Chp.6 is up!

I would like to thank Crain and Me-go-sycho for their comments :)

Back from San Diego XD (I'll tell you a story about I had to eat a larvae in San Diego but, later)

Thanks for the reviews and I fixed the spelling problem...hopefully if not just nag me again so I can do it. :)

Chapter 6 is very short but, I was sidetracked and such...

Summer is almost over but, what ever...

Plus future chapter(s) with guest anime character coming to my stories 'cough'Onizuka'cough'

I'll be writing a longer chapter next time...

Also I decided that to name my chapters because Im tired of seeing chp.1,2,3,4 and so on...

Japanese sucks so endure!

Enjoy!

In a place of magic and swords named a sanctuary land of Arcadia. In Arcadia wizards, knights, farmers, and civilians lived harmony over the kingdom Avalice. For thousands of years goodness purge the land of Arcadia. Until one unforgiven day when a corrupt wizard turned her magic into evil threatning the soils of Arcadia as well as the Kingdom and its people."

Mai was heavily typing in her computer for her 14th fantasy story to fanfiction. net post under the alias Maidreamy . She locked herself in her room secluding her family as she was too self absorb on her story:The Heroes of Avalice.

Under the chaos Queen Yuuki called out two great warriors to battle the blonde vixen. The first warrior was a Sorceress of light that no other magic user can compare to her height of knowledge and beauty, her name was Milady Mai . The other was a valiant knight who wears a white armor said to be blessed by the Gods who protect Arcadia. He wields the almighty Pursol, a sword that could split the sky and the heavens. His swordsmanship is unmatched and undefeated and not to mention very handsome. His name was Sir Nic. Together they venture across the dreaded plains and mountains that where taken by the darkness. There goal was to stop the Evil Witch Sara.

Mai was rubbing her hands in a evilly matter. She wanted her as the villain for sweet revenge for hugging Nicholas. "That will teach her to go hugging my future boyfriend." She couldn't wait to go to the romancing that Milady Mai and Sir Nic would share. Her intentions was that one day that Nicholas would happen to stumble to her story and realize the author: me and then proclaim his love for me. " I wonder if he even has a computer..." She stopped thinking about that and continued to her far fetch story.

Battling ogres and saving villages frequently , Sir Nic feared that his battle with the evil blonde would never take place. Her companion saw the sadness of the white knights eyes and she spoke, " As long as we have each other and the will to live we can overcome any obstacles and defeat the Witch." For the moment he gave out a unique smile to her and the urge to battle has risen again. Seeing another village being under attack they both charged chivalrously. Their bonds soon grew closer as in a open campfire they would huddle near each other with one blanket in the night. One day during battle against a horde of golems sent by the Evil Witch Sara to foil their plans of liberating the land from her. Sir Nic looked upon Milady Mai and noticed that his heart felt that is if it where burning in flames. It then dawns upon him that he was in love with the sorceress. The sorceress too took a glance at him as he easily slain a demon gnome with his Pursol she left that her magic grew stronger whenever she thought of him. Could it be that she felt the arrows of love too?

Mai was smiling brightly as she always fancied the romance part even though she never told anyone. As she typed more romance mush in her story her mother called to her she was patiently waiting for her daughter to eat at least something for dinner. "I'll be down in a half an hour Okaasan!"

"That's what you said half an hour ago!"

She didn't another reply as she was too busy typing up again while eating pocky from her secret stash. The mother just gave in and left her portion of the food in the microwave if she ever decided to come downstairs.

Soon they where close to their destination a black large tower surrounded by molting lava. Before they step forward in his heart he felt that this maybe his last battle and he wanted to tie up loose ends that he never manage too. He grabbed her hand before proceeding and said. " Milady Mai before we engaged in battle I must have some thing to say." Soon both their hearts become racing quickly. "I love you..." Her eyes widened as she too felt the same. "I love you too." Together they shared a long passionate kiss. Sir Nic broke off the kiss. "If we live one after this battle would...would you marry me?" The question blew the sorceress out of her mind. Sir Nicholas felt that the question was too sudden and was about to apologize. "Yes..." She said softly to his ears as a tears came out of her eyes. "Now lets finish what we both started." And the two lovers marched on to the tower. Thankfully there was a long, old, shaky bridge leading to the tower. Milady took one look at the bridge and said "screw it" and with a few chants summoned a magic circle capable of lifting both of them safely across the lava. Upon entering more hordes of demons swarmed against them. As they fought their ways up the stairs till they reach the main chamber. Inside leeched a sultry voice. "Congratulations on making this far but, I believe that your fighting is wasted as today you two shall perish from my might!" Evil Witch Sara proclaimed. The two were not scared by her words as they know that they would defeat her.

The fight was ferocious as Evil Witch Sara was summoning phantom knights with blazing swords towards our heroes. Non the less Sir Nic dispose the phantom menaces as the Witch and the Sorceress were dueling with magic. It was clear that they where equally matched in magic but, Milady Mai decided to end this. She summoned her greatest spell. A large magic circle was underneath Evil Witch Sara and soon she couldn't move a muscle. "You hag what have you done too me!" She screamed budging herself free from the spell. "I have stop you with the Athos Circle you could neither move or cast spells as it restrict you from." She gave a faint smirk to the witch. "Sir Nic quickly give the final blow to end this darkness!" Without hesitation the white knight charged to the helpless witch and with one fell swoop stab the chest with great force.

Mai though for a moment if she thought she was over doing it with a death scene. Then she remembered the moment when she saw her with him. ALONE! "Nah its ok." She smiled happily.

"The evil had disappeared in the face of Arcadia and the Kingdom of Avalice is safe from harm. A royal wedding was held in celebration of Sir Nic, The White Knight, and Milady Mai, the Sorceress. Together they lived a happy life in the land they saved."

"Finish!" She said of her achievement. She then sent it fanfiction. net to hoping for Nicholas to read it and having people how great her story is. With that she left the computer and went to eat her cold dinner as millions of writers and readers online read it. When she entered back she noticed that she has 4 reviews already not to mention 58 hit in the past hour. Proudly she check the reviews.

HotGlasses(Yuuki): Yay! Im a queen...Don't you think that your story is too...Unbelievable...I mean nice action and all but, killing a rival? Do I hint jealousy? Hehe see ya at school!

"Of course it's unbelievable! It's a fantasy!"

BlazingWriter(Nicholas but, she doesn't know that): Ummmm it's hard to say but I think it was ok...no matter how cheesy it may be plus the ending sucked.

"Who do you think you are? My stories are excellent not ok or cheesy." Mai said.

TheBuddha(Nishimoto): Needs guy on girl action...or girl on girl action.

She just left silent and decided to hit Nishimoto tomorrow.

ScarletPen(Sagano): Why don't I help you with your boy problem and ask him to ask you out? It's better then slaying a witch?

"If you do that Sagano I will beat you repeatedly with my fan until talking is painful for you!...But I wish I can go out with him but, how..." She then went to a deep thought on how to ask him out with out really asking him out. "Hmm there is one more..."

HolyGirl(Sara, but she doesn't know that also): I found it wonderful to see a epic tale of love... it made my heart throb! I was kinda disappointed of the villains name because...I think you could have a more creative name other then...Sara... Other then that it was a great story hope you keep on the good work!

"Finally someone to see my work appreciated thank you HOLYGIRL." She smiled in triumph though little did she know.

Mai knows Yuuki's, Nishimoto's, and Sagano's Pen Names but, not Nicholas or Sara's

and how all of them are reading the same stories is beyond me. Hehehe...

Also that i cant put fanfiction. net correctly together without disapearing.

Give me your thoughts :)