouched down and stalked silently up to it. Finally she sprang, and bit its neck quickly.

She buried her rabbit in the snow and then hunted on.

There were a couple of mice gathering seeds from a bush nearby. Shadowflight caught them both and turned around.

Suddenly she felt as if someone was watching her. Instantly her shoulder and neck fur rose. She wrinkled her nose and drew her lips back. She growled a little bit.

Greystripe and Mousefur padded past, but Shadowflight knew it wasn't them who were watching her. She turned around slowly, still growling, and launched herself across the ground with a vicious snarl.

Her claws met the enemy-a tree.

Ready to die with embarrassment, Shadowflight pulled her claws out of the tree. Still, she knew that something other then a tree had been watching her.

She turned around and then froze. A few feet away were a grizzly bear. It was snuffling at a tree, while its two cubs frolicked around it.

Suddenly Shadowflight saw why it was snuffling at the tree, planting its huge paws on the thick trunk.

Skypaw was in that tree.

Shadowflight stood, just frozen with shock as the bear gave the tree a mighty shove. The tree toppled and Skypaw flew out of it with a terrified yowl. The bear scooped him up in her jaws, grunting with satisfaction.

Shadowflight leaped at the bear and dug her teeth into its back. Her claws worked furiously, scratching angrily on the bears back. But the skin was tough and she couldn't draw blood.

The bear suddenly turned around and around quickly a bunch of times, knocking Shadowflight's paws off her grip on the bear. She dug her teeth into the skin harder, mostly for dear life. She suddenly tasted the gush of warm blood.

The bear dropped Skypaw. Its teeth scraped Shadowflight on the shoulder. Its massive paw swung around and whacked Shadowflight on the flank. She fell heavily onto the ground, staining the snow red with her blood.

The bear advanced on the cats, its massive jaws parted to reveal its pointed teeth. It growled.

Shadowflight lay awkwardly on her side. She raised her head and tried to snarl defiance, but she was exhausted. She tried desperately to muster her strength to attack. But suddenly the bear's gaze slid past her. It stood stock still then lumbered by.

Shadowflight turned her head around to see it chasing after a deer, with its cubs trailing after her.

Shadowflight let out a big breath. She lifted her head and looked at Skypaw. He was unconscious and blood trickled from his scruff. Slowly, Shadowflight lowered her head and examined her shoulder wound.

It was the same shoulder Ashfur had injured. The skin had been torn away even farther then before. There was a lot of blood. Shadowflight began to lick it slowly. She had cleaned it a lot before she heard Skypaw start talking.

"Who…saved…me?" He breathed.

Shadowflight scrambled over, wincing when she put wait on her injured shoulder.

"I did," She said.

"Shadowpaw?" Skypaw whispered, "Cinderpelt…told me…you…where dead."

Shadowflight nodded, "I was dead Skypaw. But StarClan toke me back to life."

"Skychaser," he corrected, his voice growing stronger, "I am a warrior…now. Shadowpaw, I don't think I can…make it."

Shadowflight saw that there was a huge wound on his cheek; it was oozing a lot blood.

"Here, let me clean that," she offered.

Skychaser nodded and closed his eyes. Shadowflight bent down and began to lick the wound. She lay down, still cleaning it, until she had cleaned all the blood off.

"Why where you in our territory?" Shadowflight asked, "And I am Shadowflight now by the way."

Skychaser raised his head. "I was going to give Firestar… a message from Leopardstar."

"What was it?" Shadowflight asked.

"Leopardstar wanted me to tell Firestar that he was idiot," Skychaser meowed, "I don't agree with her. I think that Firestar is a great cat."

Shadowflight nodded. "Me too," She mewed.

Skychaser stood up. "Maybe I shouldn't deliver the message. I can just tell Leopardstar that I did, even if I did not."

Shadowflight nodded. "Good idea," She said. But Skychaser didn't go just yet. Slowly he said, "Shadowflight, we could be like you know, friends. I want you to know how much I want to thank you for saving my life."

Shadowflight felt a hot flush spread though her fur. She looked down at her paws. "We can be friends," She meowed, and Skychaser left for his own territory. She felt funny, but she didn't know why at all.

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Cinderpelt settled down to go to sleep. She had received a dream the other night:

Night and water must join together, to fight an enemy bad. The evil spotted tiger wants power over us all.

Strange, she thought. StarClan didn't usually give prophecies with a melodic tone to it.

Cinderpelt fell asleep. She was in a little clearing. Shadowflight and Skychaser where there, black and silver pelts glowing in the moonshine.

Water and night?

Well that's the end of that long chapter. I demand reviews, how do you like Skychaser and Shadowflight? Weird names, I know. Soon the exciting ending will be coming.